2D Artwork: Peace! - Arcee

Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Art' started by Soundwave_FSD, Jan 21, 2011.

  1. Soundwave_FSD

    Soundwave_FSD Yoda in a track suit...

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    I've been working on this peice for a while, I don't know why it took me so long to post. But here we have Arcee with an earth mode, Hopefully We'll get something close to this with the recent Generations listing. C&C Please!

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    Also, There is a surprising Similarity to Tedimus Prime's Clipper. I assure you that it is a freaky coinky dink! We were actually drawing these chicks at the same time. Haha. So yeah, Shout out to Tedimus for All the pointers he gave me to increase my skill and what not.
     

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  2. TedimusPrime

    TedimusPrime Well-Known Member

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    Looks good! Proportions seem fair and accurate, the pose is interesting. Pencil lines should be darker. This can easily be corrected by darkening your pencil lines first in photoshop before coloring. I feel like coloring should incorperate a light source. It's important to focus on a light source as it can really help with coloring. I also don't feel like the coloring was dynamic enough. That being said, I really can see improvements in your work, however, you did ask for a critique as well ;) 
     
  3. moreprimeland

    moreprimeland Optimus told me to do it! Moderator TFW2005 Supporter

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    She looks pretty darn good..I like the wink :wink: ..the only thing I would add is her left foot looks like it turned at the ankle just a bit. Good Job!! :thumb 
     
  4. Sunstorm202

    Sunstorm202 TF2er

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    Nice one, and couldn't be better (I'm not a good critic, am I?)
     
  5. Ace Convoy

    Ace Convoy Well-Known Member

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    DUDE!!!! nice
     
  6. deltaprime

    deltaprime The Christian Transfan

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    Huh, I didn't comment on the actual thread yet. Dude, Arcee looks great. I'd love to see an alt mode if you could manage it.
     
  7. NexusZero

    NexusZero 強度の、勇気の愛、平和。

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    That's so cool!

    Good work!
     
  8. John_Force

    John_Force 16xNHRA Funny Car Champ TFW2005 Supporter

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    Very Nice, Soundwave!
    You seem to be getting better and better every drawing I see. Keep up the awesome work!
     
  9. Soundwave_FSD

    Soundwave_FSD Yoda in a track suit...

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    Sadly I don't have photoshop, only gimp. But thanks! I'm always open for your critique!

    I didn't notice that actually, I may have to fix it.

    Maybe, I dunno. Haha, Thanks.

    Thank you!

    Thanks, Actually the vehicle mode is based off of this picture:
    Pink Mazda RX 8

    Thanks you.

    Thanks, I suppose practice makes perfect. haha.
     

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