mentat_emre's amateur works

Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by mentat_emre, Jan 24, 2008.

  1. mentat_emre

    mentat_emre Well-Known Member

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    First of all i'll gather my previous work
    toki is not a bumblebee:
    http://punkiest.deviantart.com/art/transformers-metalocalypse-75255399
    notre dame de optimus:
    http://punkiest.deviantart.com/art/notre-dame-de-optimus-75471635
    huchback of optimus prime:
    http://punkiest.deviantart.com/art/huchback-of-optimus-prime-75471491
    man at arms,brawn,murderface
    http://punkiest.deviantart.com/art/resemblances-75255596
    and

    theatreformers(For faster viewing)
    http://punkiest.deviantart.com/gallery/#theatreformers

    it isn't finished yet. well i actually didn't like my work but my girlfriend insisted to post here.
     

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  2. DilaZirK

    DilaZirK Is bullheaded.

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    Hmm...a little bit too random for my taste perhaps.

    The close-up shots are a little blurry, you might want to check to see if your camera has a macro mode option (the little flower symbol).

    Spelling errors and disjointed sentences are also quite apparent, but perhaps english is not your first language.

    Sorry that your first reply had to be one filled with criticism... Hopefully your coming strips will be better? :) 
     
  3. mentat_emre

    mentat_emre Well-Known Member

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    Are you kidding, i appreciate your comments. Well my camera's options is limited.
    Well yes, english is not my first language. I'll do properly next time.
    thanks a lot again.
     
  4. Ironhide2005

    Ironhide2005 PS3tag=DeaDPooLTFW

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    I think its one of the most funny comics I've seen I can't wait for more!