mandiprime97's Funnies (attempt)

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  1. mandiprime97

    mandiprime97 Well-Known Member

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    Hey guys, after debating for a while, I've decided to start my own comic here on the Funnies forum. This is my first one, and I've never really done anything like this before, so constructive criticism is appreciated :)  Also, due to my 11 hour shift at work on weekdays, most updates will take place on the weekend for now until I find the time. I'll get them to you ASAP. This will mostly contain (hopefully) funny/random strips, I can't ever keep up with storylines. For this first one, I'll be using one I posted in the Let's See Some Cool stuff 2013 thread recently. Instead of posting text bubbles, I'm just posting captions. So, enjoy my below average sense of humor! :D 

    Bumblebee Tries to Fly

    "Bloop beep?" (Should I go for it?)
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    "Bleep boop!" (Yep, I'm going for it!)
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    "Beeeep!" (Jump)
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    "Bloop!" *thud*
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    "Beep!" *thud*
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    "Bleeoop!" *thud*
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    "Boop beep bloop.." (I'm a failure)
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    "Bumblebee sad? Me Grimlock here to cheer you up!" "Bleep?" (Really?)
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    *brofist*
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    "Although me Grimlock not so sure about this.." "Beep bloop!" (Yee haw!)
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    Sorry about bad lighting, last few were taken at the bottom of the stairs.
     
  2. Merchhounds

    Merchhounds Well-Known Member

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    :inquisiti  and :popcorn 
     
  3. Stonecrusher

    Stonecrusher jerk to storytelling

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    Not bad... yet.
     
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    Awww, it's very sweet of Grimlock to help out 'Bee at the end and Bumblebee is just so adorable all throughout. :D 

    Also, good first attempt at a photocomic. :) 
     
  5. mandiprime97

    mandiprime97 Well-Known Member

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    :D 
    Like I said, my sense of humor isn't great :p 
    Thanks my friend :) 
     
  6. Argentenoboy

    Argentenoboy But what was even more like a drug was the drugs

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    Quick word of advice, try to use speech bubbles. Try using an Image Manipulation program like GIMP or Photoshop

    Other than that, this looks promising
     
  7. eagc7

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    was good, but i recommend you to add speech bubbles on the pictures, just like argentonoboy said
     
  8. mandiprime97

    mandiprime97 Well-Known Member

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    Alright, I'll put speech bubbles in the next update.
     
  9. mandiprime97

    mandiprime97 Well-Known Member

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    Update #2
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    Roadbuster got Roadbusted :p 
     
  12. kaijuguy19

    kaijuguy19 Keyblade Wielder

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    Poor Roadbuster. :lol 
     
  13. bookwormdalek

    bookwormdalek Gotta get a grip

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    Lol nice.
     
  14. Autovolt 127

    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    Prime ain't afraid of no roads. :lol 
     
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    Onslaught24 MTMTE Sucks News Staff

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  16. mandiprime97

    mandiprime97 Well-Known Member

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    UPDATE #3
    Sorry for the long wait guys. Been busy brainstorming and doing other things.
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  17. vorox4251

    vorox4251 Something less weeb-y now

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    :lolol 
    good use of his combined mode flaws
     
  18. bookwormdalek

    bookwormdalek Gotta get a grip

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    :lolol 
     
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    lolz
     
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    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    There is a reason why Onslaught's gun pegs behind there right? :lol  :lol 
     

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