Out of the Box

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  1. Ømnidrive

    Ømnidrive Stop.....think......fart.....and keep on going

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    .........wow just sad and funny :popcorn  :lolol 
     
  2. AndreaPrime101

    AndreaPrime101 AP101

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    :lolol  Never knew Shining Armor would get that desperate.
     
  3. Warpshard

    Warpshard Well-Known Member

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    :lolol  "YOU CAN READ MINDS, CAN'T YOU!?"
     
  4. King Waspinator

    King Waspinator Well-Known Member

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    :lol :lol  oh I loved that final panel
     
  5. Wars

    Wars Regular At Swerve's™

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    Can't blame him for trying :lol 
     
  6. Fanatic97

    Fanatic97 Fanatic97

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    XD ahhh Desperation XD
     
  7. LegoTFGuy

    LegoTFGuy Master Builder

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    :lolol  In his defense, when a woman says something like that, they PROOOOBABLY mean otherwise.
     
  8. Vagabond Elf

    Vagabond Elf Well-Known Member

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    Ahh, the bittersweet moment of catching up to a long-running comic thread. Sweet because I've finally read it all; bitter because I will now have to wait like the rest of the mortals to find out what happens next!

    This is very good. To be honest, I did try reading it back in the beginning, and couldn't get past the blurry photographs. But when I noticed recently that you were over 600 pages, I thought I'd give it another try - and I'm very glad I stuck with it.

    Your writing and dialogue has been consistently solid. Each of your characters has their own voice, and you've managed to keep them true to that. Your sense of timing and pacing is excellent; your photography is all ready good and continues to improve (and I don't just mean finding the macro setting or getting a better camera, I mean things like composition, framing and lighting), and your f/x are above average (certainly better than mine!) Indeed, my only real criticism would be: stop apologising so much! (And son, when the Canadian tells you to stop apologising, you can be confident you're overdoing it.)

    Never apologise for your story. If you promise an update and miss it, or something like that, sure, express your regret. But the story is what the story is, and either you have confidence in it, or you don't. If you don't, don't post it. If you do, then put it up there and let it do its thing. Remember that the readers will never know if you change something, so you aren't wronging them by altering the script.

    You tell good stories. Be proud of them!

    I'm glad I stuck with it, because I've very much enjoyed this so far, and look forward to all the rest!
     
  9. Gauntletblade

    Gauntletblade Wrecker

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    I can't wait to see how you have WFC Soundwave and SG Soundwave interact with each other.
     
  10. Ømnidrive

    Ømnidrive Stop.....think......fart.....and keep on going

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    True dat!!! :lolol 
     
  11. Autovolt 127

    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    YOU CAN READ MINDS, CAN YOU? :lolol 
     
  12. Megatron_91

    Megatron_91 Minion of Trixie

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    Oh, don't worry, this is going in a much greater direction than simply that. :ev: 

    :lol :lol :lol 

    Wow. Thanks a lot, that really means a lot to me coming from someone who's been around the funnies forum for as long as you have. I'm really thankful you stuck around and that you enjoyed what I've put out so far and I hope you'll continue to enjoy it into the future.

    As for your one criticism, I couldn't agree more. Even IRL I have a bad tendency to apologize far too often (it annoys the hell out of my sister.) I do actively try to keep an eye out for when I'm doing that and try to stifle it when I can, but some of them just seep through the proverbial cracks. And I do agree with what you said about Pride in your stories. I guess, deep down, I do have pride for all the stories I've put out so far; there's just some things I wish I could go back and redo and improve which I'm sure is a feeling most comic creators have at least every once and a while. The biggest one for me is Nostalgia Crisis. There's a lot about that one I wish I could redo. :lol 

    All in all, thanks for sticking around so long. I really, really enjoy this ind of critique and criticism and I'm glad I could get it from someone who's been a member of this forum for as long as you have.

    That is on the slate for future updates.

    Alright everyone, it's time to kick off the third, five-part story-line. I'm also baking that special, Christmas treat today I talked about, so I'll take pictures for the recipe update today while I'm doing it.

    Enjoy!

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    I would also like to say that I have successfully finished backing-up Out of the Box, so a scare like what we recently went through won't happen again in the future.
     
  13. AgentAlabama113

    AgentAlabama113 I found a Macguffin.

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    Pinkie trying to help? This won't end well. :lol  :popcorn 
     
  14. King Waspinator

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    this is going to be interesting :popcorn 
     
  15. bookwormdalek

    bookwormdalek Gotta get a grip

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    When Pinkie has ideas the best thing to do is RUN.
     
  16. Warpshard

    Warpshard Well-Known Member

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    :popcorn  This is going to either go very wrong or hilariously wrong.

    Either way, it's gonna' go wrong somehow.
     
  17. mandiprime97

    mandiprime97 Well-Known Member

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    :popcorn 

    I don't think this will end well...
     
  18. AndreaPrime101

    AndreaPrime101 AP101

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    Neon Pinkie: I couldn't agree more!
    AP101: Yeah, just leave it to M_91's Pinkie.

    Anyways: :popcorn 
     
  19. Blazere

    Blazere :)

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    666 PAGES AHHH

    I'm sorry.

    but Pinkie came at the right time.
     
  20. agentSAP2006

    agentSAP2006 Avatar by Pinpoint

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    Pinkie knows how Time Lord technology works? Mother of God.
     

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