Sorry, But This is a Pretty Bad Fan Fic

Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Fiction' started by Xaddion, Nov 28, 2009.

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  1. Xaddion

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    Fanfiction jibba jabba should go in the TF FanFic section, sooo...
     
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    Someone needs to "Full-Life Consequences" this up.
     
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    Good... Fucking... Lourde...

    Strong Bad would have a freaking field day with this.
     
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    Holy crap.
     
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    This...this isn't even funny to me. Jesus Christ, just reading this actually makes me ANGRY. A fan fic has actually angered me...Good GOD....
     
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    Wow.... I think I literally lost some intelligence reading that...
     
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    This is a message to all who managed to survive this... forget. For the love of God, forget EVERYTHING you heard and saw today.
     
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    Thread win.
     
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    :lolol  :lolol  :lolol  :lolol 

    This almost goes full circle of bad back to hilariously aweful.

    Note to self: Never call Hiraga emu. :lol 
     
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    What the hell? My eyes are about to explode, this isn't even funny (WAS HE EVEN TRYING TO BE FUNNY?)

    Whats up with Ironhide cussing like crazy?
     
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    I am not an emu. I look nothing like a god damn bird.

    I'm beginning to think the guy that wrote this might have some problems of his own. This sounds like something he himself experienced. I mean c'mon, the katana, the saving the school from a shooter, and the jocks? I think this was all just some daydream some 13 year old emo kid with issues dreamt up. And then he threw in Transformers for good measure.
    Then, to make himself feel cool, he quickly jotted it down on MS Word, then posted it on the internetz, expecting love and praise from all.
     
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    I want to make a stupid one.
     
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    It's not hard. Just think of your lifes problems, throw in some Transformers and have Optimus and Ironhide screaming obscenities.
     
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    Wow. That sucks a really big fat one.

    "Sam got shit by the gun"... DAMN. That's a pretty bad misspelling...

    Ironhide is hilarious! "Your probably a f*cking piece of f*cking piece of f*cking sh*t you motherf*cking, cow humping basterd!" said Ironhide because he swears a lot.

    Example. I love how bad this fiction sucks.

    1 last thing, How much pot does someone have to take for they die for god's sake?
     
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    Maybe I am just too damn optimistic, but this is written intentionally bad, right? Like, for a joke or post-irony or something? Right?
     
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    With some fan fics I can get a good visual but with this one I couldn't even get a visual :eek: 
     
  19. Tr3adst0ne

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    If you thought that was bad, look up 'My Immortal'. :p 
     
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    I want to turn this into a comic book, the way they've been making literal music videos? It would be hilarious.

    Because I've never drawn an emu before.

    Or a gun defecating.

    - Alty
     
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