Tf movie:tfs do it there way

Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by Ironhide2005, Apr 16, 2007.

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  1. Ironhide2005

    Ironhide2005 PS3tag=DeaDPooLTFW

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    Hi this is my first comic strip and I promise it will get better
    1#:Optimus gets pissed off
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    Optimus:Where the f#@% is jetfire with the movie designs
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    Jetfire: Ummmm.............. I don't think you want to see this oh and I forgot the donuts I got soy which is more helther
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    Optimus: Stop trying to shove that hippie crap down are throughs
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    Jetfire: This is bumblebee's design
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    Jetfire:This is Ironhide's design
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    Jetfire: Thats Ratchet's design
    [​IMG] Jetfire:thats Jazz design
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    Jetfire:And thats you Prime
    [​IMG] Optimus: Thats it were making are own version period but first we must destroy michael bay
     
  2. Ironhide2005

    Ironhide2005 PS3tag=DeaDPooLTFW

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    Heres the secound comin right now
    2:They find MBay
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    MBay:Who the f@#% are you get the f@#% out of my house
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    All:You should have not have f@#%ed with us know youre dead
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    MBay:What the f@#% are you talking about
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    Optimus:You screwed up transformers you prick
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    Mbay:Transformers is some thing I created you dip s%#^s now get out of here!
    [​IMG] Optimus:aren't going to live any longer to screw up anything else
     
  3. Ironhide2005

    Ironhide2005 PS3tag=DeaDPooLTFW

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    3:Ironhide the movie director!?
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    Ironhide:Hangover so bad gawd hey prime what are you doing
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    Optimus:Looking for a director for the movie where doing about us
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    Ironhide:I thought that jack a$$ michael bay was doing it
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    Optimus:We killed everyone who was working on the movie
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    Ironhide:All right I'll do it wheres the crew and cast
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    Optimus:Look around we are
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    Ironhide: Lets get working
     
  4. y2jversion1

    y2jversion1 Rent this space today!

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  5. Ironhide2005

    Ironhide2005 PS3tag=DeaDPooLTFW

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    Thanks I don't have time to do more today but its gonna get funnier.
     
  6. Lord Megatron

    Lord Megatron FFFF

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    #1. I love how you censor fuck but don't censor prick, which can be much more offensive. If you're going to censor yourself, do it all or not at all.

    #2. What the hell? Is... is there a point to this? Other than hating on the movie desgins?

    #3. Your little "crusade" against Mr. Bay has been done already, and far suepriorly to this pile of crap. Please, get an original idea.

    #4. In fact, go get some funny. This is not entertaining at all.
     
  7. y2jversion1

    y2jversion1 Rent this space today!

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    That time of the month for Lord Megatron :rolleyes2 
     
  8. Squishy

    Squishy the squishy one

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    Honestly, Lord Megatron's rant was funnier.
     
  9. Poho

    Poho That's MISTER Poho to you

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    i really don't know what to say. so i'll say nothing. except pancakes. ill say pancakes. but as to what i think about this comic...it's best i dont speak. although it did make me chuckle.
     
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    jourdo TFW2005 Supporter

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    Hey, it is a start.
     
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    Not funny. At all.
     
  12. Eric

    Eric Per sempre marciamo.

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    I've seen pretty dumb comics in my time, but these...aren't funny. Not even a chuckle. I'm sorry, but these comics SUCK.
     
  13. Grimlock_13

    Grimlock_13 Reformed Geewunner

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    Keep trying man:) 
     
  14. Poho

    Poho That's MISTER Poho to you

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    is there any way we can keep the criticism constructive so that we don't make this guy feel ashamed and like nobody likes him? just because you have experience at making funnies doesnt give you the right to pass such harsh judgement. my first funnies weren't that great either, but you have to start somewhere.

    quit being jerks. people on this forum are supposed to be nice to each other.
     
  15. SPLIT LIP

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    I like him, I just don't like his comics.
    Seriously, I think the jerkness was not called for, but I completly agree.

    I would suggest text bubbles for your next comic Ironhide2005. HOWEVER, I seriously doubt you have the funny "factor" that the other comic makers here do.

    So, and don't take this the wrong way, but I think you should quit while your ahead.
     
  16. Hobbes-timus Prime

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    Here's some constructive criticism:

    I think this story would work better as a prose piece. You obviously don't have the resources to create original pics (I don't either) and the inconsistencies in the art hurt the story (G1 Cartoon Prime, to Classics Prime, to Masterpiece Prime) and seem to force jokes you might not have ordinarly used (Ironhide's hangover).

    It's a good idea, and there's some good material in here to be minded, but the format you've chosen really gets in the way of it all.
     
  17. soundblastc44

    soundblastc44 CAPS MASTER...OH YEAH

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    ........


    [see,s michal bay crying]


    ..............spechless:thumbdown  :thumbdown 


    [tied of people chewing out Bay...when they couldnt make a better movie if their life depended on it]


    ..... very bad taste 1/10
     
  18. DilaZirK

    DilaZirK Is bullheaded.

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    I'm with the stuffed tiger.
     
  19. Seth Buzzard

    Seth Buzzard R.I.P. Buzzbeak Content Contributor

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    1. Constructive criticism FTW
    2. Calling people jerks is bad.
    3. Leaching images from other people is bad; please host your own images next time.
    4. I’m not happy with how this thread is going at all and am disappointed in more then 2 of you so I’m locking it. Ironhide2005 feel free to try again but host your own, I will be watching.
     
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