ironhide's apprentice episode #1

Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Fiction' started by ChevellePrime, Dec 9, 2010.

  1. ChevellePrime

    ChevellePrime NAIL

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    As the fully drenched with blood bayonet was pulled away from bludgeon deeply rusted chest cavity, the spark became extinguished. The blade back on its holster and ironhide looking up to the sky of the African forest, fill with more stars then there are sparks. Spending a transmission to a trainee he met in the NEST base while setting up the security for the all spark fragment. Luteniant Brawn, who is currently hunting rampage the psychopathic decepticon, receives the transmission from ironhide. The slick sheer slicing air sound filled the air in the desert. Brawn turned on his radar as say a large moving jet with an army of minions moving straight for him. Brawn quickly transformed into his army truck mode and used his highly powerful rifle ready to fire. He targeted in a very specific spot right where the jet will be flying. And now those jets stalked the sky and wiped the mind of all how oppose it
     
  2. SavageThunder

    SavageThunder 11th Doctor's Huntress

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    i like this a lot! just a tip here but uh each time u switch between characters make a new paragraph please1 other than that it shows promise even now!
     

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