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  1. marvel b

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    Breakaway's Cutaways #1
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    looks interesting
     
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    :lol  interesting...
     
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    Mysteriously History episode #1
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    what ever happened to sweep #747? solved!

    glad i'm doing my job!
     
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    :lol  quite a nice update
     
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    Alas! How shall the series continue without such a pivotal character as Sweep 747??? :lol 
     
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    Two-fer Tuesday! once a month, twice the shows!

    Breakaway's Cutaways #2
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    Failed Science #1 (my parody of Dr.Weird)
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    thank you!

    he will be missed....
     
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    DOTM Bumblebee I must be some kind of nut...

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    The first update is funny, especially Grimlock eating Breakaway at the end. The second one I'm not so sure about. Is Wheeljack supposed to be a sexist jerk in your universe? And the way in which he makes Arcee strikes me as a sensitive topic... I'm not quite sure what the joke you were going for is, but it's kind of lost in just being awkward and kind of uncomfortable.
     
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    have you ever heard of "dr weird"? well he's a scientist that does stupid stuff....wheeljack is dr weird.....but much more stupid....

    in the idw verse, jhiaxus forced arcee to be female, making her a giant killing machine.

    didn't think of it as a sensitive topic, so i apologize....seriously, i'm sorry.....i can take this one down and replace it if its that bad....i already took pictures for 14 more episodes os stupid.....
     
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    All hail two-fer Tuesdays...Wheeljack has created a monster...:lol 
     
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    DOTM Bumblebee I must be some kind of nut...

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    I haven't heard of this "Dr. Weird" character, so that may have something to do with it.

    I know it happened in the canon of an official Transformers story, but then again, so did Skids and Mudflap.

    That's entirely your decision to take it down or not. After all, it's your work, and you have the freedom of speech to post it as you please. I personally just didn't feel comfortable with the way you were portraying the subject, though I am certain you didn't mean any offense by it. Who knows? I could have a point, or I could just be overreacting. I guess you should see how others react to it before making any sort of final decision like that.
     
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    well...i'm going to make a few changes that'll make it better. i'm truely sorry, and i don't want to make anyone else uncomfortable. I even went and check the other wip, and just a few need adjustments too...

    thank you as well, for being honest.
     
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    haha
     
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    That sounds like a good option. And I'm glad you're taking constructive criticism. It's very mature and professional of you, so I have to thank you for that.

    You're welcome. :) 
     
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    yeah. the last thing I want is to upset anyone. I just updated it. I hope its good!
     
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    Okay, that was way funnier. :lol 
     
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    I'm feeling very generous today!

    Breakaway's Cutaways #3
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    edit: new show later tonight!
     
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    haha love the TFS DBZ bit
     
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