TFA: a world without prime

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  1. side wave

    side wave Well-Known Member

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    basically it's an idea ive had in my head for a while. and the title is a dead giveaway of the plot line or maby not?

    please comment after each chapter
     
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    Let's hear it...read it!
     
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    CHPT 1

    swindle was on board his ship tinkering with a device he was going to auction. he knew exactly what it was the only question was how much it will sell for, the vok were interested in purchasing it to erase one of their past experiments, and there surly would be other bidders for such a fine item. swindle was finishing the final touches to the device, all he needed to do was insert the allspark fragment to enhance it's capabilities.

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    later on in a cave whose location is disclosed the bidding started, there were over a dozen bidders franticaly coming up with bigger bets from upgrades to rare devices and parts.
    "so we have the vok bidding with several dilithium reactors 'going once! going TWICE!-"
    before swindle could slam the hammer on the auction a hooded figure bidded several allspark fragments. seeing the fragments in-hand brought swindle to excitely shout, " SOLD! SOLD! a thousand times sold!, you my friend have won yourself this fine gem of machine, a fully automated, fully functioning T.V.G! that's a Time Vortex Generator! lasts a lifetime or your money back!" And with that swindle handed the device into the techno-organic hands and thus sealing the fate of one cybertron's finest!
     
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    CHPT 2

    1000 stellar cycles ago?

    Optimus Prime and Elita-1 were on top of a pile of energon, surrounded by 'alien spiders' and had just knocked over an energon cube causing it and the other stock piles to combust. Using grapplers to pull themselves up something went wrong! Something had pushed Sentinal down through the hole, crashing into Optimus, sending them both hurtling down into the epicentre of the explosion and Elita was about to join them as her copied ability of Primes grapplers was wearing off! But instead of falling to her fate Elita found herself being pulled up by webbing. Once she had got to the top there was no sign of anyone? So she thought for a secound about going back for Optimus and Sentinal but then all of a sudden the hole was sealed in giving her answer. So she ran on out of the cave not noticing the 'techno-organic' being she was supposed to become!
    "YES! I have done it! I should now be cured when I return!", shouted blackarachnia at the enjoyable feeling of accomplishment and of the fact that she should be normal once she returns.
     
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    chpt 3: outside of timestream, present day.

    Vector Prime, keeper of space and time was viewing different universe's and alternate timestream's. Some of the ones he view at the moment were quite odd! A universe where the Decepticons were good and the Autobots were evil, one where Megatron had been sent to oblivion by an 'all powerful cube', and then a universe where Optimus Prime was of a much lower rank. "How odd?", said Vector as he never had never viewed such strange circumstances, BUT! Something odd was happening to the last universe it began the image on the screen began to wrap and twist, Vector gasped! He could feel it in his spark what was happening! Someone has caused a major disruption of their main time stream. Vector knew he would have to act fast to undo the disruption before it tampers with the rest of space-time.

    now comment time.
     
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    :drool:  HE RULES!!!!!!!!
     
  7. Anodythe

    Anodythe Well-Known Member

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    Oooooooo serious! The world just can't do withour Ooptimus! No how, no way...VP has to move fast on this one. I would like to see BA re-reformated, but not at that cost.
     
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    Chpt 4: Axiom Nexus

    Vector was wandering through the slums of the Axiom Nexus, he was searching for a crew to accompany him, because not even he knew how bad the disruption was and didnt want to take any chances.
    He wandered for a few cycles until he came across an inn known as Maccadams. An old friend of his owns the place and has a crew ready for him as a favour. He entered the bar, it was dimly lit and had oil stains on the wall from past and recent bar fights. It was full of bots drinking there woes away, not exactly the best place for 'one of the thirteen' to be.
    He was aproached by one of the bartenders, he was a bit gruff looking and had battle marks from a war. The bartender escorted Vector round the back, saying, "Here be the crew ye requested."
    There were about six of them. Two of them immediatly recognised Vector.

    "Vector! is that you?"

    Vector responded, "Hotshot! Jolt! what in Primus are you doing here?"

    "Long story-short, we fell into a interdemensional portal! And basically weve been here about nearly month. But besides the point it's good to see you!"

    The other's were by the names of Overload, Sunstreaker, Warpath and Rattrap, who really didnt have a clue as to why they were gathered, same with Hotshot and jolt.

    "Hello...! Why are we in this dinjy old wreck? Its messing with my wax!"

    "Is this gona be dangerous cuz i don wana die!"

    "Are we gona get to do some kaplowin! Cuz im ready to get some action"

    Vector gave them an answer, "I have summoned you all here because i need a crew to help me explore a universe that has suffered a major time disruption, and i need to find the cause of the disruption and undo the wrong before it affects the rest of the Multiverse! Any questions or queries?"
    "Were all gona die arn't we!"
     
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    Chpt 5: Detroit

    It was night, the streets of Detroit were quite. There was the ocasional scurrying of a rat but that was about it. In the middle of a street there was what seemed like a green misty tear in the fabric of space-time, but as it eventually widened it revealed several figures, as soon as they emerged the portal closed.

    "Hhmm, I have pinpointed the source of the disruption but it appears to be moving?
    HOTSHOT! you, Jolt and the others track it on foot! I will track it from air", said Vector, he wanted to get the job done as soon as possible before too much damage is caused.

    And with that they transformed and departed, Vector had the upper hand with his airieal alt-mode. He was tracking it with precision, BUT! He wasnt the only one in the air. He suddenly found himself under fire from two decepticons, Blitzwing and Lugnut.

    "Ooooooooo! look aht ze pretty spayship letz make zit go by-de-byyy!" said Blitzwing who had found the intricate markings and the complexity of the spaceship facinating, that is to blow up.

    Within seconds there was a hail storm of laser fire causing heavy damage to vector's exterior armour,BUT! Before he could try a counter attack his thrusters gave way and found himself plumeting at a fast rate. He had managed to transform but the force's pulling him to the ground would not allow him to reach for his sword so he could teleport away from the populated area. He knew he wouldnt survive, his life was about to flash before his optics, But wait! he knew he should have hit the ground by now but his sensors wernt picking up any contact with the ground, it was then he realised he was in a magnetic field, which was slowly bringing him down. And as soon as he landed he saw five shadows before him but his optics could not register them as he drifted into stasis lock from his injuries. as he drifted off his audio receptors picked up, "come on ratchet lets get him back to base for repaires......."
     
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    chpt 6: autobot base

    vector awoke, he was in a room, it was old and appeared as though it was part of a car factory.
    "you know, i havn't repaired such an outdated model since i was assigned to kup's platoon at the battle of tyger pax, and i mean compared to kup this bot is extremly outdated, his servos and other functions are mostly gears, plus im picking up a warp risidual from his sword!."
    the voice was coming closer to the room, vector pretended to go into stasis as he did not know if these were bots or cons.

    ratchet entered the room, he was taking a last diagnostic. the black and bronze autobot appeared to be stable. "well time to get you online soldier!", before ratchet could do so, vector had lept up, ratchet pointed his electro-magnets at vector then asked, "well since your up, maby you would so kind as to identify yourself?"

    "only if you identify yourself first!"

    "well im not going to identify myself until you identify yourself!"

    "well same here!"

    the two growled at each other it lasted a few seconds then two bots entered the room
    "hey ratchet, were gona need repairs here...!", said bulkhead, who then suddenly noticed the two bots growling at each other.
    bumblebee noted, "uh, well just wait until you two old geisers are done growling at each other!"
    still pointing his electro magnets at vector, ratchet asked, "so when will the others get back?"
    bumblebee answered, "the bossbot, prowl and sari will be back soon, they're still kicking some decepticon skid plate."
     
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    Nice! OH...I just had a horrible thought...well I will wait to read what you have. Maybe it's just old programming! Anxiously waiting the next installment! :popcorn 
     
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    chpt 7: Detroit.

    The group of Autobots were tracking the signal in alt-mode as they did not want to atract any attention when from out of now-where a webbed energy net had had trapped them and began to drain there fuel reserves.
    Rattap had managed to escape only to come face to face with a large robotic spider.

    "Ah man, im gona die!"

    Rattrap began to dodge the legs of the spider which began to dart down like spears, he managed to dodge them and then ran down an alley hoping vector or some Autobot would save his team.

    The robotic spider transformed revealing a heavily scarred and muscular robot. The Decepticon spoke, "Your trapped now Autobot scum! Your furry friend cant help you now, for I, Turantulas! will use you to bargin with the other autobots, your lives for the Allspark!"

    Hotshot and co. couldnt transform, and they were all getting close to stasis lock! As Jolt was slowly passing out he could see three figures off in the distance....
     
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    chpt 7 continued:

    Rattrap watched the action unfold, three bots, one of them 'ninja like', the other 'yellow and blue,' and a 'human sized bot' charged at Turantulas. The fight was quick, the 'ninja bot' had stabbed Turantulas in the legs with the shurikans, The 'human sized bot' had pounded Turantulas in the face with an energon hammer. The 'yellow bot' hesitated at the sight of Turantulas as though it almost mirrored an experience that never happened, and was almost trapped until the net was shot down by Rattrap, who came out of the alley in robot mode. After a few minutes Turantulas escaped and the trapped Autobots, were now free but barly awake!
    Prowl spoke, "Thank you for your assistance uhh....-"
    "Rattrap! but less about me, what about my team mates?"
    Elita-1 replied, "we'll will need to get them back to base so ratchet can do repairs! But the only problem is transporting them!"
    Rattrap mentioned about Jolts short-range teleporting ability but doubted he could do it as he was weak along with the others. Then Elita-1 went up towards the small red minicon and laid her hand on his shoulder, downloading his teleportation ability. She answered Rattrap, "No problem i should be able to get them back to base."
    And with a flash of light they were all gone.
     
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    chpt 8

    Within seconds the group had appeared at the autobot base, but to be exact, directly ontop of Vector and Ratchet.

    Bumblebee and Bulkhead rushed to help the others up. Bumblebee asked sari, "Uhh whats with all the blocky and strange bots piled on top of to old bots who both obviously have one survo in the scrap heap?"
    Sari replied, "I dont know!"

    Ratchet, freeing an arm had grabbed a lump of metal and threw it at Bumblebee's head.
    Once Elita-1 got up she said, "I was just wondering the same thing?" Elita would soon wish she hadn't asked!

    after about an hour once the bots had been repaired, Vector had given his tale of events, like how he is one of the thirteen, and of the time disruption which had affected this universe in way that resulted in the dissapearance of optimus prime. When the last part was mentioned Elita began to act Nervous! Vector sensed the time disruption was linked to her and began to ask, "You wouldnt happen to have been a friend of Optimus? for i have viewed many universe's where an Elita-1 and an Optimus Prime where 'GOOD FREINDS?'" A few of the younger bots began to chuckle a bit.
    Elita face turned purple with embarrasement. She bit her lip nervously, she was glad she could do so without feeling a bit of pain. Sari noticed and asked, "Whats wrong with answering a simple question like that, UNLESS...!" Sari began singing a song that Bumblebee ended up joining in as well, "ELITA AND OPTIMUS SITTIN IN A TREE K.I.S.S.I.N-"
    Elita interupted, "OK! Fine. I once knew Optimus, we were good freinds but he was killed in an energon explosion on a far off world!" She stared daggers at Sari, as she was as annoying as she was in the-
    Vector was studying her expressions, he could see clearly that she was hiding something else! That maby this Elita had memories of the alternate timeline. Vector knew he would have to find out soon if he was to stop the time disruption before it tore this universe apart!
     
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    chpt 9: nightfall

    while the other autobots headed to their quarters for a stasis nap. vectors group were situated in the main part of the building. they were gathered round in a circle to hear what vector had to say.
    sunstreaker moaned, "this better not take long? for i need my beauty sleep!"
    hotshot told sunstreaker to shut up. then asked vector, "so you think this elita-1 is linked with the time disruption vector?"

    vector replied, "indeed! she is definitaly hidding something, because when i viewed this universe before th disruption the earth-autobot commander was optimus prime. ill try in the morning to get some more information out of her. but in the meantime... jolt, safegaurd, keep an eye on her!"

    jolt yawned, "aw, do we have to?"
    vector starred at him giving him his answer. and with that jolt and safegaurd tiptoed down the corridor. trying not to make too much noise.
     
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    CHPT 10:

    jolt and safegaurd hid themselves under a crate and fastened a listening device to the wall, now they had to carry out their task which was easy enough.

    they waited inside the crate for a few hours until they heard something! it was elita-1! she was talking to herself, or at least thats what she thought!

    "damn'it! i thought i could get away with some tampering of the timestream and now i have one of the thirteen hanging around me, waiting for me to slip up! well, it's a good thing i remembered to pack a few viles of venom for just the emergancy!"
    elita walked out out of the room, only to be followed by the crate, she would occasionally turn her head around only to notice the crate being in a different location.
     
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    CHPT 11

    jolt and safegaurd almost made it until the crate came to a thud, they slightly lifted the crate to see a pair of human feet followed a pair of large yellow feet in front of them.
    the crate disappeared before them revealing bumblebee and sari.

    "so what were you to pervatrons doing in the boss-bots quarters?", asked bumblebee, who was secretly hoping it had something to do with a camera.

    jolt gasped, dare he reveal to the two bots what he and safegaurd had heard?
    he nervously replied "uh! uhh! I uhh.... i got report back to vector!" jolt and safegaurd vamoosed before things got more suspicious.
     
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    chpt 12

    when the two minicons reached the main area of the factory building, they noticed most of vectors crew along with ratchet crowded around one area, the two minicons looked up to hotshot, jolt with some curiosity asked hotshot, "whats going on?"

    hotshot answered solomly, "we all awoke from stasis nap to find vector in stasis lock, ratchet says that it was some kind of poison and due to his age, his systems arnt that up to scratch with combating it!"

    the two minicons were about give hotshot the datacon with the information they had obtained when elita came up behind them along with bumblebee and sari, looking down at them not concerned with what was going on. she said, "from what a little bee has told me, you two little pervbots were taking recordings of me in my quarters!" she then noticed the small datacon and snatched it from them. "wouldnt want this to get in the hands of some innocent young bot. Bumblebee gave a slight moan when the datacon was crushed along with what he thought was on it. before jolt could say something elita gave a look of menace to the two minicons. jolt understood what message elita was trying to get across to the two minicons.
     
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    chpt 12 continued

    "I will need a sample of the poison if I am to cure him, but the only question is, where is the source?", said Ratchet, he was giving his diagnosis.

    Prowl made a suggestion, "Perhaps it was Turantulas! He must have placed a traking device on one Vectors group. And he did swear that he would find our base sooner or later!"

    Hotshot enthusiastically said, "Well, what are we waiting for! Lets find this Turantulas guy!"
    Rattrap then said, "Hey kid! I once did battle against a Turantulas and if hes the same in this univoise as the one I knew, hes gona be a tough one if you know what I mean!"

    Before the group could roll out Elita intervened, "Why should we even help them, for all we know they could be decepticon spy's?"

    Sari ansewered ,"because freedom's the right of all sentient being's or something like that!"

    "Well then, Autobots I command you to stay back!"

    Ratchet then argued, "Listen, if we dont find the source of the venom that bot in their is going to die! And im not going to let some snot-nosed accadamy bot refrain me from doing my job!"

    Elita began to fell angery and nervous, and her hand was shaking with rage. She was losing control of the situation.
    "FINE! But to make sure that they'll come back two of them will have to stay back! And I know just which two!"
     
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    chpt 13:

    while the others went out to search for turantulas jolt and safegaurd were chosen to stay behind, being monitored by elita-1.

    "you wont get away with this!", huffed jolt.

    elita replied with a smirk, "oh realy! then tell me, which one of us has a vile of poison that is lethal eneough to deactivate two small cybertronians!"

    "think about the imbalance you have caused in the time-space continuim!"

    "listen here shorties im not going back to that cave just so that i will become that freak!"

    "and what kind of freak would that be?"

    "i dont have to answer that!"

    then elita grabbed the two minicons and went into the room where vector lay un-conscience. she was about to download the ancients bot's time and space abilities, despite the minicons warnings!

    "dont do it!, you wont be able to handle that kind of power, he was specially chosen by primus himself to hold that ability, no one else can!"

    elita didnt listen she went straight ahead and downloaded the ability.
    "you see, i can handle the downloa-"

    there was a large release of bright energy, elita shrieked with terror! she dropped the two minicons and after the final burst of energy she fell to the ground, her appearance repeatedly shifting every few minutes from elita-1 to blackarachnia and back....
     

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