Megafun a.k.a. The Metroplex/Megatron Show

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  1. Galvanitro

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    Galvanitro's Comics (Megafun a.k.a The Metroplex/Megatron Show)

    Just wanted to say, I love the Funnies section, and wanted to give it a shot myself. This is my first time ever taking photos and doing photo editing. Thanks for giving this a read!

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    (Quick Note: Megatron having orange text in one panel was because no other color was that visible.)
     
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    Pretty funny strip so far, certainly a good start. Megs and Mets have a great chemistry going on. I especially like your explanation for Mets's ax and Prime's trailer. Keep them coming!
     
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    Not a bad start. Just a couple of things I want to point out, all pointers that you're free to follow or disregard:

    - Text was hard to read. You might want to put them in white speech bubbles to make it easier to read. Also, the one panel had way too much dialogue, so you might want to try and spread out dialogue evenly within the panels so that readers aren't overwhelmed

    - Pictures before the end were dark and blurry, hard to make out. I know it looked like you wanted those pictures to be of them in the dark before they turn on the lights, but it wouldn't hurt to use a mini LED flashlight for doing dark scenes, just to give some focus on the characters.

    But like I said, not a bad start. We all got to start somewhere, and improve as we go along. :) 
     
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    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    :lol  :lol  :lolol  :lolol 

    I think this will be Megafun.
     
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    :lolol  Well Trans-Crazy pointed out what you could fix up on and you're on your way. ^^

    Man, its like a buddy comedy of sort, 'cept they're practically giants roamin' around for some random crap XD
     
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    Thanks for all of the comments.

    T+C, I took what you said to heart, and I hope this is better!

    Episode 1 (Comedy): Walking Along (Part 1 of 2)
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    Yeeeees rub it in on Roddie... >=D

    Oh. That's his situation, huh? Sad.
     
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    Episode 1: Walking Along (Part 2 of 2)

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    Very interesting... :popcorn 

    Some pictures are blurry, but for the most part I say the comic is starting to improve. Keep up the good work. :) 
     
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    Hahaha, calling Megatron "Rainbow"! I gotta remember that one. Nice seeing Skids and Mudflap again.
     
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    I just love how Metroplex is loomin' behind Megs while he's threatenin' those little bastards XD
     
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    :lolol  :lolol  :lolol 
     
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    Episode 2: Darkness Rising

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    (I would like to apologize for the poor special effects in the last shot.)
     
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    Ooooh, things are getting really interesting. :popcorn 

    Pictures are definitely starting to turn out nicer, too. *Gives the thumb up*
     
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    I love the shot of Thunderwing standing with his hands behind his back.
     
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    Hmmm... I sense this will be bitin' someone in the ass at some point, that bein' Thunderwing...

    And yes, I actually saw Metroplex in his alt mode there =3
     
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    Thanks for all of the support so far, everyone!

    Episode 3: Into The Danger Zone (Part 1 of 2)

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    Oh my... this gets interesting!

    :popcorn 
     
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    That's rather an effective (even if simple to figure out how it was done) transformation sequence =3

    :popcorn 
     
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    Episode 3: Into The Danger Zone (Part 2 of 2)

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