Sorry, But This is a Pretty Bad Fan Fic

Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Fiction' started by Xaddion, Nov 28, 2009.

Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.
Page 4 of 7
  1. Xaddion, Dec 1, 2009
    #61
    Xaddion

    Xaddion ...

    Joined:
    May 1, 2009
    Posts:
    1,586
    News Credits:
    8
    Trophy Points:
    126
    Likes:
    +12
    Oh Fucking Shit.
     
  2. ILoveDinobot, Dec 1, 2009
    #62
    ILoveDinobot

    ILoveDinobot You can, you up. No can, no BB.

    Joined:
    Jan 19, 2006
    Posts:
    20,719
    News Credits:
    12
    Trophy Points:
    412
    Location:
    They are not the hell your whales
    Likes:
    +6,650
    Ebay:
    Twitter:
    Oh he updated~~
     
  3. Hiraga, Dec 1, 2009
    #63
    Hiraga

    Hiraga BILL BILL BILL BILL BILL

    Joined:
    May 16, 2008
    Posts:
    4,899
    News Credits:
    2
    Trophy Points:
    151
    Likes:
    +58
    The...the game? Really? You're going to not only make me want to cut out my own eyes...but you'll make me lose the Game as well?

    *breathes in*

    Okay...

    *breathes out*

    ..........












    GODDAMMIT I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU!!! WHY WOULD YOU DO SUCH A HORRIBLE THING TO ME? WE DON'T HAVE TO BE AFRAID OF MICHAEL BAY KILLING OUR CHILDHOOD, WE HAVE TO BE AFRAID OF THIS KID KILLING OUR SANITIES!!!!
     
  4. SoundFire Prime, Dec 1, 2009
    #64
    SoundFire Prime

    SoundFire Prime Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Feb 16, 2009
    Posts:
    1,669
    News Credits:
    1
    Trophy Points:
    126
    Likes:
    +5
    "Because.................................................................................I'm your twin!"

    "It was simply called..................................................................THE GAME!"

    This fan-fiction....................................................................is an ABOMINATION!! Though at the same time, it managed to get a good laugh out of me...
     
  5. Gojira Prime, Dec 1, 2009
    #65
    Gojira Prime

    Gojira Prime Narf

    Joined:
    Sep 19, 2007
    Posts:
    2,144
    Trophy Points:
    312
    Likes:
    +250
    I'm SO going to do a "dramatic reading" of this. And a nice, loud DUNTDUNTDUUUUUUUUUN! is going in after each of those pasues :p 
     
  6. SpencimusPrime, Dec 1, 2009
    #66
    SpencimusPrime

    SpencimusPrime _

    Joined:
    Aug 14, 2009
    Posts:
    1,707
    News Credits:
    5
    Trophy Points:
    136
    Likes:
    +6
    He actually replied to my review:
     
  7. Valkysas, Dec 1, 2009
    #67
    Valkysas

    Valkysas Attack Buffalo

    Joined:
    Sep 1, 2003
    Posts:
    21,642
    News Credits:
    19
    Trophy Points:
    412
    Likes:
    +2,694
    you guys are getting trolled soooooo hard.
     
  8. Gojira Prime, Dec 1, 2009
    #68
    Gojira Prime

    Gojira Prime Narf

    Joined:
    Sep 19, 2007
    Posts:
    2,144
    Trophy Points:
    312
    Likes:
    +250
    Who? Me? I just like making fun of this fan fic.
     
  9. ILoveDinobot, Dec 1, 2009
    #69
    ILoveDinobot

    ILoveDinobot You can, you up. No can, no BB.

    Joined:
    Jan 19, 2006
    Posts:
    20,719
    News Credits:
    12
    Trophy Points:
    412
    Location:
    They are not the hell your whales
    Likes:
    +6,650
    Ebay:
    Twitter:
    I'm still waiting for the robo-porn.
     
  10. Cyberwolf1980, Dec 1, 2009
    #70
    Cyberwolf1980

    Cyberwolf1980 Deceptus Templar C-Dub TFW2005 Supporter

    Joined:
    Oct 26, 2006
    Posts:
    984
    News Credits:
    2
    Trophy Points:
    237
    Likes:
    +19
    As long as something positive came from reading this piece of shit...
     
  11. Unicron the Pla, Dec 2, 2009
    #71
    Unicron the Pla

    Unicron the Pla Cybertronian Accountant

    Joined:
    Sep 16, 2009
    Posts:
    422
    Trophy Points:
    76
    Likes:
    +1
    :lol  :lol  :lol  :lol  :lol  :lol  :lol  :lol 
     
  12. Black Oracle, Dec 2, 2009
    #72
    Black Oracle

    Black Oracle Black Convoy's Dark Angel

    Joined:
    Jul 2, 2002
    Posts:
    2,749
    News Credits:
    6
    Trophy Points:
    186
    Likes:
    +13
    I have got to stop submitting to my curiosity with this author. He surely can't be for real. It's all a devious act to get attention. Yeah, that's it. No way could he honestly think his story is awesome and that he's being smart.

    And he wrote "Unicorn". He! He!
     
  13. Kando, Dec 2, 2009
    #73
    Kando

    Kando Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Mar 3, 2007
    Posts:
    1,767
    Trophy Points:
    126
    Likes:
    +7
    Transformers 3 script possibility?

    Fund it!
     
  14. DaraRex2.0, Dec 2, 2009
    #74
    DaraRex2.0

    DaraRex2.0 I'd totally eat the leaf

    Joined:
    Feb 6, 2007
    Posts:
    1,632
    Trophy Points:
    126
    Likes:
    +2
    I dunno guys, in all honesty (or naivity) a persons gotta reread their crap and realize if they bombed or not. And lately it's been a trend on FFnet to write god awful fanfiction for the lulz. I haven't been back, because this false fiction is so horrible and scary that I'm afraid my soul will be devoured by the writer.

    *edit*

    Oh...okay. I think I just lost TVT
     
  15. Optimus Vader, Dec 2, 2009
    #75
    Optimus Vader

    Optimus Vader Banned

    Joined:
    Jul 7, 2009
    Posts:
    3,982
    Trophy Points:
    151
    Likes:
    +5
    "when he was a baby he was founded in the forrest in midnite suroundded by dead wolfs unhurt by them."

    :lol 

    Best thread ever!
     
  16. Triceradon, Dec 2, 2009
    #76
    Triceradon

    Triceradon Sunbow Delenda Est

    Joined:
    Jul 22, 2009
    Posts:
    1,761
    Trophy Points:
    232
    Likes:
    +3,210
    I like how he says he attended "Harvar Collage", whatever the hell that is, and expects us to believe it. Especially despite his profile saying he's thirteen.
     
  17. Cyberwolf1980, Dec 2, 2009
    #77
    Cyberwolf1980

    Cyberwolf1980 Deceptus Templar C-Dub TFW2005 Supporter

    Joined:
    Oct 26, 2006
    Posts:
    984
    News Credits:
    2
    Trophy Points:
    237
    Likes:
    +19
    I absolutely love how this is one of the worst fan fictions most of us have probably ever read, yet it has drawn more traffic to the these forums than any other in it's short amount of time being here.
     
  18. Xaddion, Dec 2, 2009
    #78
    Xaddion

    Xaddion ...

    Joined:
    May 1, 2009
    Posts:
    1,586
    News Credits:
    8
    Trophy Points:
    126
    Likes:
    +12
    Funny how terrible fan fics get more attention in a week than well written fan fics get in a month.
     
  19. Sage o' G-fruit, Dec 2, 2009
    #79
    Sage o' G-fruit

    Sage o' G-fruit Critics gonna critique

    Joined:
    Sep 6, 2008
    Posts:
    7,108
    News Credits:
    11
    Trophy Points:
    227
    Likes:
    +18
    Well, he apparently has !)) views, and that's nothing compared to the really good ones on here, thank God.
     
  20. Demonss, Dec 2, 2009
    #80
    Demonss

    Demonss Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Jun 24, 2009
    Posts:
    4,549
    News Credits:
    1
    Trophy Points:
    212
    Likes:
    +31
    I too feel I lost..
     
Page 4 of 7
Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.