Takeout's Attempt at a Comic Series!

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  1. Takeout

    Takeout Mistress of the Night

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    TAKEOUT'S ATTEMPT AT A COMIC SERIES


    I won't make this post extremely long, so to get this over and done with, I present to you: the first episode.


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    ENJOY!


    NEXT TIME: A HUGE BATTLE TAKES PLACE, OLD FOES MEET, AND THE MAIN CHARACTER OF A CERTAIN BRITISH SCI-FI SERIES MAKES A GUEST APPEARANCE!
     
  2. Sage o' G-fruit

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    Um....The text is so small, its unreadable.

    Would that british scifi show be Dr Who perchance?
     
  3. Dremare

    Dremare Had an Epiphany

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    Well, I can't read the text...... Nor can I actually understand what's going on. But I can assure you that your comic skills will improve over time.
     
  4. Takeout

    Takeout Mistress of the Night

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    *facepalm*


    Correct.
     
  5. Sage o' G-fruit

    Sage o' G-fruit Critics gonna critique

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    Would that main character be the DOCTOR!?!?!?!?!?

    HMMM??

    But if you can fix the text, then everything will be better. Maybe the next one has readable text.
     
  6. Takeout

    Takeout Mistress of the Night

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    Yep, AND it's the Tenth Doctor, everyone's favourite Time Lord.


    The next episode probably won't be today or tomorrow, as I just purchased seventeen episodes of G1.


    And the reason the text appears so small is because my camera takes pictures that are way oversized.
     
  7. Omega Charge

    Omega Charge Prepare for trouble...

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    I can make out the text, but just barely. Try resizing your pics first, then adding text. Maybe try getting some clearer pics. But keep it up, you'll get it!
     
  8. Takeout

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    Alright, episode 2 is coming tomorrow. Expect action, surprise, and Movie Legends Jazz getting run over by a 'Con with S.W.A.T markings!


    And of course a guest appearance by the Doctor.


    EDIT: And once again, the reason for the incredibly tiny text (even if I used size 20) is the sheer size of the pictures my camera takes. Seriously, the original pics are 3264 x 2448.
     
  9. Katamari Prime

    Katamari Prime Hassan Chop! TFW2005 Supporter

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    Are you using MS paint to add the text, if you are, you can resize the pics. That's what I do(well once at 80% for the text, then 30% for the right size.) you might experiment to see what works for you.
     
  10. Sage o' G-fruit

    Sage o' G-fruit Critics gonna critique

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    You could just keep the pics normal size, the site resizes them automatically.
     
  11. Omega Charge

    Omega Charge Prepare for trouble...

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    Yes, if you're using Paint, Image -> Resize/Skew(Ctrl+W). Mine are about the same size as yours out of the camera, so try about 20-25% and go right from there!
     
  12. Takeout

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    Next episode coming as soon as I get the pics onto Photobucket.....


    The text is much larger now, you should be able to read the speech bubbles now.


    EPISODE 2


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    NEXT TIME: DISASTER STRIKES, IN THE FORM OF MEGATRON!
     
  13. Sage o' G-fruit

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    "Now remember kids, violence is never the answer!"

    "If I have to regenerate because of this, Takeout is going to owe me a lot of money!"

    :lolol 
     
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    Much better, Thank you.
     
  15. Takeout

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    It's meant to look like a 'Con got angry after hearing the Doctor and tried to shoot him.


    It's also going to bankrupt me.


    EDIT: Comic 3 up.


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  16. Takeout

    Takeout Mistress of the Night

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    Well, it's been a long year. I'm going to leave you with a bit of information to make you look forward to next year's story.


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    PM me if you can guess who this guy is.
     

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