2D Artwork: my crappy prowl design

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  1. starscream209

    starscream209 the king of kings

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    i did this crappy design all in pen.....i'm just puting ideas down on paper cuz im going to make a tf comic book for my prep project and prowl is going to be a 2008 chp challenger cop car, it's not done but let me know what you think
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  2. OZEL

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    The car art is fantastic for being done straight out in pen! If you did some pencilling and refining and then inked it (which I'm sure you'll do later) you could get far better results.

    Overall a great start though. Keep it up!

    -OZEL
     
  3. WhiteMocha

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    I think it looks really nice for essentially being a doodle. You have a good sense of the beefiness of the car, and sharp contrast between the white and black parts. The subtle reflective sheen along the fenders looks great. When you do the final version, I would use this as a guide and build some perspective lines off it (a horizon line, some vanishing points, and lines going back from each major angle of the car). That will help tighten up the perspective one it. But great work overall! And hey, the wheels look good... circles are tough in perspective but yours look pretty solid.
     
  4. Venksta

    Venksta Render Project Creations TFW2005 Supporter

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    Thats a very powerful looking police car. It looks a lot like those awesome concept drawings for cars, which actually look better than the actual car that gets made. Hope to see you finish this off. :) 
     
  5. Gears

    Gears buh-buh-body ya Veteran

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    Pretty cool!
     
  6. shade 0066

    shade 0066 Live Fast, Drive Faster!

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    Not a bad start. The '08 challenger is one of my favorite cars. I cant wait to see it done.
     
  7. Trypitcon

    Trypitcon No, I can't spell.

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    CdnShockwave The Prince of Poses TFW2005 Supporter

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    Don't count yourself out. Everyone has to start somewhere, and what you've got there is a lot more drawing talent than I have.
     
  9. Thunder_Cracker

    Thunder_Cracker Friendship is Evil!!

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    :thumb  Fantastic drawing man, you got skills so don't be shy to show them
     
  10. starscream209

    starscream209 the king of kings

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    ok so i have spent some time working on a new one in pencils, so this is what i got so far, im sorry if you cant see some lines, cuz my scanner is acting gay i had to take a picture of it, so let me know what you think and if i should change anything before i hit it up with a pen.
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  11. bryan_too

    bryan_too is Deadpool

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    Awesome drawing of Prowl,man.
     
  12. Trypitcon

    Trypitcon No, I can't spell.

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    Very cool :thumb 
     
  13. Fairlady_Z

    Fairlady_Z Official Voice of Flareup

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    :thumb  I've always liked Prowl.
     
  14. Infosaur

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    So many hoods today are so flat they make terrible chests. The Charger does have a patern on the hood. But boy I'd be tempted to use it as a cut line. and get some of those forms into other positions.
     
  15. timshinn73

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    Your second drawing is much better. Nice job! Keep 'em coming!
     
  16. evilratbat

    evilratbat EVILRATBAT

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    better look on the Second one the Car seemed a Little Flattern On One Side But the perspective you Got right more in the Second Getting better
     

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