Rise of the Fallen

Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by jlwtformer1337, Jul 8, 2009.

  1. jlwtformer1337

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    This is my first attempt at a comic, if it's not very original the please excuse me, so, here you go!

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    More to come soon ! :D 
     
  3. Robticon

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    :popcorn  very interesting, though I would prescribe
    word bubbles, though, you seem to have pulled off
    the 'Bubbless' look flawlessly. Very ledgible!
    :lol  Very nicley placed dialogue. :thumbs2: 
    I eagerly await more! :D 
     
  4. Sage o' G-fruit

    Sage o' G-fruit Critics gonna critique

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    Just a few suggestions, speech bubbles would help a lot, and making the images bigger would help too. I can't comment until I can honestly see what's going on. Sorry. :eek: 
     
  5. jlwtformer1337

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    Dang, I can't help you there, the only camera I have is my phone, and I use paint.NET v3.36, so, sorry.
     
  6. Robticon

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    Meh. No big deal.
    I did very well with paint.
    All I had to do was put a rounded
    square down, and then the text
    above it. Only camera is your phone?
    Meh. They're sufficient size to my eyes. :D 
    The quality looks ok, too, IMO. :D 
     
  7. Dremare

    Dremare Had an Epiphany

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    The comic's great so far, you just need to make speech bubbles, and make the pictures a bit bigger.
     
  8. jlwtformer1337

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    Thanks guys, well, here's part 3!

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    Part 4

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    Sorry if this one is alittle short, I needed more time on the last one.
     

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