Make your own movie.

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  1. arcee101

    arcee101 wrecker

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    I have seen a lot of complaining about the movies so I'm going to write a scritp created by the fans.I want you guys to help me choose the characters,their altmodes,and how they act.Thank you!
     
  2. arcee101

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    By the way,I'm a new member.
     
  3. Dran0n

    Dran0n Junk male

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    Scarlett Johansson is the main female lead.

    And Wheeljack is involved.
     
  4. arcee101

    arcee101 wrecker

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    Good idea man.Thanks!
     
  5. arcee101

    arcee101 wrecker

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    Example

    Autobots:
    Optimus prime
    hot rod

    decepticons:
    Megatron
    starscream
     
  6. Karhukjnsi

    Karhukjnsi Universal Wrestler

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    He can be the "behind the scenes" guy.

    Jazz should lead the team
    it also has Glyph, Roadbuster, and Skydive
     
  7. Santoanderson

    Santoanderson Well-Known Member

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    Who's gonna pay for it?
     
  8. Cyber Star

    Cyber Star Why so Geewun, Loser?

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    ironhide is a must character in my movies :D 
     
  9. Starscream NZ

    Starscream NZ Well-Known Member

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    If you can't even build a basic plot and character list, I dread to think how this film would ever, ever see the light of day. Let alone Hasbro shutting down any form of production, if it got that far.


    Good luck!
     
  10. darthrage

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    i think james franco and joseph gordon levitt should play the spike and chip case characters LOL! I dont care who plays which one
     
  11. The Swordsman

    The Swordsman The REAL hero of Hyrule

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    Here's my pitch, I take some inspiration from the first movie and TF Prime:

    Optimus Prime and his team are stationed on Earth, guarding (insert plot macguffin's name here), the US government, aware of their existence from the start, have provided them with a base in which to guard the macguffin.
    Megatron and co, who've been scouring the universe for years looking for the macguffin, arrive on Earth and run in to the Autobots. They declare Mortal Kombat.
    The movie is mostly told from the point of view of a young human woman (yup, it's got human characters and the lead is a lady!), who is introduced into the conflict when she discovers her new boyfriend's car is a shape-changing robot from outer space.

    Bots: Optimus, Wheeljack, Jazz, Bumblebee and a new guy.
    Cons: Megatron, Soundwave, Laserbeak, Swindle, Onslaught, Starscream and another new guy.
     
  12. GFH

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    Can you include Elita-One? The real G1 Elita, not the ROTF one.

    I think she should be a plane (seeing as her name used to be Ariel), but it's your story, so do what you will.
     
  13. Karhukjnsi

    Karhukjnsi Universal Wrestler

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    No, we can ONLY do the Movieverse one.
     
  14. Moonhawk

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    I started thinking about an opening sequence similar to "arrival from Cybertron".

    The movie opens with some cut scenes showing the ongoing war on cybertron, however cybertron is heading towards an interstellar dust cloud that will cut out the light from its sun (cybetron harvests solar energy). Upon seeing the impending doom heading their way - a band of autobots build the ark, manned by a small crew, with other autobots in stasis tubes on board, and yet more still buried deep within cybertron. The aim is to preserve the autobots until the danger has passed, whilst the ones on the ark will set up a new colony elsewhere - with the intention of returning later to reactivate their comrades.

    The decepticons get wind of the autobots plan to "jump ship" and using their ship, the nemesis, pursue the ark upon its launch, carrying a huge tricobalt bomb intended to destroy the ark. The nemesis is cloaked - so the autobots are unaware of its presence when they make the jump into hyperspace taking the nemesis with it (the ark deploys hyperspace generators that create a hyperspace bubble around it - unknowingly carrying the nemesis with them). In hyperspace the nemesis decloaks and hard docks via a tube with the ark.

    A fight ensues, with megatron leading the cons, with heavy autobot losses. In a last ditch attempt, bumblebee makes a dash for the hard dock - (slow motion - in vehicle mode he jumps, transforms in mid air spinning, throws a grenade into the tube and transforms back - speeding off). The hard dock explodes causing the nemesis to drift away from the ark. It collides with one of the arks hyperspace generators causing the hyperspace bubble to destabilise.

    The ark starts to yaw as the autobots battle to bring it back under control whilst the cons keep pressing their assault, alarms are going off everywhere indicating that they are caught in a gravity well and that the hyperspace bubble is in danger of imminent collapse.

    Cut to external shot of prehistoric earth. A disturbance in space is followed by the ark and its debris field explosively re-entering normal space and hitting the earths atmosphere. Autobots battle to guide the ship down, but the ark partially disintegrates (I envisage this scene looking kinda like the beginning of Revenge of the Sith – when the ship breaks up during re-entry) with some autobots in stasis tubes being lost (used as a plot point later in the movies). The ark makes a crash landing, dinosaurs looking on (again kinda like the enterprise D crash landing in Generations) and comes to a halt. The autobots and cons are dazed………..

    Cut back to external shot of prehistoric earth – another disturbance, this time the Nemesis being ejected from hyperspace – spinning uncontrollably, hits the atmosphere like a meteor – remaining cons trying in vain to regain control. Crashes to earth around where the gulf of mexico will ultimately be (I think you can see where this is going). The bomb intended to destroy the ark goes off causing a huge mushroom cloud and an EMP pulse that expands over the surface of the earth, putting all the TFs into stasis lock.

    Pull away from the exterior of the ark as nuclear winter descends on the earth then fade.

    65 million years later……………..wide shot of cyberton emerging from the dust cloud...........
     
  15. ArtistOfWar59

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    I'm fine as long as we get an awesome non-cybertronian Soundwave.
     
  16. Lurkertron

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    Reboot idea:
    Forced to flee their homeworld of Cybertron with some of their planets most powerful relics, the Autobot fleet heads for deep space with their mortal enemy in hot pursuit.
    In order to protect the fleet and its flagship "Ark Primus" with the Autobot Prime council onboard, legendary general and councilor elect Optimus Prime performs a rearguard action and engages the advanced Decepticon ships with his battleship "Ark Maximus".
    Against overwhelming odds he allows the Autobot fleet to escape but is forced to crash land on Earth, somewhere in the Pacific ocean in the 11th century. (It is the fireball depicted in Bayeux tapestry).

    With no idea of the whereabouts of the Autobot fleet and knowing the Maximus was forced down somewhere in the Solar system, Decepticon leader Megatron sends out his troops scouring the solar system for the Ark Maximus, (incorrectly) thinking that they would have the location of the Autobot fleet.
    At the same time, the Autobot fleet, having settled on a planet several hundred light years away and establishing a base, despatch their most celebrated if flawed warrior, Ultra Magnus and his elite veterans to search for and recover their missing comrades.

    Optimus and his group begin the long arduous task of conducting repairs to the Ark Maximus, now disguised as an island. With only a short range space bridge as a means to get around, and very limited resources, they must scour the planet to create the materials they need and somehow make the energon fuel to get the maximus back into space and rejoin their race.
    The Ark Maximus will be essential in any assault to retake Cybertron
    But at the same time Optimus knows his forces must remain hidden so as not to disturb the planets inhabitants or reveal their location to the ever searching Decepticons.

    After nearly a thousand years being shipwrecked and nearing completion of their task, a chance encounter with humans may have given the game away and Megatron may have at last found his prey. He must have the artifacts or his tyranny over Cybertron and his own forces can never be secure. Earth is now the focal point of a war that has raged for thousands of years and the ultimate fate of the Cybertronian Empire could be decided on this obscure rock in the middle of nowhere.

    Optimus must get the Maximus starborne or else tie Megatron down long enough for the Autobots to fully regain their strength elsewhere. At the same time he must ensure no harm comes to this planets inhabitants. His task seems almost impossible.

    Cast-
    Autobot council:
    Alpha Prime (Trion), Sentinel Prime, Vector Prime, Omega Prime. Newly elected Optimus Prime completes the council after the mysterious death of Nova Prime and is the most juinior.

    Earth stranded Autobots:
    Optimus Prime (Kenworth T700 + Trailer. Larger than typical as combines with trailer)
    Prowl (BMW 5 series Police interceptor) Primes trusted right hand.
    Brawn (International CXT). Hot headed brute.
    Mirage (Lamborghini Reventón). Infiltrator, sniper, spy. Former Decepticon.
    Ratchet (Mercedes Sprinter Ambulance). Medic.
    Ironhide (Landrover Defender). Old warhorse.
    Jazz (Porsche 911). Cool, calm, collected.
    Hot Rod (Ferrari 599 GTO). Flashy.
    Wheeljack (Shelby GT500). Chief engineer.
    Bumblebee (Mini one). Stowaway wannabe warrior. Should have been on another ship.
    Bluestreak (Aston Martin DBS). Suave, snob.
    Sideswipe (McLaren P11). Stoic warrior.
    Superion team:
    Jetfire (B1B) Hulking experienced and powerful warrior. Once refused council membership.
    Powerglide (A-10) A former pacifist now heavily armed and pissed off.
    Air Raid (F18F)
    Blades (V-22)
    Skydive (F35c)
    Slingshot (F35c)

    Autobot Elite S&R unit
    Ultra Magnus (LSVR) Warrior with few equals and walks the line with autobot sensibilities.
    Grimlock (Challenger II) Savage former gladiator.
    Warpath (Stryker MGS) Brash.
    Hound (Humvee) Expert tracker.
    Springer (Apache Longbow) Cybertronian legend. Touted for command but reluctant.
    Perceptor (Global Hawk) Scout. Scientist.
    Kup (M270 MLRS) Magnus' enforcer. Heavy weapons expert.
    Omega Supreme (C5M) Giant warrior. Carries the team around. Slow but almost invincible.


    Main Decepticons:
    Megatron (B2 Stealth bomber)
    Overlord (Partly oversees Cybertron in Megatron's absence) Extremely dangerous.
    Straxus (Partly oversees Cybertron in Megatrons absence) Mafia thug.
    Both of the above plot to take over as soon as Megatron left, Megatron knew this would happen and why he appointed them both to oppose each other. He plans to execute them both on his return. Overlord is building project Trypticon to help seize power and Straxus is having anybody connected closely with Overlord, Megatron or Shockwave murdered, quietly.
    Starscream (F22) plays the Decepticon heirarchy against each other brilliantly. An as yet unknown player for power. Or so he thinks.)
    Thundercracker (F22)
    Skywarp (F22)
    Thrust (F22)
    Dirge (F22)
    Ramjet (F22) All F22s are Starscreams closest allies (seekers) although not as close as he'd like.
    Soundwave (Taranis UCAV)
    Bruticus (Mack Titan Roadtrain)
    Cyclonus (SU 47) with Scourge, Megatron's bodyguards.
    Scourge (F117 Nighthawk). Has a pack of Ravage hounds on leashes.
    The Abominus swarm. (A weapon controlled and devised by Shockwave. Billions of tiny Insecticons that perform surveillance in small groups or combine to take any form as a whole, even a very large (300 ft+) single robot.) Makes Megatron nervous.
    Shockwave (experimental hypersonic aircraft). Megatron leads until proven incapable.
    Lazer Beak drones (Predator).
    ... and of course lots of rank and file, drones and such.


    Been chewing these ideas around for a while as another continuity I might put together at some point.


    Love Moonhawk's idea too.
     
  17. Splintershot

    Splintershot Predacon?? ... Awesome

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    Yes, I totally agree. And maybe a Movie Drift would be nice (to replace Sideswipe)
     
  18. Nachtsider

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    Here goes.

    Aesthetic

    Classics/Universe, with dashes of Alternators.

    Cast (Cybertronian)

    I've said this before, and I'll say it again. Too many TFs will spoil the broth. There should be no more than seven Cybertronians on each side. The actors voicing the robots will also play their holo-avatars. Holo-avatar usage will be heavy to allow for maximum robot characterization while saving on CGI. In-story-wise, the Cybertronians make widespread use of holo-avatars to interact with the human cast and maintain cover.

    Autobots

    Optimus Prime (Peter Cullen) - The noble leader we all know and love, 'nuff said. Oshkosh Striker 3000 altmode.
    Bumblebee (Sean Murray) - Helpful, friendly, unassuming scout; a little timid and self-conscious sometimes, but possessing the courage of a lion when needed. 2009 Camero Concept altmode.
    Jazz (Will Smith) - Hip, cool, Earth-loving secret agent man. Master of operational improvisation. Porche 911 altmode.
    Ironhide (Jeff Bridges) - Gruff, grizzled old gunfighter. A formidable, battle-tested warrior, hampered only by his advanced years. Armored Multirole Carrier altmode (SWAT colors).
    Ratchet (Hugh Laurie) - Maverick medical/mechanical genius. Has a caring heart beneath that cantankerous exterior. Hummer H2 ambulance altmode.
    Omega Supreme - Transforms from the Autobots' ship/headquarters, the Ark.

    Decepticons

    Megatron (Clancy Brown) - The perfect amalgam of brute strength and military cunning. Suave and awe-inspiring; based on his TFA incarnation. M1 Abrams altmode.
    Starscream (Cillian Murphy) - Seductively charming, vain, cold-blooded and cruel. Insubordinate; seeks to overthrow his boss. F-22 Raptor altmode.
    Soundwave (Dave Mustaine) - Largely silent communications expert/hacker who normally lets his actions do the talking. E2 Hawkeye altmode, with detachable fuselage sections that transform into Laserbeak and Ravage, whom Soundwave directs by playing insane solos on an electric guitar-like controller.
    Blitzwing (Christoph Waltz, Arnold Schwarzenegger and Jim Carrey) - Flawed product of an experiment to create a deadly new breed of Decepticon warrior. Based on his TFA incarnation. T-80 and MiG-31 altmodes.
    Lugnut (Kane) - Fanatically loyal walking arsenal. AC-130 Specter altmode.
    Trypticon - Transforms from the Decepticons' ship/headquarters, the Nemesis.

    Cast (Human)

    Spike Witwicky (Josh Hartnett) - A competent, practical 'grease monkey' of a young man with a macho streak and a disinclination to believe in the extraordinary. Runs the family salvage firm in the wake of his father's retirement. Childhood friend of Carly.

    Carly (Olivia Munn) - A brainy beauty with a talent for computers and an interest in (nay, obsession for) conspiracy theories and unexplained phenomena. The latter is often the target of much friendly ribbing from her childhood friend, Spike.

    Marissa Faireborn (Mariska Hargitay) - A tough, headstrong and independent colonel in the United States Special Operations Command. Bold and highly professional. The film's principal military presence.

    Story

    Spike Witwicky is approached by a band of enigmatic private military contractors with a rewarding offer to salvage a buried item out in the New Mexico desert. He accepts, although Carly, steeped in reports of giant transforming robots being intermittently sighted around the nation, is suspicious of his patrons (a viewpoint that Spike pooh-poohs). The salvage job commences, with the buried item turning out to be an immense, energy-emitting crystal. Spike eventually shares Carly's suspicions when her snooping reveals that the mercenaries are not all they seem.

    Things come to a head when the mercenaries wise up to the couple's covert investigation and confront them, telling them that they have outlived their usefulness now that the salvage work is complete. Spike and Carly make a vain attempt to escape, but not before sabotaging some of the mercenaries' equipment. Their actions alert a second band of strangers to the mercenaries' presence. The newcomers rescue Spike and Carly and initiate a pitched battle with the mercenaries. Both sides reveal themselves to be the very transforming robots Carly has been obsessed with finding out about. The fight ends with the crystal split in two; each side withdraws with one half, Spike and Carly fleeing with their saviors.

    The couple's rescuers introduce themselves as the Autobots, a faction of sentient robots from the war-torn planet Cybertron. Spike's employers are the Decepticons, their mortal enemies. In an attempt to stop the destructive Cybertronian civil war, the Autobots left Cybertron with the coveted source of limitless power known as the Allspark, intending to launch it beyond the Decepticons' reach. They were pursued, however, with the chase culminating in both sides crash-landing on Earth and the Allspark lost. Awakening after several hundred years of dormancy, the Autobots and Decepticons commenced a hunt for the Allspark, with the Decepticons pinpointing its location in a region saturated with minerals toxic to Cybertronians, which necessitated their deception of Spike into aiding them.

    The Autobots explain that it is imperative that they retrieve the Allspark and leave Earth before the human homeworld becomes a second battleground. Shaken and guilt-stricken over unwittingly helping the enemy, Spike is determined to help the Autobots in any way he can. Carly shares her information on Cybertronian sightings and conspiracy theories with the Autobots. Among these are tales of two purported UFO retrievals by the U.S. military, which the Autobots ascertain to be their starship, the Ark, and the Decepticons' Nemesis, which both sides were separated from during the crash. As retrieving the Ark would greatly aid the Autobots' cause, Spike and Carly help the Autobots locate the secret facility where it is stored, only for all of them to be captured by Special Operations Forces under Colonel Marissa Faireborn.

    The Decepticons launch an attack on a second facility where the Nemesis is impounded and use their Allspark fragment to repair it. The U.S. military is barely able to hold their own in engagements with the Decepticons; Colonel Faireborn, making no discrimination between Autobot and Decepticon, hopes that the Autobots' capture will give her information on the extraterrestrial invaders that may lead to victory. With some difficulty, Spike and Carly convince her of the Autobots' true nature, and she leads them to the Ark. The Nemesis, now fully operational, is suddenly detected closing in on the facility.

    While the Autobots reactivate their ship using the power of the Allspark, Colonel Faireborn and her troops fight a valiant, losing battle to hold the Decepticons off and buy their Cybertronian allies time. The Ark is restored in the nick of time and the Autobots pilot it out to relieve the military. Both ships transform into enormous metal titans and engage in an epic battle. The fight culminates in Omega Supreme severely damaging and disabling Trypticon; the Decepticons are taken prisoner by the Autobot-human alliance and the Allspark fragments are reunited.

    The Autobots leave Earth with their captives and their prize, but not before celebrating their triumph with their newfound friends and equipping the military with weaponry capable of fending off Decepticon threats plus a means of establishing Autobot contact if necessary. Colonel Faireborn is honored and promoted for her gallantry. Spike and Carly, their longtime friendship intensified by their incredible experiences, go serious and live happily ever after on the huge sums of hush money they receive from the U.S. government. All recent events are covered up as the filming of Michael Bay's most bombastic movie yet, which the public buys without a second thought.
     
  19. Tkemert20

    Tkemert20 「Dojyaaa~n」 TFW2005 Supporter

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    Nice, it seems I'm not the only fan that writes scripts.
     
  20. Lurkertron

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    Dave Mustaine? As Soundwave?

    I really have heard it all now. :) 
     

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