First of all i'll gather my previous work toki is not a bumblebee: http://punkiest.deviantart.com/art/transformers-metalocalypse-75255399 notre dame de optimus: http://punkiest.deviantart.com/art/notre-dame-de-optimus-75471635 huchback of optimus prime: http://punkiest.deviantart.com/art/huchback-of-optimus-prime-75471491 man at arms,brawn,murderface http://punkiest.deviantart.com/art/resemblances-75255596 and theatreformers(For faster viewing) http://punkiest.deviantart.com/gallery/#theatreformers it isn't finished yet. well i actually didn't like my work but my girlfriend insisted to post here.
Hmm...a little bit too random for my taste perhaps. The close-up shots are a little blurry, you might want to check to see if your camera has a macro mode option (the little flower symbol). Spelling errors and disjointed sentences are also quite apparent, but perhaps english is not your first language. Sorry that your first reply had to be one filled with criticism... Hopefully your coming strips will be better?
Are you kidding, i appreciate your comments. Well my camera's options is limited. Well yes, english is not my first language. I'll do properly next time. thanks a lot again.