2D Artwork: Knock Outs one of those

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  1. spartan 3764

    spartan 3764 I'm a schoolgirl on the inside. TFW2005 Supporter

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    So im writing a story about Knock Out defecting after he is almost mortaly wounded by megatron and finds that he cares about more than himself,
    any way as i was writing the stopmotions script i got this idea and thought ided try it i allso put in the original to compare
    He allso somehow ends up with a human partner named Mark Fireheart who gets him involved in something else
     

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    I like the effect. But......"Gotta Them Pony Plots"? That makes no sense.
     
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    I totally agree. I like the changes to the screen cap, but the slogan is nonsensical.
     
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    Or is it?
     
  5. spartan 3764

    spartan 3764 I'm a schoolgirl on the inside. TFW2005 Supporter

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    well i could always change it to "Gotta love them saucy pony pics"
    i thought plot meant something near a horse rear
     
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    My god.......you're a R34 fan..............*shudders*



    Uhhhhh........can't you just post a pic of the effect without the phrase?
     
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    im not a r34 fan
     
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    Well......can't you just post a pic without the phrase. I really like the effect.
     
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    spartan 3764 I'm a schoolgirl on the inside. TFW2005 Supporter

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    just............STAY OUTTA MY SHED!
     
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    How'd you do that? Did you change the saturation? My brain is full of fuck. Especially on the slogan there...
    This. Though the phrase is... questionable, you have no right to demand he change his picture to suit your needs. Figure out how do to it yourself if you like it so much.
     
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    The member isn't demanding something, rather asking for it. There's no need to be so hostile here.
     

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