Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Fiction' started by drrockso20, Mar 27, 2009.
first chapter will be posted later and I am open to ideas if you have any send them to me via PM
since I'm still working on this some of these chapters may be out of order with each other which is why I'm not numbering them and timeframe wise this story takes place at least 3 months after season 3's end and also this just version 1.0 I'll begin version 2.0 once season 3 ends and I find out whether or not there will be a season 4 so heres a segment
Deus Servo Regina
Carnivac City, Regalis V
As she stood by the balcony's entrance waiting for the cue for herself and her mate to go outside for the ceremony, she could hear the roar of the crowd which according to Quickstrike numbered in the thousands(or at least thats what that venomous little snake said) when suddenly she could hear the trumpeting of horns that signaled the start of the ceremony and with it the speech that when concluded would be the signal for her mate and then herself to greet the teeming masses.
Guiledart while excited kept his cool for he knew that if he messed up the speech he would be better off in the Pit than being anywhere near Decepticon controlled space so once the horns quieted down he decided he should get on with the speech so he began, "My fellow Mechs and Femmes we are gathered here today for a most glorious and joyous day, a day that marks the beginnings of a new era of triumph for the Decepticons that will signal the start of our ultimate triumph against our oppressors the accursed Autobots who drove us from our homeworld, beautiful Cybertron and have tried to eliminate our way of life, but that will end today as I am proud to present our new leader, GIGATRON!!!!".
As Guiledart finished his speech the intimidating warrior he had just introduced stepped out confidently and addressed the cheering masses, "My Comrades you have probably been wondering if joining my army means betraying Megatron and the Decepticon cause, well I have this to say in response, you are not betraying the Decepticons, No you are joining a new elite force that will bring the Autobots to their knees and Cybertron under Decepticon rule, and thus now I am proud to introduce the Femme who made this all possible, My Spark-Mate and Your Queen, Blackarachnia!!!" as she heard her cue Blackarachnia stepped outside and the already deafening cheers became a truly thunderous applause as she and her mate shouted one final cry together "LONG LIVE DECEPTICONS, LONG LIVE PREDACONS".
As the screaming masses continued chanting the new Predacon slogan and Terrorsaur began the scheduled aerial performance, Blackarachnia looked down upon the thousands of technorganics pledging themselves to the Predacon cause and and taking a glance at her beloved white armored mate, she was finally happy with herself and couldn't wait to see the future unfold as she buried the doubts that were haunting her spark once and for all.
sounds good keep it up
will have a new chapter up soon
Preces Ut Nostrum Plasmator
Prima's Basilica, Altihex City, Cybertron
Alpha Trion entered the Basilica which if it weren't for the urgency would have filled him with awe and amazement as it always did which was befitting of one of the most sacred sites on Cybertron, let alone amongst the Church Of Primus. As he walked towards his destination he stopped for a moment to kneel in respect next to a resplendent electrum statue of an old friend and offered forth a prayer sequence to Primus
" Our Maker, who art in J'nwan,
Hallowed be thy Designation.
Thy dominion come.
Thy commands be done,
On cybertron as it is in the well of allsparks.
Give us this cycle our cyclic energon.
And forgive us our trespasses,
As we forgive those who trespass against us.
And lead us not into temptation,
But deliver us from error.
For thine is the dominion,
and the power, and the glory,
for ever and ever.
as he finished the prayer sequence he heard someone walk up behind him and start talking "ah so you're sending a prayer for a departed friend I see" said the mech behind him and as he turned around he saw the face of his old friend Emirate Xaaron a mech considered by many as the holiest bot online and current Emirate of the Church Of Primus, Alpha Trion spoke "I still miss him my friend if only I could have gone offline in his place" he said with streams of energon rolling down his face Xaaron reassured him "Alpha Trion you know as well as I that he would have wanted to go down defending his fellow Cybertronians and besides it has been a long time since your gladiator days with Clench's old Destron team now hasn't it?", "You're right as usual Xaaron now let us head to your office to speak in private old friend, there are matters that the transmitters of the common bot should not hear yet" and as they walked off to Emirate Xaaron's office Alpha Trion whispered towards the statue "Farewell Orion Magnus, may we meet again in J'nwan someday"
END CHAPTER 2
p.s. this chapter and chapter 3 are set after Transwarped but shortly before Endgame
In my last post that prayer is spoken in Liturgical Cybertron which when translated into an earth language instead of translating into a modern language like normal cybertronian translates into english or other major earth languages instead translates into Ecclesiastical Latin and other sacred or dead languages also cybertronian script uses Cybertronix with the maximal character set used for Standard Cybertronian with the predacon character set used to write Liturgical Cybertronian
Sententia Of Validus
Office Of Emirate Xaaron, Prima's Basilica, Altihex City, Cybertron
As Alpha Trion took a seat in his old friend's office as Emirate Xaaron started talking while he poured them both some Ankmor Park Energon Enriched Oil "So my old friend what brings you here today besides praying for departed friends that is". After Alpha Trion took a sip of his oil and composed his thoughts he started talking "Xaaron you know about the Earth situation and the fate of the Allspark correct", "of course Alpha Trion I was with you when Ultra Magnus returned from Earth and told us about it's fate", "well do you remember him mentioning an Earthling femme who he said was chosen by the Allspark to wield a sizable portion of it's power in the form of a key", "yes the Allspark does work in mysterious ways or at least it did", "well things have changed even more in regards to mysterious ways", "what do you mean by that old friend?" queried Xaaron.
Alpha Trion was unsure for moment if he should continue but he decided he would have to risk his friend rupturing a fuel valve so he continued talking "well my friend in the aftermath of Optimus Prime's team stopping Megatron from invading Cybertron they discovered their young Earthling companion wasn't completely normal per say", "what does that mean Alpha Trion?", "Well Xaaron they discovered that the young Earthling Sari Sumdac being her designation if I remember properly was in fact Half-Cybertronian!", "WHAT!!!" Xaaron spluttered as he tried not to choke on his oil "what do you mean Half-Cybertronian?", "well apparently somehow a protoform ended up on earth almost nine stellar cycles ago and integrated human genetic material and reformatted itself into a technorganic human format and after discovering her true heritage she tried upgrading herself with her key and thus drained it and nearly offlined herself in the process though she's gotten better according to the report."
After taking a breem to go over this new information in his processor Xaaron knew what he was going to do "My friend I know what I must do in Primus' duty it was something I was going to do eventually", "what is it?", "I'm sending a representative of the church to earth", "isn't that dangerous Xaaron?", "it would were it not for who I'm choosing that is" said Xaaron as he started typing up a message when Alpha Trion decided to ask "so who are you going to send?", "why one of my best men in fact I believe you've met him before, Brother Powerglide..."
END CHAPTER 3
I'm impressed. Nice job. Do you plan on writing any more chapters?
sometime soon though I might wait for any plot important chapters till after the season finale because I'm trying to keep this as close to canon as possible and I hope we can work together on something someday as you are a great writer
Oh my interest is activating! I wonder what'll happen next. (I hope you keep Prowlie alive!!)
I intend to follow canon as close as possible but while Prowl is deceased his death is not the last we see of him....
p.s. if you want to see some of the ideas that will show up later view my thread here Create A Character For Transformers Animated:Read The Thread Rules 1st Before Posting
well I don't have another chapter to post yet but I do have something special to post to make up for not posting anything in a long time a whole bunch of character profiles from a previous thread of mine so here we go
Character Name:Emirate Xaaron
Alt-Mode:Cybertronian Communications Hovercraft
Weapons & Equipment:2 Empathic Aggression Reduction Wave Generators
Special Abilities:able to manipulate The Will Of Primus a force similar to Processor over Matter but even more powerful and understood even less
Bio:Emirate Xaaron has been head of The Church of Primus longer than most Cybertronians have been online in fact Alpha Trion is one of the only Autobots still around who is around Xaaron's age and participated with Xaaron in the Quintesson Rebellion to free cybertron from it's off-world oppressors and currently after being informed about the earth situation and the fate of the Allspark is preparing to send a team to Earth to confirm this information
Notes & Errata:the Emirate part of his name is his rank in The Church Of Primus as its supreme leader and besides his rank some of the other ranks are Prelate, Administrator, Moderator, Server, and Router in descending order
Character Name: Transmutate
Faction: technically Autobot
Role: Herald Of Primus
Alt-Mode: Allspark Wave Cannon
Weapons & Equipment: 2x Arm Mounted Sonic Cannons 2x Kusarigama
Special Abilities: General Allspark Energy Manipulation, Allspark Scream generated from mouth capable of either great destructive power or empowering every piece of technology in a 10 mile radius with Allspark given life
Bio: Transmutate was born directly of Primus' will and is one of the first of Primus' agents to arrive on this plane of reality and is following a prophecy from The Covenant Of Primus to find two other Heralds Of Primus: An Autobot whose destiny has yet to be truly realized and, A Decepticon who wields The Heavens Fire who shall together take the Vacant Thirteenth Throne Of The Traitor and signal the approach of The Darkest Hour
Motto: can't think of one
Notes & Errata: in many ways my version of Transmutate is the exact opposite of the original Beast Wars version for example while the BW version was ungainly and hideous my version is beautiful and graceful and while the original was weak and fragile this version is very powerful
Character Name: Cloudburst/Daniel Witwicky
Faction: Autobot Sub-Group: Pretenders
Role: Autobot Pretender Sub-Commander
Alt-Mode: Techno-Organic Combat Mode
Weapons & Equipment: 1x Thunderbolt Pistol 1x Lightning Whip Jetpack
Special Abilities: Low Level Allspark Energy Manipulation, Strength Equivalent to Bulkhead, Enhanced Speed, Shared ability with other Pretenders to Change Size once Transformed
Bio: Daniel Witwicky used to be a normal child despite several mildly traumatic experiences involving the Autobots until several months after the "Omega Incident" when he was kidnapped by Lockdown and taken to a hidden research base belonging to Meltdown who planned on using him and several other Detroit youths for his second wave of Pretenders for the Decepticons after the first wave proved to be powerful enough that even Autobot Elite Guard members couldn't stop them. By the time that the Autobots discovered the location of Meltdown's base and raided it he had already altered Daniel and the other children but he didn't have the time to finish it and because of that the only way that they were able to keep them from dying was for Sari to infuse them with Allspark energy which caused them to reformat into a Techno-Organic state closer to Sari's than Meltdown's monstrous Pretenders. After Daniel and the others recovered and were told what had happened to them they unanimously decided to help the Autobots stop the Decepticons and bring Meltdown to justice. Daniel got the chance to act on his promise sooner than he thought he would when the Decepticon Pretender Bomb-Burst attacked Detroit and he became the first Autobot Pretender to activate his abilities and managed to defeat Bomb-Burst. Now Daniel is the Sub-Commander for the Autobot Pretenders and has become a more mature and courageous person and a valiant warrior, now if only he could get a certain red haired girl out of his thoughts...
Motto: CLOUDBURST, PRETENDIZE (transformation code)
Notes & Errata: basically my intent for most of the Autobot Pretenders is to have an opportunity to redeem the reputation of some of the human kids that have popped up over the years in TF media and as a reference most Autobot Pretenders transform and look similar to Sari's robot mode while most Decepticon Pretenders look while transformed similar to Meltdown's canon experiments and while untransformed look disfigured and mutated and transform rather violently with a couple exceptions to that rule on both sides
Animated Dead Universe
A parallel world to Earth-AN (Animated's Multiverse ID) this world was much the same as Earth-AN until it's version of the early 22nd century occurred where it all began to go wrong starting with Sari's death and the destruction of Detroit and from there things have only continued to get worse from an ever escalating renewed Autobot-Decepticon war that devastated Earth and most of the galaxy to horrific fates to various prominent Cybertronians and finally the return of the Great Destroyer himself Unicron.
Now 50 million stellar cycles later the only life in the universe left not in servitude to Unicron are a group of Cybertronians who call themselves the Cybertronain Empire who roam space in a fleet of Worldships and are preparing to leave this reality for a new one unaware that the forces of Unicron are planning the same thing...
hope you like these and I'll have another chapter ready sometime in the near future
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