2D Artwork: Spike & carly sketch

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  1. Blitz.

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    I've been doing a fair chunk of commish stuff of late so I've not had much to show you guys but I've had this sitting half done for a few days so I finished off most of it and i might colour it later on. Also I dont think I've ever posted non-transformer characters here so this is a bit of a first

    just to make a few crits on this post me inking it (not the smartest move on my part) I'm not too keen on spike he looks far too stiff and the arm being grabbed looks a little odd

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  2. moreprimeland

    moreprimeland Optimus told me to do it! Moderator TFW2005 Supporter

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    Pretty good sketch, would like to see some colors.. :D .. btw, who's Carly gonna shoot? :lol 
     
  3. Lock Cade

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    Nice sketch. Like what MPL said, would like to see this in color.
     
  4. coinilius

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    Carly looks really good - Spike does look a little stiff, but then again he looks like he is supposed to be awkward looking, so it doesn't hurt.
     
  5. Altitron

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    She looks pretty happy to be toting a gun. :D 

    It's good to see you doing something other than Transformers (albeit they are Transformers related, nonetheless :)  ).

    - Alty
     
  6. Blitz.

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    I've done a fair bit of non-transformers stuff in my time but I tend not to post it online as I tend to be far my critical of it and this being a TF board posting non tf stuff seems a bit out of place
     
  7. CryoPrime

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    I like it, it looks really good, Like you said Spike's arm being grabbed looks off. Also Carly's right hand(her right) looks like a zombie hand, maybe there's just too many lines within her fingers.
     
  8. Blitz.

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    I didnt/forgot to remove a lot of the pencil lines... an over site on my part
     
  9. berryrock

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    Its really nice work. I liked this sketch which is very simple. But, you have selected very easy theme. So, you need some improvements in that. You have done very well.

    Good work!!
     
  10. Superquad7

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    We have a "Non-TF" tag in here :wink:  I'd love to see you post ALL of your work :D 
     
  11. jostru

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    Megan Fox, ofcourse!

    OT: Nice work!
     
  12. Superquad7

    Superquad7 We're only human. Super Mod

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    Why? Megan Fox has long since shot her own self in the foot. :lol 

    I'm really looking forward to seeing this piece colored :) 
     
  13. KA

    KA PENIS GOES WHERE?!!

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    watch where carly's left toes line up with spikes leg. and the depth perception on carlys pulling arm isnt very defined. is carly pulling spike towards the viewer or to the side?

    nice comp tho.
     

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