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Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Fiction' started by ijuintekka, Aug 12, 2007.

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    ijuintekka Priest of Oghma

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    I am currently in the middle of a work in progress fan fiction, it started with an idea I had ages ago of what would happen if a Decepticon were subjected to what happened to the Autobots in the Season 3 episode "Only Human".

    It's very much in beta, but I would like to get people's opinions on it before I start releasing it by chapter.

    At the moment it's quite long and some scenes need filling and added description, others need inbetweening so the story flows rather than skips.

    Anyhow, to cut a long story short I'd like to know what people think. I'm providing it in HTML format for those would care to download it.

    onlyhumanfanfic.htm
     
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    ijuintekka Priest of Oghma

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    If anybody is reading I have updated with a brief fight inspired by Magnus VS Skywarp classics twinpack.

    I hope someone is reading anyway. ^_^;
     

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