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Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Fiction' started by ZarakZone, Oct 14, 2007.

  1. ZarakZone

    ZarakZone Wot's...Uh The Deal?

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    They need a story for themselves!

    Chapter 1
    Armorhide-Beginnings


    It was a dark and stormy night.
    Really.

    In some area I'll never tell you, on the outskirts of some street that you'll never hear me say the name of, there was a black and yellow truck lying on it's side. I was in that truck. At that moment I would've given anything for a new life. That is not the way I think now. Having my truck get hit by lightning and thrown off the side of the road was a big thing for me then. It's nothing to me now.
    Right then, a large Peterbilt truck, red flames painted all over, pulled up right next to me. Strangely it had seemed to come out of nothing. It's headlights lit up bright blue and a face suddenly filled my windshield, a robot's face with antennae on either side and a silver mouthplate where a mouth should be.

    A deep booming voice said "Greetings human. My name is Optimus Prime, leader of the Autonomus robotic organisims from the planet Cybertron..."

    To Be Continued

    Please Post Critisicm :D 
     
  2. decepticon665

    decepticon665 the amazing bored-man!

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    much like pie,we need more.
     
  3. ZarakZone

    ZarakZone Wot's...Uh The Deal?

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    I'm planning to put up Elita 1's Beginnings Chapter Up Tomorrow
     
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  4. ZarakZone

    ZarakZone Wot's...Uh The Deal?

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    More!:D 

    Chapter 2
    Elita 1 Beginnings

    It was a dark and stormy night

    I was laying there on the track; my bike strewn across me. I never knew anything like it could happen: just riding home on the track when BOOM!, a lightning bolt hit my tire.
    While having a brightly colored bike helped, people could only barely see me, it was as if my entire bike paled once the lightning bolt hit. Suddenly, out of nowhere a large truck with flames painted all over it drove up, it's lights blew up blue and a deep booming metallic voice said "Greetings human, my name is Optimus Prime, leader of the Autonomus robotic organisims from the planet Cybertron..."
     
  5. Lock Cade

    Lock Cade Tarn Fangirl TFW2005 Supporter

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    More, goodness gracious, give us more.
     
  6. red00wolf

    red00wolf insatiable collector

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    ummm i dont know..
     
  7. littlebotbrat

    littlebotbrat Well-Known Member

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    My brain has eaten your zombies. Yum!
     
  8. ZarakZone

    ZarakZone Wot's...Uh The Deal?

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    ...yes...I see
     
  9. Rotorstorm

    Rotorstorm OriginalRotorstorm Fanboy

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    i'm not sure how these fit together and how they actually work
     
  10. ZarakZone

    ZarakZone Wot's...Uh The Deal?

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    Alright the main idea of the plot is humans who's hearts are really sparks so Optimus wants to protect them while Megatron seeks to use them for his own methods...
    As always.
     
  11. red00wolf

    red00wolf insatiable collector

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    there hearts?? the organ that pumps blood?? i really dont know bout that.. if it was me id say the sparks were in there heads or if they were there chests i wouldent say they were there hearts.
     
  12. ZarakZone

    ZarakZone Wot's...Uh The Deal?

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    Well their bodies contain sparks, not really replacing their heats but merged with them I just didn't want it to be soul because that can't be driving your body.
     

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