Non-TF: Lisa

Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Art' started by Altitron, Nov 4, 2010.

  1. Altitron

    Altitron Commercial Artist

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    Here is a look at a simple cheesecake piece that I've been working on. The lines are honestly a bit old - maybe 8 months or so - but I've recently picked it back up and started coloring it. I'll share progress on that here in the next few days or so.

    [​IMG]

    - Alty
     

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    lol 100 views and no comments I'm guessing many people don't want to be labelled a perv

    I dig it tho the only thing that's kinda off putting are the toes they seem a little odd but that might just be me.

    I'd be tempted to not post the coloured pic just in case this board has a PG13 rule like many other do
     
  3. Motor_Master

    Motor_Master Lets the balls touch TFW2005 Supporter

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    Fixed :thumb 

    I like the line art, but this is a very borderline piece.
     
  4. Infosaur

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    I'll say, who abuses their vino like that? Allowing Pino Noir to leak into mere bathwater?

    SHOCKING!:drunk 

    And yet this smiley is legal? :D ream:
     
  5. Altitron

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    LOL! Good call. :) 

    As I said in my original post, this is a cheesecake piece. The way I intend to color the piece will prevent any 'unmentionables' from being exposed, so I believe it's fine to share.

    And thanks for the interest, pervs. :) 

    - Alty
     
  6. Superquad7

    Superquad7 We're only human. Super Mod

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    I think if you do the above, the issue will be settled.

    I have to agree with Blitz.'s comment on the toes. Aside from that, I think the figure is very well done. :thumb 
     
  7. Altitron

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    I admit that the toes do look odd, and that's intentional on my part. It's an attempt to implement some forced persepctive and foreshortening. Anywho, here's some colors:

    [​IMG]

    - Alty
     
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    Well, you could cover up some parts with lots of soapy bubble water.

    Overall, a nice composition.
     
  9. Superquad7

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    That was my assumption when I first saw the piece.

    I totally agree with you on the composition as well :thumb 
     
  10. Altitron

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    That's actually exactly what I plan to do! And thanks. :) 

    - Alty
     
  11. Crazy Ramjetty

    Crazy Ramjetty marvel's got it good

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    the duck looks so happy, very nice man!!!
     
  12. Altitron

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    I think the official title for this is going to be 'Lucky Duck'. :D 

    - Alty
     
  13. Fishdirt

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    I like the playful line on this.

    From a purely technical aspect the upper part of her right arm is curved in an unnatural way and her hand seems a bit off. I think maybe the palm/pinky connection is awkward. Purely technical.

    As an overall piece I can't say much past the line until it's done. I enjoy it personally. You've captured mood awesomely. I think this is the hardest part of cartooning personally.
     
  14. TheDemonDzko

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    Your tearing me apart lisa!
     
  15. Altitron

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    Do you mean the bicep/tricep part of the arm, or the forearm?

    - Alty
     
  16. Fishdirt

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    bicep tricep. Mainly the bicep area is concave which isn't natural BUT that's a technical thing and is something most people don't even notice. It'd suck artists started being technically perfect. Steve Vai is technically perfect on guitar but he makes some terrible compositions music wise.
     
  17. Altitron

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    Gotcha. I'll see what I can do. :) 

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