First off I know TylerMirage is also working on one like thi. well, This is my version of the film that I wanted to see, but due to things like writers strike guild, and Shia's hand injury a lot of plans for the movie had to be taken out. Here I have a list of things that I'd wish was taken out, and scenese that needed to be shown. I'm sure I covered everything so if you think that I missed one let me know. Bay and Co. did an impressive Tf movie again, don't get me wrong in that direction, it's just that due to the circumstances during filiming, Bay had to put some input into the script (something he had to do since Orci and Kurtzman were rushing in a hotel getting the script finished but action scenese mostly, & unfortunately not what I wanted) mostly action scenes and who knows what else. Well ok here it is check it out let me know what you think, some scenes that should be taken out, or add more to ; 1.SideswipevsSideways: Instead of killing off Sideways quickly, the writers could develop the scene more extensively and have sideways give sidewsipe a good fight before he's killed. 2. Sam's University: Sam's mother jumping behind a students back was unecessary. This could be replaced with a mild dialouge joke that she could play while stoned by the green brownie. 3. Alice: This has been discussed a lot, so please don't hang me for this. A new scense showing Alice's origin or at least who sent her, this way the audience can understand why Bumblebee couldn't detect her. 4. Megatron's rebirth: Right before the constructicons revive megs, Mixmaster should be introduced by some small dialogue between him and rampage. (u could post ideas) After megs is immediately brought back and takes off, the constructions also immerge from the sea under Longhual's or Scrappers command to seek out destruction and mayhem once in the city. 5. Megatron on cybertron: After megs returns from cybertron, we see the autobots split up in two but the dialouge was never shown between the them. After prime finds out Megs is back, he informs Jolt and sideswipe, along Ironhide about the icident, and then makes a plan to split up in teams. 6. Alice's tentacles: This is debatable, but really does not bug me. But anyway, I think that instead of grabbing Sam with her tounge, she could have used a tentacle that forms out from her chest or her fingers. Anyway, I really thought of not including this one, but what the heck, I just felt that the toungue thing has been seen before in movies. 7. Forest scene: Once Primes is being defeated, BB informs the rest of the autobots that they might not get to Prime on time, this way the audience might not be confused as to where the other autobots went to, even though it was pretty much explained, but not too well, I think. 8. Mixmaster on the bridge: How did he get up their? We never saw that did we.. But it could be switched easily by including Longhaul to tell mixy to climb up the bridge to be seen by Starscream and wait for megatron and the fallen's command. or what do you think could have been good? 9. 1st protoforms: When the fallen finds out Primes dead, the protoforms land on earth, but we never got to see them transform fully, again. the protoform they could have used to transform fully was the one that grabbed sams parents. 12. Simmons arse: I don't think I need to explain why this scene needs to be taken out. 13. Decepticons search for Sam: When Starscream speaks Longhaul in Cybertronian, Longhaul should also reply, rather than just a roar, maybe ; "the boy may not be here!", and starscream replies; "keep searching!" 14. Final scene: Instead of just Sam and prime during the end of the film, the rest of the autobots are also surrounding them on the aircraft carrier, this way we know who survived.