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  1. GreenCream

    GreenCream Well-Known Member

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    This is you.
    You are pretty sure you were DEAD a few seconds ago. The idea of being a CORPSE is somewhat perturbing.

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    You test your LIMBS. Everything seems to be in working order.

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    Your systems identify you as UNIT E-01. You seem to have been a DRONE at some point in the past. You can't remember anything... though the image of a COLOSSUS seems to stick out in your memories.
    You decide to celebrate your newfound SENTIENCE and second chance at life with a NAME.

    What is your name?



    Notes:
    1. Skyline's incredibly miniscule stint is over. A figure with no heels is no fun to pose and/or photograph :[
    2. Love the Vehicon mold! Buy it!
    3. Not sure how to communicate a flashback well... any tips?
     
  2. Shatterpoint

    Shatterpoint Neato

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    Cycon
     
  3. Fez Findie

    Fez Findie Well-Known Member

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    Ooooh, this could be interesting, starring a character who's just gained sentience :) 

    Just to let you know, you could add the text withing the pictures too. Just sayin'.

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    As for name... Vindicator?
     
  4. Megatron_91

    Megatron_91 Minion of Trixie

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    Is this a sort of choose your own adventure kind of thing? It's a very interesting concept and one I don't think I've seen done in a comic before although it does seem like it would be difficult to pull off. I'm very interested to see where you're going with this.:D 

    As for flashbacks, in my comic, I always set the images on grey scale, but that's just me.

    And as for a name how about TOM like the robot from Toonami?
     
  5. Karhukjnsi

    Karhukjnsi Universal Wrestler

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    I say "Spectre".
     
  6. seekerblackout

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    Anything but some dumb human name.

    Looks promising thus far.
     
  7. boxorak

    boxorak Lovable Noob

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    >Name yourself "Zaphod Beeblebrox"
     
  8. Driskull98

    Driskull98 World's Only Snarler Fan

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    Name myself, "Tom Servo".
     
  9. Stonecrusher

    Stonecrusher jerk to storytelling

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    By the name of the Thirteen Primes, I dub thee...

    TITAN!

    Rise, and obey your nonexistent master!
     
  10. Argentenoboy

    Argentenoboy But what was even more like a drug was the drugs

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    Oblitus (Latin for forgotten)
    Blast radius
     
  11. Karhukjnsi

    Karhukjnsi Universal Wrestler

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    So THAT'S where "obliterate" comes from. Change "Spectre" to "Oblitus" plz.
     
  12. GreenCream

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    Servo! There we go, that wasn't so hard.

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    Although the name 'Tom' does have a bit of domestic charm.

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    Better do a quick WEAPONS CHECK to see if everything's in order... or apparently until you get ambushed. You are KNOCKED OUT.

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    ... What? Who are you?

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    1. Gears. Oh, Gears. I love his lightpiping in real life... but it looks a bit silly if the actual outline is used for an eyeglow. Oh well, time to experiment.
    2. Eh... still having a bit of trouble communicating flashbacks. And integrating the 'player character' moments with the more conventional photocomic bits.
    3. If it wasn't clear, his name is Servo.
     
  13. boxorak

    boxorak Lovable Noob

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    The MMS? Again?
    Why do I have the feeling that Servo is going to turn out to have interdimensional powers? :p 
     
  14. GreenCream

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    Well that sucked.
    You wake up on a DIAGNOSTIC TABLE with a SPLITTING HEADACHE. Who are these people? How did you get here? And why are there dents in the back of your head? ARE AFRICAN SWALLOWS NON-MIGRATORY?

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    Wait, what?

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    He can't hear you?
    Oh, that's right. Due to being produced as a DRONE, you have no VOICE-BOX. Well this is going to be inconvenient.

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    Hah! You understand that movie reference! What a jokester!
    Oh wait. You're supposed to have amnesia. Nevermind.

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    Survivors? What happened here?

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    Notes:
    1. Our vehicon friend here seems to have some awareness of the fourth wall!
    2. Breakaway. My favorite mold from the movie lines. And favorite headsculpt too! I've envisioned his voice as someone talking over a radio, with static before and after his message. Like a fighter pilot or something.
    3. I've always loved the silent protagonist thing from games like pokemon. I'll see how well it plays out and if it doesn't work, well, I guess someone will stumble over some voice-giving contraption.
     
  15. Stonecrusher

    Stonecrusher jerk to storytelling

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    >> Search for dead body, aquire voicebox
     
  16. Wars

    Wars Regular At Swerve's™

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    This is really interesting. I'll follow this one.

    :popcorn 
     
  17. Screamingjet

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    This looks interesting.

    Love to see where this goes
     
  18. Zendai

    Zendai Minicon Addict

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    I'll be watching.
     
  19. Karhukjnsi

    Karhukjnsi Universal Wrestler

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    Second.
     
  20. 2ndSndWve

    2ndSndWve Hen... Shin!

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