2D Artwork: Megatron Comic Page Attempt

Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Art' started by Jetstreamx, Nov 30, 2007.

  1. Jetstreamx

    Jetstreamx Lord Jettington

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    Yeah. I wanted to do a TF comic page, this is what I got. I would like to do more like this, but I don't have much time thanks to school. Bah. Well, Christmas break is soon, so maybe then haha. This was based on the MP Megatron design for a large extent. I must say, I have some difficulty, but I'm pleased with how it came out.

    Click this link to see the page.
     
  2. Chaos Prime

    Chaos Prime Combaticon

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    It's looking good so far.
     
  3. Ktulu

    Ktulu Whoosh TFW2005 Supporter

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    Looks nice. Panel 2 could've been depicted more clearly though
     
  4. Jetstreamx

    Jetstreamx Lord Jettington

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    Yeah. Of course, my problem with Panel two was more the size issues. Randomly Generated Autobot (RGA) looks tiny in comparison to Megatron in that panel if you pay attention to the the problem in the foreshortening, while in panel three he's a bit larger looking. Looks like I've pulled a G1 error.

    But back to the point, I do think that there wasn't enough emphasis on the punch now that you mention it. Thanks. (Kind of wants to redraw the page again)
     
  5. Rumble02

    Rumble02 Radicon of Obliticons

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    better than i can dream of doing
     
  6. kjeevahh

    kjeevahh n/a

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    man, i wasn't expecting that last line, i thought it was going to say something better than that.... 'some sacrifice others'
     
  7. Gears

    Gears buh-buh-body ya Veteran

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    Pretty good. I would of made the last line "Some sacrifice their sanity" or something like that.
     
  8. chubbzilla

    chubbzilla One shall stand...

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    sweet
     
  9. Jetstreamx

    Jetstreamx Lord Jettington

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    Everybody's a critic, but then again, I love that, although it is interesting to have commentary on my writing as apposed to my composition. I must say it rather intrigues me, but I had my reasons for my selection of words. (Sanity is a very good suggestion though.) I highly doubt that I'm ever going to go full out and dish out a whole issue, but the story was mainly going to revolve more around Megatron's sanity rather than his use of cannon fodder. This page has served as largely experimental, and I'm loving all of the feedback I'm getting. I can't wait to put it all to good use.
     

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