Master_Maximus's Circus Maximus

Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by Master_Maximus, Oct 7, 2006.

  1. Master_Maximus

    Master_Maximus Unicron's Headmaster

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    So...What do ya think for my first comic attempt?
     
  2. Gears

    Gears buh-buh-body ya Veteran

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    Nice job.:lol :lol :lol :lol 
     
  3. Eric

    Eric RIP AND TEAR!!!

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    Not bad! And here's a tiny suggestion: Use word balloons next time. It's what I did, and that improved my comic skills a lot.

    Oh, and :lolol :lolol :lolol 
     
  4. Seth Buzzard

    Seth Buzzard R.I.P. Buzzbeak Content Contributor

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    I concur on the word balloon suggestion, other wise not to shabby.
     
  5. Sheba

    Sheba FF 1 Badman=Cyclonus

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    cool! :lol  :lolol  :lol  :lolol 
     
  6. onesock

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    Nice...VERY nice...

    :lol 
     
  7. Renidragon

    Renidragon Toys on my table!

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    What Buzzbeak said.

    But... C. Wingsaber has more articulation, doesn't he? I mean, he doesn't have very good lateral movement in his arms, but he's got elbows and shoulders, hips and knees... ;) 

    But it was still funny. More!

    Maybe I've been watching too much Monty Python, but the "Wanna make something of it?" "Shh!" Reminded me very much of that scene... "Camelot! Camelot! Camelot! It's only a model... SHH!" (don't really know how to do that gramatically correctly, and too lazy to find out)
     
  8. CdnShockwave

    CdnShockwave The Prince of Poses TFW2005 Supporter

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    Yes, text bubbles = good idea. Other than that, nice job. Welcome to the funnies!
     
  9. Master_Maximus

    Master_Maximus Unicron's Headmaster

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    Thank you all for the kind words and suggestions, and now a one panel to test my word balloon making...

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  10. rebelbot

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    nice I loved it keep up the good work. Maybe you can check out mine "Transformers laugter" and my story I just completed "The Power of Friendship" on fan ficticn.
     
  11. Leemon

    Leemon Yar, spare sum fuel mate?

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    Keep up the good work! And, remember; practice, practice, practice.
     
  12. SPLIT LIP

    SPLIT LIP Dry built

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    :lol :lol :lol :lol :lol 
     
  13. Renidragon

    Renidragon Toys on my table!

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    Poor Tracks. :( 

    Good pun. :) 
     
  14. Andersonh1

    Andersonh1 Man, I've been here a LONG time Veteran

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    Nice pun with Tracks! :thumb 
     
  15. Sheba

    Sheba FF 1 Badman=Cyclonus

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    :lol  :lol 
     
  16. Gears

    Gears buh-buh-body ya Veteran

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  17. Brave Magnus

    Brave Magnus Hecho en Argentina

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    Good one.XD
     
  18. Eric

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    Great pun! :lolol  No love for Tracks!
     
  19. Blunticon

    Blunticon The Oddjob

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    Lol!!
     
  20. Thunder_Cracker

    Thunder_Cracker Friendship is Evil!!

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    :lol :lol :lol  Excellent job, keep it up :thumb  :D 
     

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