2D Artwork: seqwhatials?

Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Art' started by Josh, Dec 13, 2006.

  1. Josh

    Josh Comic Color-guy

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    yeah. this was COMPLETE spur of the moment. [no scripting whatsoever. which explains the poorly concieved-ness of it all]

    i'll just sit back and wait for the complaints and criticism
    but be gentle

    this is my first page of sequentials evah ;) 

    [​IMG]
     
  2. lobes

    lobes You okay, Bumblebee?

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    F***ing awesome man. love the work

    edit: get jetfire in there
     
  3. Josh

    Josh Comic Color-guy

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    oh he's in there

    he's that silhouette of a jet in the second panel xD


    but yeah. since im happy with the way this page turned out im thinkin of adding more pages

    id be open to suggestions ;) 
     
  4. lobes

    lobes You okay, Bumblebee?

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    megs goes to kill prime but magnus repaint steps in and dies
     
  5. KA

    KA PENIS GOES WHERE?!!

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    not bad. although i dont whatsup with the 3rd panel.

    bumble: go for it mirage!
    mirage: wee!
    *establishing battle scene*
    prime: ha! missed me!
    *kablooey!*
    megs: it is i, megatron, doing my best supahstah pat impression entrance!
     
  6. Brave Magnus

    Brave Magnus Hecho en Argentina

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    What the...? Classics comic? XD Keep posting!!!
     
  7. Heat Guy

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    Now thats what I like!
     
  8. Ger_Hankey

    Ger_Hankey Now hiring evil minions

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    How about this; Prime goes looking for Grimlock to help him but cant find him anywhere cause hes suffering from poor distribution!!!

    Great stuff, lets see more!!!
     
  9. Sledgehammer

    Sledgehammer Digital art monkey

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    Note to IDW - pay Josh loads of money to do a Classics 4-parter, please. :D 
     
  10. Rumble02

    Rumble02 Radicon of Obliticons

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    That Rocks The House>
     
  11. Dreweido

    Dreweido Veteran TFW2005 Supporter

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    Oh it turned out very good man. I like it. I'd do a page with the other character's just to even things out some :) 
     
  12. Motor_Master

    Motor_Master Lets the balls touch TFW2005 Supporter

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    Very nice. Though Megs looks like he's about ready to say "Im Batman"
     
  13. Kristof

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    Pretty cool there Josh.

    I am assuming Bumble Bee is in the cockpit of Jetfire giving Mirage the thumbs up to parachute out of Jetfire, while Prime is dealing with baddies on the ground(something Magnus would never do :)  ). Then Megatron floats into the scene all menacing like.
     
  14. Josh

    Josh Comic Color-guy

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    yup yup

    you got it pretty much right on the money


    i half-azzedly threw up some letters on it last night. granted the FX are probably a bit much and the dialogue stupid. but like i said. had it have been scripted beforehand im confident it would have been bearable xD]
    [​IMG]
     
  15. Dreweido

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    Another thing I like about this is that Prime is already in the middle of things... I feel like we always have to wait for Prime to fight.

    *Thinks about that episode of Armada where Prime fought Thrust just the two of them. One of the better Armada eps*
     
  16. Venksta

    Venksta Render Project Creations TFW2005 Supporter

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    That looks great Josh! :thumb  Lets see you add some more pages to it. :D 
     
  17. SPLIT LIP

    SPLIT LIP Dry built

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    Primes eyes are the wrong colour.
     
  18. Josh

    Josh Comic Color-guy

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    i like prime with yellow eyes
     
  19. Infosaur

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    "Somewhere in Italy?" :inquisiti 

    The only thing I'd change is Primes lines, way to much talking for the pace of the situation.

    I'd PERSONALY go with:

    Prime: "Mirage! Stay back, it's,,,,"

    Boom!

    Megatron: "Indeed Prime, it IS too late,,,,FOR YOU"
     
  20. Katamari Prime

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    Excellent work, I wonder if Jetfire's somewhere in the next page?
     

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