My Toys Secret Life

Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by spawnofunicron, Jan 15, 2009.

  1. spawnofunicron

    spawnofunicron Well-Known Member

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    Here is the first comic i made so i will update but until i get a better camera and i learn to make comics a little better (and hope you guys can help me with that on lasers and better speech bubbles) than there will be one bot on the stage and saying whats on his mind so here is the intro
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    By supermegatron123 at 2009-01-15
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  2. 0ptimus__Prime

    0ptimus__Prime Autobot Commander

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    Wow. Those are small pictures.

    The best place to upload it is at Photobucket all you have to do is make a free account and upload the pictures just like any other image hosting site.
     
  3. spawnofunicron

    spawnofunicron Well-Known Member

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    Thanks for the other site but i fanally can have pictures now that i know
     
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    More please. After all if Optimus likes it, it has to be good!
     
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    TCracker おもちゃは今とても暑いです

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    Lets see some more.
     
  6. Dremare

    Dremare Had an Epiphany

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    Well, I think you can improve on some things for you comic (not trying to be mean, but helpful):

    1. Move stuff out of the way. It's going to be helpful when you're making a comic and you want clear shots.

    2. Try GIMP. It helped improve my comic a lot.

    3. Use spellcheck. Some of the words are misspelled.
     
  7. spawnofunicron

    spawnofunicron Well-Known Member

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    Well i used gimp but im not that good at it but it will get better and it doesn't do spell checking on mine but there will be more i may post more over the weekend though when im bored ( that means you will get an update but don't expect it to be that good though
     
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    spawnofunicron Well-Known Member

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    Well here is my new update i think you guys will know this is a stupid joke and sorry for not updating more but i still need to work with gimp a little more but here is the next update
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    By supermegatron123 at 2009-01-22
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    By supermegatron123 at 2009-01-22
    i dont have the heart to tell him:lol 
     
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    spawnofunicron Well-Known Member

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    So what do you guys think about the comic?
     
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    revrun Energonbots roll out!

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    Nice start. Will wait for more.
     
  12. Autobus Prime

    Autobus Prime Transit Former

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    :lol 

    But...your legs are shining, too, Henkei Prime!

    I think Henkei's just got a bit of trailer envy.
     
  13. spawnofunicron

    spawnofunicron Well-Known Member

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    Yah this was a mistake in the typing but it gave me a great chance to break the 4th wall. So to everyone who reads my comic gets at least a little chuckle.:) 
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    By supermegatron123 at 2009-01-27
    Don't ask me for the name of the action master yet because i don't even know:eek: 
    Edit: i forgot to put in pokemon but still i think it works.
     
  14. spawnofunicron

    spawnofunicron Well-Known Member

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    Here a bigger picture for the webcomic banner i'll be using
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    By supermegatron123 at 2009-01-23
     
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    Andersonh1 Man, I've been here a LONG time Veteran

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    He is a rather cut down version of Unicron. Must be disappointing for the little punk. :lol 
     
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    spawnofunicron Well-Known Member

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    Yah but he is a rather good short version for Unicron and i got him from a friend for free. Also Shane from an expert do you think other people will like my comic?
     
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    spawnofunicron Well-Known Member

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    I'm kinda sad my comic is not that well received and that not a lot of people are reading it so i would actually like some more feedback if you guys would be so kind.
     
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    TCracker おもちゃは今とても暑いです

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    Just keep posting dude. Soon you will have a barrage of readers reading your stuufs. Don't give up. With time, you will improve. :thumb 
     
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    I wouldn't worry about it. There are lots of people who just read comics and don't post comments a lot. Myself included. :D  Just wait a while, keep posting comics, and I'm sure you'll get more comments. That's what I always do! I've had times where I've posted three comics in a row and had no comments. :lol 

    And lucky you, you have Cheetor. As bad as he seems to some people, I still want him. I've never gotten a BW Cheetor figure. XP
     
  20. spawnofunicron

    spawnofunicron Well-Known Member

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    Thanks for the support and universe Cheetor is actually a good figure but the few things that screw it up are the weapons in my opinion
     

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