Please check it out

Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Fiction' started by O_Prime05, Nov 9, 2008.

  1. O_Prime05, Nov 9, 2008
    #1
    O_Prime05

    O_Prime05 Katsohiten Prime

    Joined:
    Mar 31, 2008
    Posts:
    100
    Trophy Points:
    56
    Likes:
    +0
    I've started writing a fan fic. If everyone, heck anyone, could go read it and tell me what they think of it that'd be awesome. The link is in my sig. Thanks.
     
  2. GW_Freak, Nov 9, 2008
    #2
    GW_Freak

    GW_Freak Banned

    Joined:
    Dec 30, 2007
    Posts:
    1,835
    Trophy Points:
    126
    Likes:
    +1
    I believe we have a fanfic forum....
     
  3. O_Prime05, Nov 9, 2008
    #3
    O_Prime05

    O_Prime05 Katsohiten Prime

    Joined:
    Mar 31, 2008
    Posts:
    100
    Trophy Points:
    56
    Likes:
    +0
    I just wanted to let ppl know that I had one out there. Just looking for some criticism on my work. That's all.
     
  4. Chaos Muffin, Nov 9, 2008
    #4
    Chaos Muffin

    Chaos Muffin Misadventure Veteran

    Joined:
    Mar 26, 2004
    Posts:
    31,196
    Trophy Points:
    422
    Likes:
    +8,222
    I like all your character names except for the one for the Decepticon's communication officer. Too long and obvious

    Good stuff, I like what you created and where you're going with it.