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Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by megacron, Apr 15, 2007.

  1. megacron

    megacron THIS IS SPARTA!!!!!!!!!!!

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    these are my first plese be nice i'm not a pro on being funny but if you have a thought plese share it so i know what i can improve

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  2. Autovolt 127

    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    Haha Ultra Magnus dressing as a Fairy :lolol  :lolol 
     
  3. Squishy

    Squishy the squishy one

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    wouldn't mind seeing Magnus photoshopped in a very frilly dress with wings!
    lololol fairy...
     
  4. Gears

    Gears buh-buh-body ya Veteran

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    It's kind of hard to see the words.
     
  5. DilaZirK

    DilaZirK Is bullheaded.

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    I'm with Cataclizm1 on the fonts part.

    And uhh, I'm afraid it wasn't too funny. It's too...random.
     
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    onesock Banned

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    Is there a point? Another picture to show the punchline?
     
  7. megacron

    megacron THIS IS SPARTA!!!!!!!!!!!

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    yes i'm trying to make a image of mangus dressed as a fairy!
     
  8. megacron

    megacron THIS IS SPARTA!!!!!!!!!!!

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    this one is mosly just a poster-thing

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  9. megacron

    megacron THIS IS SPARTA!!!!!!!!!!!

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  10. Eric

    Eric RIP AND TEAR!!!

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    Umm...I'm sorry, I just couldn't find this funny at all.
     
  11. megacron

    megacron THIS IS SPARTA!!!!!!!!!!!

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  12. megacron

    megacron THIS IS SPARTA!!!!!!!!!!!

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    hay if someone can give me some constructive criticism that would be nice and tell me what i can improve

    thank you.
     
  13. megacron

    megacron THIS IS SPARTA!!!!!!!!!!!

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    Well i try my best
     
  14. TheJacker

    TheJacker Banned

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    pretty funny but rp who does that stand for i thought with he blasting it would be waspinator. o is it rodimus prime>?
     
  15. Squishy

    Squishy the squishy one

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    its rampage bein blasted by rumble, his tire/gun thingy is right over his head...so I think RP is rampage
     
  16. DilaZirK

    DilaZirK Is bullheaded.

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    Well, first thing that can be improved is the dialogue. Proper sentence forming, use of capital letters, punctuation, etc. The comic looks shoddy because it lacks those. (Even though the fonts are readable now.)

    Secondly as to the recent comics, maybe still pictures are best used as captioned one-shot funnies (Jetplague's Funny Formers is one of the best examples of side-splitting captioned pics). Perhaps you lack the tools to take your own pics and make a comic out of it?

    Lastly...I suppose the comic lacks humour overall. And humour is not something that can be (nor should it be) explained.

    Humour can be developed though, no one was laughing at my jokes 10 years ago, at least now I get a few chuckles here and there, but only after observing the ways of the funny.

    Keep at it.
     
  17. Sheba

    Sheba FF 1 Badman=Cyclonus

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    ehhh, it's gettin there.
     
  18. megacron

    megacron THIS IS SPARTA!!!!!!!!!!!

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    ok thanks for the info!
     
  19. megacron

    megacron THIS IS SPARTA!!!!!!!!!!!

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    OK UPDATE IT'S BEEN A WHILE YOU GUYS TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK OF THIS ONE
     
  20. megacron

    megacron THIS IS SPARTA!!!!!!!!!!!

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    ok i know i have not posted anything new so lot's of new stuff is going to be coming soon.
     

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