2D Artwork: Liokaiser

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  1. Acid Wing

    Acid Wing Senior Alien TF Member

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    A commission for Liokaiser that I was able to squeeze in during my hectic schedule at the moment.

    C & C appreciated as always.

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  2. Predaking

    Predaking Well-Known Member

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    A+++ I love it

    Will look even better with colors but still awesome in B & W
     
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    Man that pic is uber-sweet very impressive :rock 

    He's such a great character too and that is just makes him so much better, great work.
     
  4. Gears

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    Nice one!:thumb 
     
  5. Josh

    Josh Comic Color-guy

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    nicely done man

    though his head is a bit too low IMO. looks like he forgot his neck or something :p 

    still, love the detail man :D 
     
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    looks freakin amazing acid.
     
  7. Cobra_Commander

    Cobra_Commander Master of tactics TFW2005 Supporter

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    man theres so much detail on it, its amazing hope we see a colour version soon.
     
  8. Quintesson #1

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    Yeah I think his head rests too low on his torso, and his legs would look better if they'd be a little bit longer, as is he looks far wider than he is tall, bit midgetty. >.>

    There's a really big perspective problem on his rightside shoulder though, the cilindrical rotation part of the wings there go the wrong way giving the shoulder the impression to be bend right at the very edge of it. I mean you can look in the back and see the farside wing on the rightside of the other, yet at the same time you can see the front of the shoulder? If you can I suggest you edit the far most rightside shoulder bit out.

    Other than that, it's pretty nice and detailed, just keep the perspective in check as ther are also a few places where you ignored pointperspective and the far side is larger than the nearest side. Nothing you can't fix in the future though, just keep in mind the further something is, the closer the lines should get together (even if just slightly). :) 

    Hope those crits help you Acid! (And darn I forgot to crit your Myth Megs! >.<")
     
  9. Liokaiser

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    Like I said before that work is awesome. I can't wait to get it. :) 
     
  10. Acid Wing

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    Thanks for all the feedback guys! Really appreciate the differing views and crits, as in the end, it gives this pre-med student a better idea of what to watch out for.:D 

    Hansime, as usual thanx for the in-depth critique (and no need to apologize for myth galvy...he's far from done;) !

    As for the big head and weird position of it, I decided that the helmet design needed to look more like a lion's mane, hence the size and why it seems to be part of the torso (the neck is more like a ball joint in my mind in this case). In terms of the stockiness, that was more of a choice aesthetic to the original toy.

    Hope that explains the method to my madness. I hope.:) 
     
  11. Chaos Muffin

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    Wow man that's insane! Awesome!!!!
    Liokaiser, you're getting hooked up nicely. Glad it's going to someone cool, can't think of anyone better to own it. The detailing is really good. Would like to have that covering my whole wall.

    I can never get any art done, would be too hard trying to draw a robot muffin that looks cool lol
     
  12. Acid Wing

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    Glad you like it, CM.:D  And a transforming robot muffin lol, I think that would be similar to those transforming happy meals from a yonder ago.:) 
     

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