2D Artwork: Ramming Speed

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  1. King Starscream

    King Starscream <b><font color=blue>The Royal Seeker</font></b> Veteran

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    Classics Ramjet in vehicle mode. Tried to give a bit of a tunnel vision effect with the pencils. Not sure if it works or not. Comments, crits and suggestions appreciated.

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  2. Poho

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    cool! the clouds are the icing on the cake.
     
  3. alphie

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    Very nice! :D 
     
  4. Dreweido

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    wow great job
     
  5. Prime-A-Cron

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    nice, you can just feel the speed looking at it
     
  6. Gears

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    Good job.
     
  7. KA

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    nice but the sideways clouds are totally throwing me off. i thought they were the side of a canyon/cliff in the thumbnail.
     
  8. Prime-A-Cron

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    the clouds arnt realy sideways, Ramjet is sideways. i know it threw me off at first too.
     
  9. Runamuck

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    That's awesome, man. But yeah, the clouds threw me off too.
     
  10. Dark_Convoy

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    Oh, I thought the clouds were sideways too.

    The perspective on the jet however, is perfect.
     
  11. Grimlock_13

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    Agreed 100%
     
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    Wow! That looks awesome!
     
  13. chaosbringer_00

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    Nice!!! Awesome job, let's see some color (and possibly a pic of Ramjet in 'bot mode?)! My one criticism is the steep angle at which the clouds are tilted. I see what you are trying to do, but I think a little less vertical and more horizontal would show Ramjet's speed a bit better. That's just me, though. Either way, great job!
     
  14. Matt Nelson

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    As always, KS, your sense of perspective is the best I've ever seen among the fanartists, BAR NONE. You do amazing work.

    Now, that being said, I almost think it's hampering the effect you're going for here. Perhaps a slightly skewed or stretched perspective might bring about that "tunnel vision" effect, something like a highly forced perspective shot, or one where it's exaggerated at the front. Just a suggestion though, feel free to ignore it if you disagree. :) 

    Matt
     
  15. evilratbat

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    Works well i think with the image turned a little
     

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