Well here is my first attempt at comics, critics gladly welcome Btw any good tips on the engine thrust effect? the one I did is quite meh
Drop the netspeak. It will make it easier to read. And you may want to work on the placings of your speech bubbles. Other than that, there's some potential here.
Cool! Yep that correct! Thanks for suggestion, I try not using netspeak or txtish bubble Toynami 1/100 VF-1s, not a 1/55 or 1/60 big ones :/ Anyway here is the update to the final of quick intro.. Meanwhile...tour on Hell
A lil' kid breakin' your toys, weird speech, and a Toy Hell... sounds like a Most Devastated Transfan Award winner to me. And one more thing: will you show me your mess without the distortion?
thx for the complement guys Well he is landlord's little kid, I am just a tenet heh. But as all underage kid do: break stuff (I have a few that was broke by him, but the rest is hiding in safe place) thx heh Actually it is not that bad, since most of the toys is put in container, only a few that has missing pieces :ugh: Well the airplane doesn't count (there should be one that is visible hint:: movie toy leader class)
Here is the new chapter, and I just found out my phone's camera did crap at low light :S (and the ink ran out when I am printing the base :/ )
