New song by me

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  1. kraven

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    So... anybody listen?

    Sorry to bump Im just proud of this one and want to share... :/
     
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    Hm, very interesting. The only thing I can suggest is a louder volume for the vocals. Did you have a specific thing in mind for this?
     
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    Yeah I think the samples need to be a little louder but I really think I need to work on the clarity of the samples. Its funny, I found that at low volumes you can understand it better.

    Anyway, thanks for the feedback!

    Oh and what do you mean when you ask if I have something specific in mind for this?
     
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    Hey this is pretty cool! It is really neat that you were able to put this together by yourself.

    couple of bits of crit.

    The structure is a bit weak, it is a bit repetitive, and could use a much stronger intro and hook. People mentioned the sample's volume, but you may want to think about cutting down on some of them and or possibly trying to integrate them a bit more fully into the song as they seem a bit tacked on at the moment. Really needs a base line.


    Please keep creating and I look forward to hearing more stuff from you in the future.
     
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    I mean, was this for a project? Or did you just make it for fun? Either way, it's a lot better than some indi artists I've listened to in the past.
     
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    You might wanna clean the audio up a a bit and also amplify the sound. But other than that, sounds great. Also followed you on Soundcloud, do follow me back! :D 
     
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    Neat.
     
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    nice. but like others have said, audio needs amplifying. otherwise it's kick ass. really like the guitar and i've always loved when songs have quotes in them
     
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    thanks for listening and for the feedback you guys!

    Yeah it is repetitive but I dont mind too much sence its so short. And yeah, I kind of rushed the bass, didnt really feel like wrighting an actual line for it so I just played along with the guitar.

    Wow thanks, and yeah its just for fun.

    cool thanks, will do
     
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    Honestly, I like the samples being quieter like they are. For me anyway, it helps being em out as being just that, rather than burying the song as a whole. Also like others mentioned, longer loops & whatever can't hurt, but I enjoyed what I heard, so in that respect you did your job. :) 
     

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