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  1. Biotoakid

    Biotoakid I've never been wrong

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    Not really a funny. I'm not sure what to make it yet.
    It's serious right now.
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  2. Fez Findie

    Fez Findie Well-Known Member

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    This... is actually a less rarely seen a point of view in a photocomic. TF's stranded in an alien world (to'em) and them bein' hunted down by organized military unit/s...

    :popcorn 
     
  3. Lock Cade

    Lock Cade Tarn Fangirl TFW2005 Supporter

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    Interesting...
     
  4. Strarf

    Strarf Nitro Zeus TFW2005 Supporter

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    :popcorn 
     
  5. Biotoakid

    Biotoakid I've never been wrong

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    I have an update. Don't expect so two a day though.
    The voices coming from the chopper are humans
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  6. Strarf

    Strarf Nitro Zeus TFW2005 Supporter

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    :popcorn 
     
  7. Sage o' G-fruit

    Sage o' G-fruit Critics gonna critique

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    Damn, the writing here is excellent! :popcorn 

    Only one suggestion though, try using Gimp for your effects. It's free, easy to use, and there are a bunch of fantastic tutorials in the tutorial thread up above. Other than that, I can't really think of anything to improve on TBH. :D 
     
  8. Biotoakid

    Biotoakid I've never been wrong

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    What is Gimp?
     
  9. Sage o' G-fruit

    Sage o' G-fruit Critics gonna critique

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  10. Biotoakid

    Biotoakid I've never been wrong

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  11. power3921

    power3921 Well-Known Member

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    Your off to a great start!
     
  12. Biotoakid

    Biotoakid I've never been wrong

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    I decided to do something serious. I did a comedy
    but got bored with it. So repetitive...

    Yes, your interested!

    Two popcorn's! I must be doin' great!

    I don't hear that everyday!

    Thankyou!
     
  13. Biotoakid

    Biotoakid I've never been wrong

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    Hate having a post by me under a post by me, but, whatevs >.>

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    It's supposed to say 'pick' not 'pig'

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    This is Blazemaster talking. Not the humans

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  14. Andersonh1

    Andersonh1 Man, I've been here a LONG time Veteran

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    This is pretty interesting stuff, and it echoes the current IDW comics with the theme of Transformers trying to stay hidden in a hostile human world. I like the way we've followed Blazemaster for a couple of comics now, and he's remained in copter mode the whole time, watching and commenting on events.

    Nice work. :thumb 
     
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    This is pretty darn good dude! Loved that shot of scorponok at the beginning! Very interesting story angle you've got going here!
     
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  17. Hype1

    Hype1 D Witwicky biographer

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    Gots my attention here...excellent start indeed, just jump into GIMP when you can to make the visuals cleaner.
     
  18. Biotoakid

    Biotoakid I've never been wrong

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    I liked the idea from the comics a lot. Even though I only have the
    first issue. I'm still thinking on what to turn this into. I need a light
    box for Long Haul though...

    I just thought the funny idea was a little stale. There's the occasional new
    funny that really is funny. *cough* Ripoffs Anonymous *cough*. But
    there's few serious comics. I really like the Out of the Dead Land comics.

    I've been seeing a lot of popcorn lately :) 

    Hype1
    I've got to find a tutorial first.


    I may have an update tonight. Batteries are low on my camera though...
     
  19. Anodythe

    Anodythe Well-Known Member

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    Oh wow! This is a great plot! I like that your camera work in close in and tight. Makes it seem more personal. And Prime can only sit and watch.
     
  20. TCracker

    TCracker おもちゃは今とても暑いです

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    Nice!!
     

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