TF: Shadowpast...

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  1. Decrosse

    Decrosse Active Member

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    Well, I have been around here for awhile, just haven't posted...

    Decided to attempt my own little comic story,
    so here it is. Excuse the flash, had to use it or couldn't see the toys...
    This is my first time doing this...


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  2. DilaZirK

    DilaZirK Is bullheaded.

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    Ngah? I'm afraid even with the flash, I still can't see the toys...

    What camera are you using?
     
  3. Decrosse

    Decrosse Active Member

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    an hp photosmart 120, is the only camera i have, isn't good with up-close pics... though this one isnt going to last much longer, it's getting old.
    i also messing around with gimp...
     
  4. bryan_too

    bryan_too is Deadpool

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    I would suggest staying with the normal pics. The pics right now are too saturated and my eyes hurt from it. Also, improve on the dialogue placement. It's kind of outta place. Other that that, I think it would work out well. :thumb 
     
  5. Decrosse

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    thx, I think I'll use MS Paint for dialogue placing...


    here are the origional images before the editting and dialouge, excuse the floor I cleaned it only after taking these pictures...


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  6. NotAnAutobot

    NotAnAutobot Jus' makin' some comics..

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    What Barricade is that?
     
  7. Decrosse

    Decrosse Active Member

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  8. Decrosse

    Decrosse Active Member

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    i haven't forgotten about this...
    here's just some random pics with some of my transformers toys (that will most likely appear in comic), until i get new batteries for my camera (which will be soon).

    "Family Time"

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    Toys
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  9. NotAnAutobot

    NotAnAutobot Jus' makin' some comics..

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    For having Minutes to Midnight, you automatically win in my book.
     
  10. Deviant Anomaly

    Deviant Anomaly Obsotted Fangirl

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    I would pull back to a range the camera is comfortable with and try to eliminate the blur that's happening. It will also help difuse the flash a bit so its not washing out the figures. The unedited versions look better to me as well.

    Gold star for effort. Keep experimenting and you'll soon find what works. :) 
     
  11. Decrosse

    Decrosse Active Member

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    thanks, and i will experiment some more even though this camera has a limit on how many pics can be taken at a time... meanwhile waiting for the batteries, here is

    a spoof with bumblebee picture:
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    that cat out of the 3 is the one i have to keep away from my toys.
     
  12. Decrosse

    Decrosse Active Member

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  13. Fez Findie

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    Why, that sure feels like quite a party XD

    Any reason for why Barricade seems to be all by himself?
     
  14. Decrosse

    Decrosse Active Member

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    nope. they're just standing at where they start on the board.

    A new recruit...
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    "Double Trouble?"
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  15. Decrosse

    Decrosse Active Member

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    Finally, I can do my "real" comic now that I've gotten a new, better camera. (gotten it some days ago) this not my first comic though...

    anyways, here it is... a bit long, sry
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  16. Z.U.D.O.N

    Z.U.D.O.N Camshaft's Master

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    Hoo-boy... I couldn't understand much from the first chapter. @_@ But great work with the new camera. :) 

    Not so bad for a first attempt. :)  I see you're still learning the arts of photo comics, so good luck ;)  Waiting for more ^^
     
  17. Otispq

    Otispq Elocution Onymous

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    This last one was really good, I am quite amused at the kiddie-bots. Megatrons reaction to them was good to.
     
  18. Deviant Anomaly

    Deviant Anomaly Obsotted Fangirl

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    Frenzy as an alien police dog. :lol 

    Yes, Prime. Tell us a story. :) 
     
  19. Coolhand

    Coolhand Spiff's Stunt Double

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    First of all, the Frenzy-dog is a great touch.

    And secondly: Story-tellin Prime! Cool!
     
  20. Dropshot

    Dropshot Transform your destiny

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    I'm thinking the same exact thing.
     

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