Heavy/Scratch: my first custom! critique please

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  1. xultimatexdoomx

    xultimatexdoomx Active Member

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    hey this is my first custom attempt i spent a few days working on this.. im very open to critique and so on ! i have a few more in the works but i found this to be really enjoyable and time consuming haha! but it is something id like to get good at !

    thanks justin
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  2. Quantum25

    Quantum25 Well-Known Member

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    Awesome job on your first custom. Looking forward to what you have up next.
     
  3. ThinkTank Customs

    ThinkTank Customs TFW2005-Citizen

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    This is really your First custom? F:mad: &ing Bad ass! I Love how well the fakebusker hands wirk on Classic/g1 toys too! Awesome Job dude! Congrats!
     
  4. Buzby74

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    does he still transform?

    Looking good in bot mode, thumbs up for this fab first attempt. looking forwad to next one
     
  5. SPLIT LIP

    SPLIT LIP AKA Beve Stuscemi

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    That's your first custom? Geddatta town. That's awesome. I don't really see what there is to critique except maybe try and disguise the Starscream hips better so they don't look so overdetailed compared to the rest, but even then it might only be so obvious because of the camera flash on that shiney paint.

    I wish my first custom turned out that good. I wish my thirty-first custom looked that good!
     
  6. The621

    The621 Fuck you, that's why!

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    Nice! Does it still transform?
     
  7. mazintotoro

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    Looks great. The use of the Bumblebee head made me laugh.
     
  8. Destructicon 1

    Destructicon 1 Original Gestalt

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    Looks good man. I like the 3rd pic.
     
  9. Solrac333

    Solrac333 G1 got it right!

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    FIRST custom! That is really good. I really can't see anything to make it better.
     
  10. xultimatexdoomx

    xultimatexdoomx Active Member

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    yeah first one !!! but ive been lurking the internet and this forum and youtube on how to's and this was the finished product! and man i wish it transformed !!! i couldnt figure out how to attach the legs on the inside so he could ...kinda got lazy and used modeling plastic and 2 part cold mix plastic to hold the legs into the body and into the knees of his boots. he is on ebay at the moment ...i spent around 300 on making him 2 shockwaves and supplies ! all i honestly care about is trying to make more !! soundwave and a bumblebee are next ... does anyone know how to get a custom soundwave head g1 style?? i need 2!!
     
  11. Rumble02

    Rumble02 Radicon of Obliticons

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    Very very good. just need alt mode
     
  12. Alloy Alchemist

    Alloy Alchemist Decepticon sympathizer

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    Dude this guy came out GREAT for your 1st custom,can't wait too see how good your next work will be. Your could contact encline or spoonman about a head. Ol' spoonman could make you anything and I believe encline makes casts of soundwave's head. There are a couple of other great customizers on here that make some great heads but I can't seem to think of there names right now.

    And welcome to the Radicons man! Awesome 1st post!
     
  13. taurusfire1

    taurusfire1 NUTS OF DESTRUCTION!!

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    Awesome
     
  14. NexMortuus

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    Great first custom man will be seeing more?
     
  15. chansformers

    chansformers butcher of the bots

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    not too shabby!!!:thumbs2: 
     
  16. xultimatexdoomx

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    @nexmortuus yes sir ..im now doing a after battle bumblebee and a soundwave!hoping the go well
     
  17. Spyne98

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    Better than my 1st custom. Great job.
     
  18. xultimatexdoomx

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