Optimash mess up

Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Fiction' started by Tyripticon, Jul 25, 2011.

  1. Tyripticon, Jul 25, 2011
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    Tyripticon

    Tyripticon I will crush megatron

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    Optimus i'm picking up a strange cybertronian reading. Hu Hu who said that? Ahem me rachet. Uh... OK dude.My name Isn't dude. Yes it is dude. NO IT ISN'T PRIME! Yes it is iron hide. Oh brother hes getting paint schemes mixed up. Whoa whoa come down prime. who said that. Me Prowl du . OK man. My name isn't man! yes it is not. thank you prime. Your welcome man. GRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!! I know how you feel Prowl. Its man. Hey prowl want to go grab some energon goodies. Good idea Rachet

    More on the way of mest up prime!!!!!!!!
     
  2. general saberwi, Jul 25, 2011
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    general saberwi

    general saberwi legoformer

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    WTF !? shouldn't this be in fan fiction, or something ? also, you need to invest in a good spell checker, cause your spelling is terrible. just saying.
     
  3. 2ndSndWve, Jul 25, 2011
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    :wtf: 
     
  4. Plastic_nomer, Jul 25, 2011
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    Plastic_nomer Doing the unmentionables

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    Oh boy, here we go again.
     
  5. Superquad7, Jul 26, 2011
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    . . . . and here we are in Fan Fiction!

    I'd highly recommend writing something like this in a script format as well as working on your grammar structure just a bit. It sounds like you've some cool ideas, but just keep in mind that you're writing for an audience :) 
     
  6. SavageThunder, Dec 2, 2011
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    still despite the grammer errors, i like it! its very promising you know.