2D Artwork: ROTF Sideswipe

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  1. Attacker_Prime

    Attacker_Prime Optimus Prime forever

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    Here's ROTF Sideswipe. Any suggestions are welcome. I hope you like it.
     

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    Venksta Render Project Creations TFW2005 Supporter

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    Very nice work. :)  My only suggestion would be to work out the proportions some more.
     
  3. Attacker_Prime

    Attacker_Prime Optimus Prime forever

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    Ok, thanks for the suggestion!
     
  4. soymonk

    soymonk Mathematical!

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    The wheel-feet seem a little squared-off. Did you use Flash to make this?
     
  5. Attacker_Prime

    Attacker_Prime Optimus Prime forever

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    No, I used MS Paint. I think they look like that because I used the line tool too much. I'll use the circle tool next time I make wheels. Gonna modify the picture, thanks for suggestions.
     
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    Nah, you can stick with the line tool in MS Paint, just use the eraser tool to erase the sqaured off parts next time as you work to round out edges :) 
     
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    Attacker_Prime Optimus Prime forever

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    Ok, thanks for suggestion. I'll upload the edited Sideswipe later today.
     
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    Here it is, updated. I worked on the proportions, wheel-feet and shadows.
     

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    Only suggestion is dont make him look so stiff. Loosen him up a little. Otherwise i love it
     

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