Sidelines: Ultra Magnus

Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by bryan_too, May 11, 2007.

  1. bryan_too

    bryan_too is Deadpool

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    Since someone asked when will I be having Magnus in my comic, say no more! I've done another comic for another storyline(A much more different story angle here) instead of the usual mess ups by my characters in Wacky Transcomics. This one is more on the action side,but do expect some comedic screw ups since this is the Funnies Thread! I will try to keep up on Wacky Transcomics but I might have to plan it to once a week(exams and school stuf..Egh) *Ahem*... Without further ado, I present to you Sidelines: Ultra Magnus!

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    Comments and constructive crits. are much appreciated!
     
  2. Autovolt 127

    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    I think this comic is gonna rock.:thumb  :thumb 

    I Guess,It will be like Onesocks comics,with The Titanium and Classics.
     
  3. TCracker

    TCracker おもちゃは今とても暑いです

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    Like it very much....your photoshopping's cool too:) 
     
  4. DilaZirK

    DilaZirK Is bullheaded.

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    Wow, more ways to make me feel very inadequate about my own photoshopping skillz. :p  This is seriously nice stuff.
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    I'm afraid I have to point out a few typos:
    Prolouge -> Prologue
    Underastimate -> Underestimate

    And on another note, I think the Funnies thread rule was that comics should be kept to one thread. Then again, exceptions were made for Cobalt's "The Rebirth" and Shane's "Obsidian's Lament", so you better check with Buzzbeak.
     
  5. bryan_too

    bryan_too is Deadpool

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    Ok, I'll inform Buzzy about it....Also, thanks for pointing out the spelling errors! Tanks!:lol 
     
  6. Sheba

    Sheba FF 1 Badman=Cyclonus

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    :thumb  :thumb  :thumb 
     
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    Dirge121 Eat the chikums

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    What was Ramjet doing in the background?
     
  8. bryan_too

    bryan_too is Deadpool

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    He had mistaken a pair of kissing pigs and thought it was some mysterious artifact form an uknown origin....
     
  9. bryan_too

    bryan_too is Deadpool

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    Here's the next episode....

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    I'm trying to incoperate a few characters that might fit in my storyline.Trouble is, I got
    only a few transformers and it takes sometime to get things right for this comic.... Man, it's hard doing an action comic, but what the heck, it's cool.:D 
     
  10. Autovolt 127

    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    Wheeee! :lolol  :lolol  :lolol 
     
  11. Pun-3X

    Pun-3X Well-Known Member

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    Nice clean story telling so far. And the special effects are very good. :)  I'm curious to see where this all goes.

    Oh, and in the first post--another typo/grammar error is when Starscream says "Let go OFF that thing!" Just need to delete an F there. :) 

    Anyway, keep it going!
     
  12. chubbzilla

    chubbzilla One shall stand...

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    hey thats really good well done m8 nice1
     
  13. ILoveDinobot

    ILoveDinobot Arise Rodimus Prime

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    :lolol  :lolol  :lolol  :lolol  :lolol 
     
  14. Blunticon

    Blunticon The Oddjob

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    Great start.
     
  15. Andersonh1

    Andersonh1 Man, I've been here a LONG time Veteran

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    Action comics take a lot more work than funnies. You can't get away with sillyness and inconsistency like funnies. Nice start. :thumb 

    I'll throw extra kudos your way if you avoid all trace of "can't deal with it" jokes or references when it comes to Ultra Magnus. :D 
     
  16. Leemon

    Leemon Yar, spare sum fuel mate?

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    It looks good.
     
  17. Sheba

    Sheba FF 1 Badman=Cyclonus

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  18. DilaZirK

    DilaZirK Is bullheaded.

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    Doh, how could I have missed an update! Loving it, Ultra Magnus is so very cool.
     
  19. bryan_too

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    Hey,hey! Here's the next issue!

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  20. Autovolt 127

    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    Now,You mention it Sunstreaker does look like Dragstrip a bit. :thumb 
     

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