Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by OptimusTOM, Jan 30, 2008.
I made lulz in my face.
Too much buildup. The punchline is great, but you could have cut the "ohmygod, what's going to happen!?" down by a lot.
Let me re-emphasize that middle bit, though - the punchline is great. Fuckin' funny. "Nnnnope. Hell naw." Lolz.
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