2D Artwork: Is this worth finishing?

Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Art' started by LSB, Jul 3, 2005.

  1. LSB

    LSB Well-Known Member

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    I haven't drawn in a heck of a long time. I took my pencil and just started doodling when I made this.

    Should I finish it or are there too many prespective issues already? :banghead: 
     
  2. GALVATOM

    GALVATOM Well-Known Member

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    man u dont have a choice that pic is so awsome you have to finish it, ive drew armada prime heaps of times, you really nailed the head and arm. NICE WORK
     
  3. thefrozenred

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    The torso and head look fine to me. However, I think you should re-draw the waist and legs...they look awkward where they currently are. The forearm, too, should be redrawn...I'm not quite sure how, but perhaps make it bigger, thereby more in the foreground?

    It's up to you whether you'd like to finish it or not, though. Personally, I think that you should save the torso and head, and upper left arm, and redraw the lower body and left forearm. In any instance, good luck, keep practicing, and I'm sure much more well informed folks will be by here shortly to give you much better advice. :) 
     
  4. CdnShockwave

    CdnShockwave The Prince of Poses TFW2005 Supporter

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    Yep, you have to finish it. Or else the fuzzies will get you! Muahahahahahhaha!!



    It's really not bad. So finish it up so we can see the rest. :thumbs2: 
     
  5. Brave Magnus

    Brave Magnus Hecho en Argentina

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    You are in the right track, keep that way. Prime is looking great. But I have one question: what do you mean with 2006? We are still in 2005 :D 
     
  6. LSB

    LSB Well-Known Member

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    Yeah my mom pointed it out.

    The problems with working too much :) 
     
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    Soundwarp Next victim please TFW2005 Supporter

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  8. REDLINE

    REDLINE longer days, plz? Veteran

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    post count inflation, SW? hehehe j/k

    I for one would like to see the drawing finished!

    Andy
     
  9. LSB

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    Thank you everyone for your warm comments. It is nice to get some feedback on this doodle - I very much appreciate it.

    Since I did it on paper, it is hard to just go back and delete the legs and redo them - but I think I will keep practicing different poses and come back to this pose at a later time. However, I am bookmarking this thread and will definitely take care with the legs, etc.. Hopefully I can figure something out :) 
     

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