2D Artwork: TFA Optimus says THUMBSUP PLZ

Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Art' started by PurpleBumblebee, Oct 9, 2009.

  1. PurpleBumblebee

    PurpleBumblebee DeepPurple Fembot

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    Well, i'm really making an effort to draw these guys again. I chose my TFA Optimus as my model for last night's drawing.
    Inked with a copic inking pen, the rest is graphite. Critique plz? I know I hate his left arm and his head is a little too fat. And his axe I want to rip off, lol.
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  2. batcam11

    batcam11 SHINIGAMI CHOP!!!

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    i like the figure overall but the head doesnt look anything like the Animated one but the guy is perfect:thumbs2: 
     
  3. Attacker_Prime

    Attacker_Prime Optimus Prime forever

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    That's good! :thumb 
     
  4. PurpleBumblebee

    PurpleBumblebee DeepPurple Fembot

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    I freakin' LOVE your avatar <3 Soundwave FTW.
     
  5. Superquad7

    Superquad7 We're only human. Super Mod

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    I think your overall piece has a great character to the line and shading work. Also, I think you did a great job with depicting the figure. I'll mention something, and I feel it's good and bad at the same time: the head. The bad: it's not exactly "Optimus Prime"; the good: it's not Optimus Prime! You could make it into another character :) 

    Anyways, thanks for sharing! I hope we see more from you! :thumb 
     
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  6. Venksta

    Venksta Render Project Creations TFW2005 Supporter

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    I think it looks pretty good. Like the head design. :) 
     
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    Night Flame TFW2005 Supporter

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    Nice. Definitely has the vibe of the figure right, and the different looking face adds something to it too.

    As someone just now discovering the joys of graphite and ink, I gotta say I really like this.
     
  8. PurpleBumblebee

    PurpleBumblebee DeepPurple Fembot

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    Thanks so much everyone! I've got a few more I need to scan in. I wish I had some copics -.-
     

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