Ok, first update. I must apologise for the quality of some of these images, and I'll redo them later. (EDIT: Ok -10 years later they still are not redone, and can't be really!) I wanted to get the story properly underway so rushed these out.
Sweet update. and hey a universe swerve, so jetfire is maintaining a science team? Still some unanswered questions. Grimlock looks like he's just waiting for his hot pockets to finish cooking. great update.
No one would think that - please go ahead I'd look forward to seeing it. Someone else started a Skyfire comic a while ago but seem to have abandoned it. Hope the update is ok! The single shot was only because the rest of the photos were total rubbish... I had to use that one for all the shots.
This is gonna be interestin', indeed... especially since they haven't stated the number of the personnel in that science team (or what's left of it and why), leavin' Grimlock's present a mystery for a moment. Like the tensity about if he even belonged there yet or not.
I'd love to if I only had time. I'm going to college soon so I'm going to be away from my collection most of the time, so maybe I'll start on my winter break. Nice update, can't wait to see what's going on with Grimlock.
Well that certainly gives more insight into his personality. It worked out good that way though. Like he was using a hand-held communications device or something.
Nice!! I really DIG the theory and the concept here. So, it's only Jetfire, Perceptor and Swerve...and Grimlock materialized and dematerialized effect is top notch!
Not working for me, and if I try to open it in window of it's own, I get an "Address not valid" message. But I see the problem. Look: http://[b]/[/b]img221.imageshack.us/img221/9568/jetfirejournal18fj1.jpg. You've got a third forward slash in the web address. Take that out and it works.
I'm intrigued by this comic. You have a new reader. One comment though--the way you've set up some of the word balloons has me reading them in the wrong order. Left to right, top to bottom is the general rule of thumb when you've got multiple balloons in a panel. But otherwise, I'm enjoying this...you UK'ers seem to have a knack for interesting TF stories.
Next installment - the last for a little while. Hope to do the next installment next weekend. Have shifted from Imageshack to Photobucket as Imageshack wouldn't upload this batch for some reason.[2018 Edit - ha! Photobucket...]
I started out by wanted to make a comic that didn't feature Prime & Megs as the main players. If they appear at all, they'll be bit players at best. It's in his helmet - thought I'd put his additional bits to some use. Not precisely... Thank you The cast will be small for a while. Thank you - sorted now I hope! Thank you - hope you like the new mysteries today... Yes sorry about that, have now started to put them in a better order. Welcome aboard - hope I can keep up the intrigue.
