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  1. Crimsonthunder

    Crimsonthunder Well-Known Member

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    Sorry for the inconvenience with the pictures, my comic was cleared and I will be starting over.



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  2. Sage o' G-fruit

    Sage o' G-fruit Critics gonna critique

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    Comic?
     
  3. Dremare

    Dremare Had an Epiphany

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    I demand a comic! D:<
     
  4. Crimsonthunder

    Crimsonthunder Well-Known Member

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  5. Sage o' G-fruit

    Sage o' G-fruit Critics gonna critique

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    Good so far, but you might want to work on the photography a tad. Try buying a tripod and messing with the zoom/flash features. But the writing is good so far, full of suspense. :D 

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  6. grimlock1972

    grimlock1972 "No Mas" My Wallet

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    very nice start , just work on the photography and you good to go
     
  7. eisen

    eisen "CUT ME SOME SLACKS!"

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    i really like you taking advantage of the bot's lightpiping gimmick, especially on galvy. :thumb 
     
  8. Crimsonthunder

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  9. Strarf

    Strarf Crystal Convoy no more TFW2005 Supporter

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  10. Crimsonthunder

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    Does anyone know how I could get photoshop?
     
  11. Heat Blast

    Heat Blast Laserbeak's Stunt Double

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    Good Comic! What's with the MagnaGuard and the Bionicle, though?
     
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    They're expendable soldiers Galvatron picked up while the Nemesis was stranded in the "Cellulon system"
     
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    Heat Blast Laserbeak's Stunt Double

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    Cool.

    If you get one of the SW TF MagnaGuards, are you going to replace the one you have in the comic?
     
  14. Crimsonthunder

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    Now, once the two comics merge, the new comic will be called "The war begins anew" :) 
     
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    Strarf Crystal Convoy no more TFW2005 Supporter

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    I need to make this thread more popular :D 
     
  17. grimlock1972

    grimlock1972 "No Mas" My Wallet

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    :popcorn  hey who swiped my soda? but seriously good story
     
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    Robticon Out of the Game

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