Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by Megatron_91, Aug 19, 2011.
.........wow just sad and funny
Never knew Shining Armor would get that desperate.
"YOU CAN READ MINDS, CAN'T YOU!?"
oh I loved that final panel
Can't blame him for trying
XD ahhh Desperation XD
In his defense, when a woman says something like that, they PROOOOBABLY mean otherwise.
Ahh, the bittersweet moment of catching up to a long-running comic thread. Sweet because I've finally read it all; bitter because I will now have to wait like the rest of the mortals to find out what happens next!
This is very good. To be honest, I did try reading it back in the beginning, and couldn't get past the blurry photographs. But when I noticed recently that you were over 600 pages, I thought I'd give it another try - and I'm very glad I stuck with it.
Your writing and dialogue has been consistently solid. Each of your characters has their own voice, and you've managed to keep them true to that. Your sense of timing and pacing is excellent; your photography is all ready good and continues to improve (and I don't just mean finding the macro setting or getting a better camera, I mean things like composition, framing and lighting), and your f/x are above average (certainly better than mine!) Indeed, my only real criticism would be: stop apologising so much! (And son, when the Canadian tells you to stop apologising, you can be confident you're overdoing it.)
Never apologise for your story. If you promise an update and miss it, or something like that, sure, express your regret. But the story is what the story is, and either you have confidence in it, or you don't. If you don't, don't post it. If you do, then put it up there and let it do its thing. Remember that the readers will never know if you change something, so you aren't wronging them by altering the script.
You tell good stories. Be proud of them!
I'm glad I stuck with it, because I've very much enjoyed this so far, and look forward to all the rest!
I can't wait to see how you have WFC Soundwave and SG Soundwave interact with each other.
YOU CAN READ MINDS, CAN YOU?
Oh, don't worry, this is going in a much greater direction than simply that.
Wow. Thanks a lot, that really means a lot to me coming from someone who's been around the funnies forum for as long as you have. I'm really thankful you stuck around and that you enjoyed what I've put out so far and I hope you'll continue to enjoy it into the future.
As for your one criticism, I couldn't agree more. Even IRL I have a bad tendency to apologize far too often (it annoys the hell out of my sister.) I do actively try to keep an eye out for when I'm doing that and try to stifle it when I can, but some of them just seep through the proverbial cracks. And I do agree with what you said about Pride in your stories. I guess, deep down, I do have pride for all the stories I've put out so far; there's just some things I wish I could go back and redo and improve which I'm sure is a feeling most comic creators have at least every once and a while. The biggest one for me is Nostalgia Crisis. There's a lot about that one I wish I could redo.
All in all, thanks for sticking around so long. I really, really enjoy this ind of critique and criticism and I'm glad I could get it from someone who's been a member of this forum for as long as you have.
That is on the slate for future updates.
Alright everyone, it's time to kick off the third, five-part story-line. I'm also baking that special, Christmas treat today I talked about, so I'll take pictures for the recipe update today while I'm doing it.
I would also like to say that I have successfully finished backing-up Out of the Box, so a scare like what we recently went through won't happen again in the future.
Pinkie trying to help? This won't end well.
this is going to be interesting
When Pinkie has ideas the best thing to do is RUN.
This is going to either go very wrong or hilariously wrong.
Either way, it's gonna' go wrong somehow.
I don't think this will end well...
Neon Pinkie: I couldn't agree more!
AP101: Yeah, just leave it to M_91's Pinkie.
666 PAGES AHHH
but Pinkie came at the right time.
Pinkie knows how Time Lord technology works? Mother of God.
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