2D Artwork: my scrapped fancomic

Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Art' started by Beamer, Feb 1, 2006.

  1. Beamer

    Beamer adlibing visually

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    this has been sitting in my portfolio for a bout 3 months now. i started it and just couldn't find the time or drive to work on it anymore.
    basically, i tried to include as many fancharacters as i could and kinda lost focus of telling a good story. i really didn't even have the dialogue set yet. i do plan on working on a new one eventually with a much smaller group and a better story. ^^


    anyways... hope you guys enjoy it.

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  2. thefrozenred

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    Well, it LOOKS superb. Definitely looking forward to your next foray into a fan comic. :thumb 
     
  3. Josh

    Josh Comic Color-guy

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    definately looks good man

    your facial expressions just plain rock in this
     
  4. Gears

    Gears buh-buh-body ya Veteran

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    It looks great!:thumb 
     
  5. reillyd

    reillyd Well-Known Member

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    I just don't understand it. Your art is great (especially the first page with cybertron). All you need to do is letter the story and finish a few more pages. Why stop?
    I could understand if you were disappointed with the art, but when its good, why stop now?
     
  6. KA

    KA PENIS GOES WHERE?!!

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    thats the thing abt pin up artist and sequential artist.

    while pin up guys tend to be more perfectionist and focus on details, sequential guys are equally admirable in their consistency, pacing and layout flow.

    some guys excel at both.

    if you ask me, doing sequential is much harder since you rely more on technique and organization.
     
  7. Beamer

    Beamer adlibing visually

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    well... as i stated above and in the deviant art posts... bad/barely existant story plus not enough time. lol
    especially since i've moved to this new base (where i am currently). i've not posted much art up in the past 4 months. and once i got 4 pages into this, the story just turned into a big "jam-as-many-fancharacters-as-i-can-into-a-page-to-make-other-people-happy" thing... if i do my own fancomic, i want it to be story driven(and actually, i'm already working on that). in the end, this wasn't what i wanted... so it had nothing to do with not being pleased with the art. sequential art isn't a problem for the most part. i can handle that. ^_^
     
  8. Rattrap587

    Rattrap587 Maximal Ground Operations

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    Great work so far!
     
  9. shumworld

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    i think you should like do a 5th page with X-Warlock shooting Beamer and then say. "THE END?"

    i kid, i kid. anyhoo i'm sure your next one will be cool and looking forward to it.
     
  10. Brave Magnus

    Brave Magnus Hecho en Argentina

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    :rock  :rock  I love the bot in the cape. YOu show that character before, right?
    Got more?
     
  11. Beamer

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