script suggestions

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    Zeromagnus Well-Known Member

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    I need some suggestions for my script since my last thread utterly failed.
    I,ve written the first 2 scenes
    my characters so far are:
    AUTOBOTS
    Prime
    Jazz(rebuilt with classic redeco)
    BB
    Ratchet
    Ironhide
    Cliffjumper
    Prowl
    Jetfire
    Wheeljack
    Mirage
    DECEPTICONS
    Satrscream
    payload
    Dropkick
    Soundwave
    Shockwave
    Swindle
    Dreadwing
    Thundercracker
    Barricade

    The first scenes are ratchet & prime getting transmissions from cliffjumper jetfire prowl wheeljack & mirage
    :D 
     
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    A semi truck with flames drives down an alleyway

    Transmission: Prime ? Prime? Are you there? Prime?
    Prime: Yes . Who is this?
    Transmission: This is Prowl , I have Wheeljack and Mirage here on the planet Mars.
    Mirage: What it do ?
    Prowl: We just saw Starscream fly by with a bunch of other decepticons.
    Prime: Wait , This is impossible , Prowl , Weren’t you & Wheeljack destroyed in the battle of Tyger Pax ?
    Prowl: Well …. Sort of.
    Prime: How were you re-built?
    Prowl: Well , Mirage had Jetfire rebuild us.
    Prime: Where is Jetfire?
    Prowl: We don’t know if any more autobots are even alive.
    Prime: Hmm , Well get to earth .
    Prowl: Yes, Sir!

    We then see a Search & Rescue Hummer Driving down a highway.

    Transmission: Ratchet , This is Jetfire , Cliffjumper & I are coming to earth.
    Ratchet: Really ?
    Jetfire : Yes , We are.
    Ratchet: Great! , Finally someone to help me rebuild Jazz.
    Jetfire: What happened?
    Ratchet: I would rather not say.
    Jetfire: Fine.

    A black truck goes through the city streets.

    An asteroid lands
    Truck: What ?!?!?!
    Truck: Bumblebee come in , this is Ironhide.
    Bumblebee: Yeah ?
    Ironhide: Big asteroids.
    Bumblebee: Decepticons
    Ironhide: Think so.
    Bumblebee: Got,cha On my way !
    Ironhide: And get here quickly!

    A purple robot rises from the first asteroid
    And a black the next

    Ironhide: Soundwave?! Shockwave?!
    Shockwave: Yes Ironhide
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    Wadda ya think:confused: 
     
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