Revenge of the Fallen - My version

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  1. AutobotDefender

    AutobotDefender The Last Prime

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    I know that some hated this movie, and others, including myself, loved it. I liked it, but I believe it could have been much better. Here, I'll try writing the events of the movie, but with some touches from myself, and a modified plot based on the ROTF Game.

    With that said, let's begin!

    -Narration by Optimus Prime-​


    Earth. Birthplace of the human race. A race much like our own, capable of great compassion... and great violence.

    Time: Pre-history​

    An early human attacks a cheetah, and more humans follow him.

    But in our quest to protect the humans, a deeper discovery has been made...

    As the humans chase the cheetah, they look at the horizon, and clearly see giant mechanical beings building a machine. Thirteen others seemingly of the same race, who looked more royal, seemed to lead them.

    Our races have met before.

    The humans come closer to the mechanical beings. One of the royal ones notices them, and quickly proceeds to grab their leader. As he examines him, the mechanical king growls angrily.

    'Prima.' He says, enraged. 'Why should we cease our attempt to save our race because of these pests? Look at them! They are too weak! The strong should live further, not them.'

    Another mechanical being, similar to the first one, answers calmly but alarmed.

    'Megatronus, you know we cannot murder a race to save our own. Although energon, our life-force, is in low amounts, that is no excuse to destroy the sun of an inhabited planet.' He said, his blue optics looking into Megatronus' red ones. 'Although they are lesser life-forms, they have great potential. Do not underestimate them, brother.'

    Megatronus growled angrily again. 'As you say, brother.' He proceeded to drop the human, and walked away from his brothers.

    'My brothers are betraying their race. They do not realize that we, Cybertronians, cannot let ourselves perish. We have to survive. Especially the Primes... like me.' Megatronus Prime thought to himself, as rage filled his thoughts. 'The sun harvesting machine that our workers have built needs the Matrix for activation... which I will soon acquire.' As he thought this, some small armor plates on his forehead transform... forming the first Decepticon insignia to ever be seen.

    Transformers
    Revenge of the Fallen
    AutobotDefender's version

    Time: Present day.

    Hearing my message, an advanced new team of Autobots arrived. We hunt what remains of our Decepticon enemies, along with a team of human soldiers called N.E.S.T.

    In an airplane, Major Lennox and some other soldiers are preparing their weapons.

    'Welcome to Shanghai, gentlemen.' One of the soldiers said warmly as he loaded his rifle.

    'Guys, listen up! We have two Decepticon contacts here. The only way to kill them is to target either their heads or their sparks within their chests! Those spark things are like hearts to them, pumping the energon in their bodies!' Said Major Lennox, informing his team. 'The cover for this is toxic spill, everyone's been evacuated. We're clear to proceed.'

    The plane landed, and the soldiers got out of there, and so did a black truck.

    'He's here, Ironhide... get ready.' Lennox said, patting Ironhide's hood. Ironhide quickly transformed, and looked at a large excavator, which was moving its shovel.

    'It's Demolisher.' He said angrily as he prepared his cannons. 'This guy killed my brother.'

    N.E.S.T. helicopters quickly surrounded the Decepticon.

    'Decepticon, you're surrounded! Surrender now!' Said one of the helicopter pilots, with his weapons ready.

    The Decepticon quickly transformed. His robot mode was very large, and had a giant wheel above his head and another instead of feet. He mercilessly crushed the helicopters with his shovel hands and destroyed countless cars as he moved with his giant wheel. As he was rolling on the highway, Ironhide transformed into his truck mode and pursued him as fast as he could. He couldn't let that murderer get away.

    Meanwhile, an Audi R8 came out of hiding and transformed, revealing itself to be a Decepticon aswell. He quickly transformed his forearm into a sniper rifle and proceeded to shoot down some of the N.E.S.T. helicopters before transforming and speeding away.

    'We've got a second Decepticon!' Said one of the soldiers, alarmed. 'Twins, Arcee! Target coming your way!'

    An ice cream truck began following the Decepticon. An Autobot insignia could be seen on its hood.

    'Yeah, I've got them!' Said the ice cream truck as it pursued the Decepticon.

    'He better get ready for some serious damage!' Said another voice, full of enthusiasm, coming from the same vehicle.

    Three motorcycles also chased the Decepticon down. They were faster than the truck, and got near him quickly. They transformed into their robot modes, which appeared to be female, and shot the Decepticon with their arm-mounted cannons. In response, the Decepticon transformed aswell and began shooting the small Autobots with his rifle, before transforming his other forearm into a chainsaw and stabbing one of them. He shot them again, transformed, and sped toward the highway where Demolisher was located.

    'I've got him!' Said the Autobot whose alt mode was an ice cream truck, chasing the Decepticon. Suddenly, the truck transformed into two separate Autobots that started shooting the Decepticon. Both of them had one arm that was bigger, and another that was smaller. On the bigger arms, they had a mounted cannon which they used against the taller Decepticon, who transformed to shoot both of them before speeding his way out again.

    'Is that guy fast...' Said one of the ice cream Autobots, with sadness in his voice.

    'More like, is that guy a coward!' Said the other Autobot, before punching the other one with his bigger fist.

    'He's getting away!' Said one of the soldiers said. 'Bring in Sideswipe!'

    A silver sport car began following the Decepticon fastly. The car transformed, jumped, and shot the Decepticon in mid-air using a missle launcher before extending long, sharp swords from his forearms, and cutting the Decepticon in half using them.

    'Sideswipe 1, Decepticons 0!' Said the Autobot, retracting his swords and speeding away, using the wheel-feet.

    Meanwhile, the soldiers were overwhelmed by the titanic Decepticon's strength. Demolisher was definitely too strong to be taken down with human weaponry, due to the thickness of his armor. They called for a nearby airplane, asking them to deliver the truck.

    Above the battle, a truck is launched from a jet. The truck transforms in mid-air, revealing himself to be none other than the Autobot leader himself, Optimus Prime. He activated his parachutes, which he quickly cut with his swords when he neared ground.

    'Autobots, I'm in pursuit!' He said, as he transformed back to his vehicle mode, pursuing Demolisher along with Ironhide. The two transformed, Ironhide attacking his lower wheel, while Optimus shot his head repeatedly.

    'Pull over!' Demanded Optimus, shooting the Decepticon's head. Soon, Ironhide destroys the Decepticon's lower wheel, and he falls off the highway. He is no longer a threat.

    Optimus and Ironhide walk towards him, Optimus holding his ion blaster.

    'Decepticon punk.' Said Ironhide, glaring at the damaged enemy.

    'Do you wish to surrender?' Said Optimus, pointing his blaster at the Decepticon's head.

    'Hahah... Optimus... I enjoyed killing Ultra Magnus and his squad... especially Brawn... wasn't he your brother, Ironhide?' Demolisher taunted, laughing darkly although he was defeated.

    Ironhide growled and prepared to leap towards the Decepticon, but Optimus held them back.

    'I'll take that as a 'no'. Any last words?' Said Optimus, charging his blaster.

    'This is... not your planet to rule. The Fallen shall rise again... and you all will fall... suffering!' Said the Decepticon, still laughing.

    'Not today.' Said Optimus, determined, and then shot Demolisher through the head. Optimus shook his head reluctantly, and he seemed saddened.

    'What is it, Prime? You just avenged our comrades.' Said Ironhide, congratulating his leader.

    'A part of me still hopes to change the Decepticons' mind, not extinguish their sparks, old friend. Enough lives have been lost in this war.' He said, and sadness could be felt in his voice. 'We are not here for vengeance. We are here to protect the humans. Let's head back to base.' Said Optimus, as he, Ironhide and the soldiers prepared to leave Shanghai.
     
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    so far. Your Optimus actually has a soul ! I like !
     
  3. AutobotDefender

    AutobotDefender The Last Prime

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    Glad you liked that! I actually took that quote from TF: Prime, like I did with the Fallen's name, Megatronus.

    I'll make the Fallen and Devastator more awesome than how they were in the movie, just to let you know.
     
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    I'm liking this so far already sounds better then the real one
     
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    Good taste, you. I'm liking your future writings already !
     
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    Chapter 2

    Location: Sam's house

    Sam was packing his luggage, preparing to go to college. He was however interrupted by his parents.

    'Look what I found...' Said Sam's mother, as he showed him a little yellow toy car. 'You used to love this one.'

    'Mom, I'm busy here.' He said as he packed his stuff.

    'I can't believe he's going to college. First Witwicky to do so.' Said his father proudly. 'Did you tell Mikaela you're leaving today?'

    'I'll phone her later.' Said Sam, still packing. When he finished, he went upstairs to his room to get his clothes. As he was looking through them, he came upon a ripped apart jacket. It was the jacket he wore when he used the Allspark against Megatron two years ago.

    'I'm definitely taking this with me.' He thought to himself as he reached for it. When he touched it however, a small, metallic shard fell. Surprised, Sam lifts it from the ground and looks at it. As he was looking at it, everything became blank and he started seeing symbols and hearing things.

    'No! Megatronus, no! No! Arghhhahh!' A Cybertronian voice said, shocked and panicked, just before dying.

    Sam saw an alien-looking item. It was sharp at its sides, and had a blue core in its center, which was pulsing.

    'It is mine!' A dark, evil voice said, and Sam could see the face of the one who said this. A mechanical being with a dark expression, and a Decepticon symbol on his forehead.

    Suddenly, Sam was back into his room, with the shard still in his hand. Sam was scared by the horrors he heard and saw. He figured out that what he had picked up was a shard of the Allspark Cube, which he thought was destroyed.

    The shard started to burn Sam's fingers. He dropped it, and it fell through the floor, reaching the kitchen. When the shard touched the ground, it created a shockwave that went all over the kitchen. Suddenly, all the kitchen appliances that were in the room... transformed.

    One of them took the shard and looked at it, happily.

    'Mine! I, Ejector am strongest!' He declared, as he led the small transformers toward Sam's room. When they reached it, Ejector knocked.

    Sam opened the door, thinking it was his parents, but saw no one. He however looked down to see the now transformed kitchen appliances with their weapons pointed at him, laughing darkly with their high-pitched voices.

    'Surprise!' One of them said, and they began shooting as Sam quickly ran away, screaming in panic. He reached the window and was on the roof of his house.

    'Bumblebee! Bumblebee!' He screamed, frightened.

    Hearing his friend's cry for help, the Autobot sped his way from the garage and transformed, charging his plasma cannon. He proceeded to blast the small transformers, and quickly terminated them. However, in the process, Sam's house was destroyed. His mother ran out of it, with his father following.

    'Calm down, calm down...' Said Sam's father, attempting to calm his wife down while also remaining calm himself.

    'I can't live with a psychopathic trigger-happy alien in my garage!' Screamed Sam's mother angrily. 'You're taking it with you to college, mister!' She shouted, pointing at Sam.

    Sam, in response glared at both of them, then looked down.

    'He just saved your lives, and that's how you thank him.'

    Hearing this coming from their son, both were stunned. Bumblebee motioned with his hand that it didn't bother him, but Sam was saddened anyway. Bumblebee transformed and rolled back into the garage, with Sam following.

    When Sam entered the garage, he took his phone, and called Mikaela. She quickly answered.

    'Hi Sam!' He said.

    'Listen. Today I'm going to college.'

    'That's cool.' She replied.

    'Wait, that's not all. Remember the Cube? The Allspark?' He asked.

    'Yes, of course.' Mikaela replied.

    'I just found a shard of it. I'm seeing symbols, I'm seeing transformers killing eachother, it's crazy! I need you to take this shard and put it safely.'

    'I'm coming in a minute.' She said, and then ended the conversation.

    Bumblebee transformed and looked at Sam, seeming surprised.

    'Bee, this is big. I saw this. No joke.' Said Sam completely serious.

    'I'll follow you wherever you go, captain.' Said Bumblebee through the radio, reassuring Sam of his friendship.

    'I can't take you to college with me.' He said, sadly. In response, Bee looked away and started crying, motioning with his hand for Sam to leave him alone.

    'Freshmen aren't allowed to have cars. Sorry. But...'

    Hearing Sam, Bumblebee looked at him again, with hope in his wide-open, blue optics.

    '...You can stick around a bit. Just... you won't be my car for a while.' Said Sam, but Bumblebee was still sad.

    'It will never be the same, sailor.' Bumblebee moaned through his radio.

    'Listen, Bee, you'll always be my first car.' Said Sam looking into Bee's optics. As he was looking at Bee, Mikaela entered the garage.

    'Hi.' She greeted both of them. 'Bee, nice to see Ratchet's fixed your legs.'

    'Thank you, you're wonderful!' Bumblebee replied using the radio.

    'Does he still have that voice problem?' Mikaela asked, wondering how Bee is doing.

    'No. He just likes using that radio for some reason.' Replied Sam. 'Do you have a safe place to store the shard?'

    'Yes, I have a safe, you know you can trust me.' Said Mikaela, as Sam took a little box out of his pocket where the shard was stored.

    'Don't let any Decepticon see you.' Said Sam, concerned, giving her the shard.

    'Don't worry, I'll be fine.' Replied Mikaela, trying to calm him down as she put the shard in a little tube.

    They said good bye to eachother, and Sam went in his father's car, heading for college, with Bumblebee following from a distance in vehicle mode, while Mikaela went home. However, she felt as if she was being watched.

    Location: Earth's orbit

    Meanwhile, a mysterious alien jet approaches Earth's orbit, and stops near a sattelite. The jet's panels shifted and moved, transforming into what seemed like a Cybertronian sattelite. However, this sattelite had a head, with red optics and a visor covering them, and having a Decepticon insignia just above his visor. He extended some circuitry that blended with the sattelite's and intercepted Sam's conversation on the phone.

    'Decepticons, a shard of the Allspark has remained. We have located it.' His dark voice transmitted, as the massive Decepticon launched a very small comet towards Earth.
     
  7. Argentenoboy

    Argentenoboy Everything old is new again

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    Keep up the good work
     
  8. AutobotDefender

    AutobotDefender The Last Prime

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    Thanks for the positive comments! By the way, in the last chapter, the toy Sam's mother showed him was a G1 Bumblebee in car mode.
     
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    Argentenoboy Everything old is new again

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    G1 refrences FTW
     
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    AutobotDefender The Last Prime

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    I realized I forgot the Sideways fight. I edited the first chapter, you can read it just before Optimus enters.
     
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    AutobotDefender The Last Prime

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    This chapter is from Wheelie's perspective. I hope you like it.

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    Chapter 3

    The small comet-like object landed near Mikaela's home, and appeared to be made of many metallic panels. The panels started shifting and moving, until the round object became a tiny robot, with eyes glowing red, and a little Decepticon insignia on his chest. He saw some children walking up to him, but he hid behind a tree nearby. The children were playing with some radio-controlled cars.

    'This will do...' Said the Cybertronian, just before scanning one of them, and transforming. He rolled toward the house of Mikaela, and entered through the dog's door. Unexpected to him, however, he was greeted by a much bigger flesh creature, which leaked lubricants from its mouth - earth's people called these 'dogs'. The dog stared at the small Cybertronian who transformed.

    'What are you looking at, fleshling? And keep your lubricants to yourself!' Whispered the Decepticon, who glared at the dog. Mikaela was in a room nearby, and the tiny transformer didn't want to let his presence be known. He was in a covert mission. He knew his objective very well - the retrieval of the Allspark shard.

    He used his wheel-feet to roll into another room - the room where Mikaela was. Here, he felt a source of energy coming from a nearby safe, which the human female was holding

    'Soundwave. This is Unit 1 'Wheelie'. Female has sliver from Cube.' Transmitted the Decepticon, holding a small communication device in his hand.

    In space, the massive Decepticon sattelite's eyes light up in red as he receives his minion's message.

    'Soundwave acknowledges. Pursue her. Retrieve it.' Responded the titanic Decepticon, coldly.

    Wheelie shut down the communication device and stored it in his back, and rolled his way toward the safe. While he was talking to Soundwave, Mikaela had put it down, just beside the chair she was standing in. As he approached it, the human received a phone call. It was Sam.

    'Listen. Is the shard safe?' He asked frantically.

    'Yes it's in my safe.' She replied confidently.

    'I worry so much about this... keep an eye on it. Constantly. You hear me? Constantly.' He said, concerned about this. He did not want the shard to fall in the wrong hands. He dreaded what Decepticons would do with it.

    'Ok, Sam, don't worry. I'll protect it.' Reassured Mikaela, and then she ended the conversation. She looked at the safe, and saw the small Decepticon attempting to open it. Instantly, she began kicking him repeatedly.

    'Ouch! That hurts! Do you have any idea how much more painful is having Scalpel fix you?!' Shouted Wheelie as he received repeated kicks. While the Decepticon was damaged, Mikaela ran to get some tongs with which she grabbed the Cybertronian, and rammed him into a wall.

    'Give me the shard, give me the shard! I need that shard! Give me it! If you don't, Soundwave will vaporize me! Please, give me the shard!' Shouted the Decepticon frantically, as he struggled to get out of the female's grip.

    'Quiet!' Replied Mikaela harshly. As she was looking at a table nearby, she noticed a blowtorch. She grabbed it and immediatly destroyed one of the helpless Cybertronian's eyes.

    'Ouch! That's my eye! Are you insane?!' He asked angrily as he was struggling to escape the grip.

    Mikaela used the tongs to throw him in a metallic box, which contained few car parts from her father's car shop.

    'You're staying here for now.'

    Wheelie saw himself in a dark, metallic prison, which he could not escape, despite his repeated hits. All his attempts to break out of the box were futile.

    'It's pretty dark in here... why didn't you give me a flashlight? I'm afraid of the dark!' Said the small Decepticon, with a bit of fear in his voice.

    'I so need Bumblebee now...' Mikaela thought to herself.
     
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    Loved the edit with Sideways, good addin of his ROTF game sniping ability and his bio that he prefers to tag team with larger Decepticons !

    Like this Wheelie better. Definitely feels threatened by Soundwave and all, so his betrayal makes more sense later on.
     
  13. AutobotDefender

    AutobotDefender The Last Prime

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    Thanks for the good feedback. In the next chapters, expect some more Optimus and Megatronus.
     
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    ......................gulp....... : D
     
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    I very very very much like this
     
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    Very Good work. I like how you went deeper into the primes story with the Megatronus
    and the fact that bumblebee just uses the radio. Impressive. Keep the post coming.
     
  17. AutobotDefender

    AutobotDefender The Last Prime

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    Chapter 4

    Location: N.E.S.T. base

    The Autobots were rolling into the hangar, like they always did. They did not know, however, that today would be radically different.

    A man in a suit entered the base hurriedly, and was greeted by one of the soldiers.

    'So nice of you to show up, director Galloway.' He said sarcastically.

    'Save it; Shanghai's a mess!' Replied the man wearing the suit, while still walking. He reached a flight of stairs which led to the second floor of the base. At that floor, there was a screen where video conversations could take place. General Morshower, who was in charge of N.E.S.T. operations, was on that screen, and he was talking to Major Lennox.

    'Report, Major' Said the general.

    'I would like you to hear the report from the Autobot leader himself - Optimus Prime.' Replied Lennox, and in that moment, Optimus transformed and walked toward the screen.

    'General,' said Optimus as he looked at the sceen, 'We have encountered seven Decepticon incursions this year, each on a different continent. They must be looking for something. However, this last time came with a warning.' When he had said this, he showed what he had recorded during his mission in Shanghai: 'The Fallen shall rise again'.

    'Excuse me!' Said Galloway, who was now next to Lennox. He had Optimus' attention now, as the Autobot leader's blue optics were fastened on him.

    'He's Mr. Galloway, director of National Security.' Said the general, shortly before sighing.

    'What could these Decepticons possibly look for? With the Allspark destroyed, and the last remaining shard in the most heavily protected facility our government has, I think there is only one reason why they would be here.' He said angrily while he defiantly glared at Optimus. 'You. The Autobots. They're here to hunt you!'

    In response, Optimus sighed in sadness but still looked into the director's eyes.

    'Under our nation's agreement to let you aliens live here and work side by side with us, you agreed to protect us but not share your advancement in weaponry. Why is that? You still don't trust us even though your kind has pretty much invaded us?!' Said Galloway, extremely tense and angry.

    'We have seen your human capacity for war. It would absolutely do more harm than good.' Replied a serious Optimus while looking directly at the director.

    'But who are you to judge what's the best for us?' Asked Galloway, almost posing a rhetorical question, at least so he thought.

    'We've shed blood, sweat and precious metal together. We've seen them fight, and they've seen us. They've done their homework, they know there have been two world wars. Optimus' thoughts are well-intended.' Said Seargent Epps, who was next to the Autobot leader.

    'You're paid to shoot, not talk, soldier.' Said Galloway angrily while pointing at the Seargent.

    'Don't tempt me.' Muttered Epps, so that he would not be heard by the director. However, Optimus and the other soldier next to him heard what he had said.

    Optimus turned and looked at Epps, seeming concerned for his human comrade. He didn't want him to get in trouble with his superiors because of his anger.

    'Easy.' He said, while looking at the Seargent, shortly before looking at Galloway again.

    'Plus, you've broadcasted a message into space - an open invitation: Come to Earth. Without being approved by the White House or anyone. Don't you think Decepticons could hear that aswell?' Said Galloway, outraged by the Autobot leader's decisions.

    The screen's speakers were suddenly heard 'Let me interrupt you right there, Director, it was approved right here. And it was an Autobot transmission with an unique data signature. Complicated tech. Only an Autobot could hear it.' Said Morshower, however Galloway just changed the subject, without caring about the General's intervention.

    'The Fallen? Shall rise again? Sounds to me like something's coming.' He said, concerned for his nation. Despite his arrogance, Galloway was a patriot at heart. 'If our President decides that we should deny you further asylum on our planet, would you leave peacefully?' Asked Galloway while looking at Optimus' metallic face.

    'Freedom is your right.' He replied. 'If you make that request, we will honour it.' He stepped closer to the platform Galloway was on. 'But before your president decides, please ask him this: What if we leave...' He leaned forward and looked into the director's eyes. '...and you are wrong.'
     
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    Chapter 5

    Sam was in his father's car, looking out the window. He was thinking about the symbols and visions he's seen. What could they mean? Could they lead to something? He realized he's been seeing them ever since he touched the Cube shard, but he wondered, has he absorbed the Allspark itself? Questions clouded Sam's mind... until it started again.

    Sam found himself on a mechanical planet, with large metallic buildings and panels of armor shifting everywhere, and saw the same dark, metallic face he had seen previously. He figured that this had to be some sort of ancient transformer. He had red energy flowing through his body, and it could be seen between his armor panels, but this time, unlike before, he seemed weakened. This Cybertronian approached a person that Sam immediately recognized - it was Megatron, the leader of the Decepticons, whom Sam had defeated two years ago. Except that here, he seemed different. Sam didn't fear him... he feared the one he was speaking to.

    'Optimus plans to betray you, Megatron.' Said the ancient transformer, persuading the young leader. 'You've seen that many admire him and the other Primes, merely because of their lineage. For eons you ruled Cybertron, our planet, besides him. But now, after he's seen fame, he has been corrupted by a lust for power. He wants to overthrow you and lead Cybertron all by himself! The other Primes are all the same. All they want is power to satisfy their evil cravings.' He said angrily, looking into Megatron's blue optics.

    'Optimus would never do this, Megatronus.' Replied Megatron, confidently. 'He's my best friend, my greatest ally. He is like a brother to me.'

    'He's deceived you already, young warrior. He wants to take Cybertron for himself, and you cannot realize it!' Shouted the ancient Cybertronian, glaring at Megatron with rage in his optics.

    'Look there!' He said, pointing his talon-like finger toward a platform nearby. On that platform was a very young Optimus, with his back turned towards the two. He was with those who would one day become the Autobots Sam knew - Ironhide, Bumblebee, Jazz, Ratchet, and many, many more. 'This Prime has corrupted them aswell.' He said, enraged as he clenched his hand into a fist.

    'But... they're just his friends.' Said Megatron, unwilling to accept what the ancient transformer was about to say.

    'Friends, or recruits, Megatron? How many friends do you have, besides me?' Asked Megatronus, trying to talk the young leader into following him.

    In response, Megatron looked down in sadness and sighed deeply. 'Only Soundwave and Shockwave.' He answered, with a tone of sadness in his voice.

    'You see now, Megatron? They are not his friends... they are his army! Surely you see it! You are a military leader, the leader of Cybertron's defensive armies. You know an army when you see it.' He said, angered by Megatron's unwillingness to believe him.

    'But... aren't you a Prime yourself? I took my name from a legend about the Primes, and you were among them. My name was inspired by yours.' Asked Megatron, confused.

    'I am a Prime indeed, one of the very first rulers of Cybertron. But millenia ago, my brothers betrayed me, and stole the Matrix of Leadership from me - a piece of technology that would have returned our race to its lost glory. They rejected me. I, however, was stronger than them, and defeated them, but their offspring remain. Only a Prime can defeat me. They cannot know about me, Megatron. They will conquer Cybertron, Optimus and all the Primes. They must be stopped at once, before they're ready to strike back. It is your duty as Lord High Protector and leader of Cybertron's Defense. Protect our planet from the power-hungry Dynasty of Primes!'

    'I see, but... But... why would they do this? Sentinel and Optimus were my friends.' Said Megatron shocked. 'Why do they want to betray me?!' He asked, outraged by what he had just heard.

    'You have restored glory to our world, my young disciple, and they want more power.' He You must take action immediately! They are greedy and have a thirst for power they always try to hide. Do not believe them, despite what they may say or do. They must be destroyed for the good of our race.' He said darkly, as he persuaded Megatron.

    'I understand, my master... it will be done...' Said Megatron angrily, but with a hint of sadness in his voice as he looked into his master's fiery red optics. As he looked into his optics, Megatron's gained the same shade of red as Megatronus'.

    Next, Sam saw the war on Cybertron. Optimus had defended himself, and fought back against Megatron. The Great Cybertronian War had began. Optimus was the leader of the Autobots he knew now, while Megatron's way of fighting and talking showed that the ancient Cybertronian had deceived him into being what he hated - a power-hungry tyrant.

    Sam was back in his father's car. His father looked concerned.

    'Are you alright?' He asked.

    'Yes, I'm fine...' He answered.
     
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    A really good chapter ! Love the character developments ! Feel sorry for Megatron now.........unlike the actual movie version. HA !
     
  20. AutobotDefender

    AutobotDefender The Last Prime

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    Thanks for the great feedback, Trooper and everyone! These comments keep me writing these chapters. Now, in this chapter, let's just say an old friend comes back...

    Chapter 6

    Soundwave, the Decepticon communications officer, was in space, and was hacking a military sattelite, looking for useful data. After he had hacked it, he heard Optimus Prime's conversation with Galloway. The audio file was immediately heard in the Decepticon's audio processors.

    'What could these Decepticons possibly look for? With the Allspark destroyed, and the last remaining shard in the most heavily protected facility our government has --'

    Soundwave immediately searched through the military database for the location of the Allspark Shard. Now, he had a slight clue. That clue was all he needed.

    He came across a page that was entitled 'Project Iceman Destroyed'. He opened that page and started reading through it. It was a report about Megatron's defeat. It stated that one Allspark shard had been recovered from Megatron's dead body by Optimus Prime himself, and the U.S. government placed it in a heavily guarded N.E.S.T. facility in Diego Garcia.

    'Decepticons, we have located another shard of the Allspark and the location of our leader. Operation: Ressurection will now commence.' Transmitted Soundwave, cold and emotionless as always, but with a hint of happiness in his voice. He launched another metallic, comet-like object toward Earth's surface.

    The meteor impacted just off Diego Garcia's shore, and transformed. This Cybertronian, unlike the other humanoid-like ones, resembled a panther. He had sharp teeth and claws, a long tail that ended with a set of two short swords, with spikes coming out of both. He also had a double missle launcher mounted on his back, and one round, red optic. It was Ravage, Soundwave's best scout, whom he had sent in order to avoid any kind of failure. He wanted this mission to succeed.

    The swift and agile panther-like body of Ravage and his advanced navigation systems helped him locate the N.E.S.T. facility with great ease. He reached a pipe that led directly into that facility. He opened his mouth just above it, and hundreds of small, metallic spheres came out and fell through the pipe. Once they reached the ground, the spheres transformed into very small, insect-like Decepticons. They approached each other as fast as they could and combined, forming a razor-sharp, winged Decepticon drone unit, with a single red optic. The drone was built especially for retrieval purposes.

    The small Decepticon flipped his wasp-like wings as he neared a case where the sliver of the Cube was held. He cut through the glass with his sharp claws, and took the shard in his tiny hand, and prepared to return to Ravage. He was, however, interrupted when the alarm was sounded by a soldier who had seen the intruder. N.E.S.T. teams quickly appeared and started shooting him with machine guns. The drone dodged the bullets swiftly, just before he flew through one of the soldiers, using his body's sharp edges, and got out of the base. He saw Ravage waiting for him, and he entered the larger Decepticon's chest. Ravage fired a couple of missles before transforming into a small Cybertronian jet and flying away.

    The N.E.S.T. soldiers reluctantly reported to the general about the theft of the Allspark shard, before going back into the facility.

    Location: Atlantic Ocean, near the Laurentian Abyss

    Ravage landed on a freighter's deck, and transformed near some construction vehicles, which had Decepticon insignias. Among them were a cement mixer, a dump truck and two excavators.

    'I have retrieved the shard.' Said Ravage, pleased by his own success. 'Let it begin.'

    As soon as the Decepticon scout said that, the construction vehicles transformed, and jumped into the water.

    'I have a bad feeling about this.' Said the smallest of them, fearfully, before diving into the ocean along with Ravage.

    A submarine was in that area. It was a N.E.S.T. submarine that was assigned to guard Megatron's body.

    'We have five contacts diving fast. They're large and they're nearing N.B.E. 1.' Said an officer who looked at the radar. Another officer informed general Morshower through a video conversation about this.

    'We do not know their objectives.' The officer said.

    'This all ties together... they've stolen the last known shard of the Allspark... they may be trying to revive him!' Said the general, alarmed. 'We've got a problem!'

    The Decepticons quickly reached the ocean floor, and saw a lot of dead bodies lying everywhere.

    'What a mess...' Said the biggest of them, whose alt mode seemed to be a large dump truck. 'Mixmaster, I'm going to kill you if I rust. You know how much I hate water.' He added angrily. His voice was deep and dark, while also rasp at the same time.

    'Stop complaining, Long Haul.' Replied the one to whom the largest Decepticon was talking to. He glared at Long Haul, and then turned his red optics away from him.

    'We're here for a purpose.' He said with a grave tone. He was very serious, and seemed to be the leader of this squadron of Decepticons. The squad, along with Ravage, walked through the oceanic grave until they saw the corpse a tall Decepticon, whom all immediately recognised. Mixmaster approached the corpse and cleared its face of some organic creatures.

    'Megatron... what have they done to you...' Mixmaster uttered, shocked to see his leader in such a state. 'Ravage, release the doctor.'

    At Mixmaster's command, the Decepticon scout launched a small, spider-like Cybertronian from his chest that went towards Megatron, examining him. A visor resembling glasses flipped on his optics in order to better observe him, and looked at his chest. He retracted his visor and seemed angry.

    'Need parts! Kill the little one!' Said the doctor, darkly.

    All the large Decepticons approached the smallest of them - Hightower. He had chosen to call himself that because he was unwilling to realize that he was the smallest Decepticon warrior.

    'Uhhh... Guys? Erm...' Said Hightower, with terror in his voice. 'I think I really want to change sides now --- ARGH! NO!' Screamed Hightower as the merciless Decepticons tore him apart and threw what was left of him to the doctor, who used the parts to rebuild their fallen leader. Ravage gave him the Allspark shard.

    'The shard makes energon!' Declared the tiny Cybertronian as he stabbed the shard into Megatron's chest. The Decepticon leader's optics immediately lit up with red and he immediatly used his back-attached thursters to fly his way to the surface.

    Meanwhile, in the submarine, the officer read seven contacts on his screen. 'Sir we have ---' Began the officer, before being cut off by a loud, mechanical growl and an even louder crashing sound - something had flown through the submarine. It was Megatron, who was now nearing surface faster than ever. After he got out of the ocean that served as his grave, he transformed into a Cybertronian jet, resembling his older form, and went into space.
     

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