It's not funny! It's war! Well, more or less...

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  1. SPLIT LIP

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    This is my newest comic series, different than my old "funnies", since these are not specificaly funny. (though not serious to the Xtreme like Obsidian's lament)

    So yeah, new war series based on the Transformers I made a short while ago, decided to post them here. They're not funny "haha", but there is humour. Mostly, I just wanted to share, and maybe if anyone has ideas for future installments they could share.

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    To be continued. (Yeah, big surprise!)
     
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    Scout 2

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    Scout 3

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    Comments and crits are welcome.
     
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    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    Nice! :thumb :D 
     
  5. Grimlock_13

    Grimlock_13 Reformed Geewunner

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    Cool! I laughed at Arcee's "Fight them...with GUNS?" comment :lol 
     
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    Thanks! Glad you enjoyed them.

    Scout 4

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    Scout final.

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    Sorry for the last picture, I originaly planned an additional end panel but my camera crapped out on me.
     
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    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    Bring on 08 Bumblebee!
     
  9. Armorhide

    Armorhide Damn kids

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    Nice work :thumb 
     
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    Eric Per sempre marciamo.

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    :lol  Awesome. :) 
     
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    nooo! not the 08, not the 08!
     
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    CC BB isn't showing up quite yet, but he will.
     
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    DilaZirK Is bullheaded.

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    Well, I laughed at the first panel when Arcee and BB peeked out from their cover. :lol  :lol  :lol  I dunno, I just thought it looked funny.

    Very nice action scenes, especially so when they're accompanied by dialogue like yours. :thumb 
     
  14. Andersonh1

    Andersonh1 Man, I've been here a LONG time Veteran

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    I think the dialogue is good, and the story is generally easy to follow. One event follows the other in progression and everything makes sense.

    In other words, great job! I really enjoyed it! Let's see some more!
     
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    Sheba FF 1 Badman=Cyclonus

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    :D  :D  :D  :thumb  cool! :D 
     
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    DrGrim OBEY

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    This just makes me even sadder that I don't own a movie Bumblebee. He's impossible to find, I tell you! IMPOSSIBLE!!
     
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    Gears buh-buh-body ya Veteran

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    You spelled estranged wrong.
     
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    Thanks guys, and Cataclizm, when I put astranged in spell check, it gave me astringed, which I must've thought it was astranged.

    I'm in the process of making the new installments now.
     
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    This one is action-free, but it leads up to a bigger meaning.

    'Bot-hood.

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    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    Cool! :thumb 
     

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