Sub-relevant plot, Jokes, Laugh, and Violence.

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How would you rate this comic?

  1. Best comic ever!

  2. It's a good comic

  3. Meh.

  4. It's bad, but I see potential

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  1. Dropkick

    Dropkick "I outrank you, get in the back!"

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    S'up TFW! I decided to make a comic with the TF toys I had!

    (Note: I got this idea from TFW user AutobotAvalanche, so shout out to that awesome guy for inspiring me!)

    Without further ado, here's the first few panels. I'll update and give more as I go.

    PANEL1.jpg Panel 2.jpg Panel 3.jpg Panel 4.jpg Panel 6.jpg Panel 7.jpg Panel 8.jpg
    Ok, this is a little brutal for my first few panels, but it gets better.

    Also, for all you Bumblebee fans that'll hate me, Bee will be back again. soon. Don't count on it tho.
     
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  2. Blam320

    Blam320 Assembly Inventor

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    Geez. Also, why was that movie Bumblebee missing a piece of the front bumper?
     
  3. Dropkick

    Dropkick "I outrank you, get in the back!"

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    Battle damage. And It was customized.
     
  4. bumblebeej8

    bumblebeej8 Pinpoint Doodle User#3

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    I'm interested.
     
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  5. Dropkick

    Dropkick "I outrank you, get in the back!"

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    Megatron cleans up after himself with REALLY bad transforming noises!
    Panel 9.jpg Panel 10.jpg Panel 11.jpg Panel 12.jpg Panel 13.jpg Panel 14.jpg Panel 15.jpg Panel 16.jpg Panel 17.jpg Panel 18.jpg
    Bumblebee drips a lot of energon. Wonder if someone'll figure out.
     
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  6. DOTM Bumblebee

    DOTM Bumblebee I must be some kind of nut...

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    Oh geez! Well, that's a way to start! I hope Bumblebee's okay... (he probably isn't...) :popcorn 
     
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  7. marvel b

    marvel b beard, blood red, banjo, bot, buddy.

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    talk about a bloodbath!!!!
     
  8. Dropkick

    Dropkick "I outrank you, get in the back!"

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    And now for the transition from dark and edgy, to light hearted and joking. I guess...
    Part three: Astrotrain is the New Long Haul
    Panel 19.jpg Panel 20.jpg Panel 21.jpg Panel 22.jpg Panel 23.jpg Panel 24.jpg Panel 26.jpg Panel 27.jpg Panel 28.jpg
     
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  9. nobleboivin

    nobleboivin Well-Known Member

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    :lol  at the latest update
     
  10. BScorpinok75

    BScorpinok75 Squadron X #1 Consultant

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    :popcorn  :lol 
     
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    The introduction was pretty intense! Hope there are similar situations :D 
     
  12. Dropkick

    Dropkick "I outrank you, get in the back!"

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    Part 4: The hunt begins
    Panel 30.jpg Panel 31.jpg Panel 32.jpg Panel 33.jpg Panel 34.jpg Panel 35.jpg Panel 36.jpg Panel 37.jpg Panel 38.jpg Panel 39.jpg
    Megatron should've picked up after himself.

    *Edit:
    YES I know that Towline is actually Armada Smokescreen. But I cannot have two in-universe Smokescreens running around. SO I renamed Armada Smokescreen Towline. The name sounds better anyways.
     
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  13. BScorpinok75

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  14. Dropkick

    Dropkick "I outrank you, get in the back!"

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    So far now, I've introduced some of my characters. Here are all the characters I plan on giving focus in my comic, including the ones already given spotlights to.


    Autobots:
    Optimus Prime (Probably CW ver.)
    Hot Rod (Already seen)
    Towline (Already seen)
    Wheeljack
    Smokescreen
    Red Alert
    In universe Bee
    Chromedome
    Hardhead
    Rewind

    Reality Jumpers:
    Tracks
    Optimus Prime
    Jazz
    Bumblebee (Already seen, dead)

    Wreckers: (Basically Autobot mercenaries)
    Roadbuster
    Whirl
    Springer

    Decepticons:
    Megatron (Seen)
    Astrotrain (seen)
    Shockwave (Seen)
    Bombshell
    Onslaught
    Brawl
    Swindle
    Vortex
    Blast Off
    Bruticus?
    Demolisher
    Scourge
    Smolder
     
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  15. DOTM Bumblebee

    DOTM Bumblebee I must be some kind of nut...

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    That sounds like a great cast of characters. I wonder what Hot Rod and Towline will find... :popcorn 
     
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    Cool character cast!
     
  17. Dropkick

    Dropkick "I outrank you, get in the back!"

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    I hope everyone is enjoying the rapid amount of comic panels I am getting out.

    Anyways here's part 5

    Part 5: Wild Goose Chase Panel 40.jpg Panel 41.jpg Panel 42.jpg Panel 43.jpg Panel 44.jpg Panel 45.jpg Panel 46.jpg
    Wonder what trouble Hot Rod and Towline will get into?
     
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  18. Dropkick

    Dropkick "I outrank you, get in the back!"

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    Also just a question:
    Do you guys like how I do the transformation panels? And should I change something?
     
  19. AutobotAvalanche

    AutobotAvalanche The Watson to Nightbeat's Sherlock

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    Hm, I can definitely see the inspiration from my comic. Loving it so far!
     
  20. DOTM Bumblebee

    DOTM Bumblebee I must be some kind of nut...

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    The transformation shots look good. Hot Rod's personality has already been clearly defined with this update. He seems like he'll be fun.
     

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