2D Artwork: Rippersnapper - i need feedback

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  1. ABoMiNuS

    ABoMiNuS Who Knows? Im new?

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    Ok guys, i know you liked cut-throat, but my drawing of rippersnapper was more difficult becaues he is a tad more complex. I need your critiques before i finish.

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  2. ABoMiNuS

    ABoMiNuS Who Knows? Im new?

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    oh btw im going ot make his legs longer, so other than that, plz critique lol
     
  3. butz

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    Looks great, and I actually like the stout look he has.
     
  4. Sculpt-bot

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    Rippersnapper was my fav Terrorcon behind Hungrr. My only critique would be to clean up the left side of his face. Your proportions are right, there are just a few lines there that make that side of his face seem squished. Otherwise he looks very cool.
     
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    LOOKS GOOG TO ME:thumb 
     
  6. ABoMiNuS

    ABoMiNuS Who Knows? Im new?

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    thanks guys, im gonna have my gf start inking tomorow, so HOPEFULLY ill have it done in 2-3 days for your viewing pleasure ^^
     
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    Almost looks like he should have a tank alt. mode.

    If the beast arms were guns, and the beast head was a turret,,,,,

    Keep the teeth as nose art,,,,

    treads to the legs and for arms,,,

    definately A+
     
  8. Moroni Prime

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    I agree on the thought of tweaking the left side of the head to better match the right.

    Also, I don't know if you do requests, but after you're done with the terrorcons and Abominus, would you be able to do my favorite combiner team/gestalt? That being Computron/Technobots.
     
  9. Dreweido

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    Looks good except I'm in the "squatting is not really something they'd do" side of the fence. But I like the fact that you're trying to get movement into the piece.
     
  10. ABoMiNuS

    ABoMiNuS Who Knows? Im new?

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    haha id love to do technobots, thing is will i haev enough steam to do it, this is my summer project. If i can steam farward id love to make a poster of them, since the technobots are my 2nd favorite ^^ glad to see such good feedback since my first peice from 4 years ago

    lol @ gmac, we have a saying when we train to get big (im into bodybuilding) - sqaut till you puke lol... Rippersnapper is getting HUGE! :D 
     
  11. Gears

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    Great job! Are you gonna clean up the colors that went outside the lines?
     
  12. ABoMiNuS

    ABoMiNuS Who Knows? Im new?

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    yes ofc, its gonna look similar to my finished cut-throat when im done, just gives you an idea of how he will look -.-
     
  13. Mike

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    you could try to color within the lines :p 
     
  14. ABoMiNuS

    ABoMiNuS Who Knows? Im new?

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    :p  lol yeah i do rough coloring, i like teh pre school style :p  no i wait for lineart, then magic wand and erase, no point in doing extra work when u dont have to LOL
     
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    He looks awsome.:rock 
     
  16. Dreweido

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    Also adjusting the brightness/contrast will get rid of that greyish tone the background has overall

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