Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by Master_Maximus, Oct 7, 2006.
So...What do ya think for my first comic attempt?
Not bad! And here's a tiny suggestion: Use word balloons next time. It's what I did, and that improved my comic skills a lot.
I concur on the word balloon suggestion, other wise not to shabby.
What Buzzbeak said.
But... C. Wingsaber has more articulation, doesn't he? I mean, he doesn't have very good lateral movement in his arms, but he's got elbows and shoulders, hips and knees...
But it was still funny. More!
Maybe I've been watching too much Monty Python, but the "Wanna make something of it?" "Shh!" Reminded me very much of that scene... "Camelot! Camelot! Camelot! It's only a model... SHH!" (don't really know how to do that gramatically correctly, and too lazy to find out)
Yes, text bubbles = good idea. Other than that, nice job. Welcome to the funnies!
Thank you all for the kind words and suggestions, and now a one panel to test my word balloon making...
nice I loved it keep up the good work. Maybe you can check out mine "Transformers laugter" and my story I just completed "The Power of Friendship" on fan ficticn.
Keep up the good work! And, remember; practice, practice, practice.
Nice pun with Tracks!
Great pun! No love for Tracks!
Excellent job, keep it up
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